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Nov
17th
2018

A Look Behind the Scenes: Supervillian Flu · 7:21pm Nov 17th, 2018

Here's a special behind-the-scenes look at my writing process! This episode, we're covering the final chapter of The Supervillain Flu, as well as some deleted scenes from earlier chapters.

For those who are interested, the following are my unedited "jot these down so I remember later what I want to write" notes on the chapter (I suggest not reading this until after you've read the chapter, as it does not just contain spoilers, it is spoilers distilled):

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Dec
16th
2015

DELETED SCENE(Sweetie Belle's small problem) · 3:43am Dec 16th, 2015

At first I wanted to solve the situation between the cmc as quickly as possible and allow AB and Scootaloo come into the supporting roles they began as but that would be shortcutting a lot of character development plus story. So I opted to remove this from the latest chapter.

"So, you gonna tell us what Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon have you or not?" Applebloom asked in a slightly annoyed tone.

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May
20th
2016

2016 Scene of the 2nd Quarter · 10:17pm May 20th, 2016

It is complete! The beautiful and wonderful Painted Wave has done a beautiful and wonderful job on the Scene of the Quarter, which was voted to be Velvet kissing Perennial (from The Velveteen Mask). And here it is!

Oct
17th
2017

Cool fight scene · 5:52pm Oct 17th, 2017

A matrix reloaded ripoff is going to be in the next chapter of Return of the great mighty poo.

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Oct
15th
2015

What happened after the last chapter of 'To Reassemble A Broken Heart' · 10:21pm Oct 15th, 2015

So, like some of you wanted, here's what happened after the wedding in the last chapter. Sunset goes to the human world and shows the photos and videos to her friends. Again, spoilers, story, blah blah...
Note: This takes place before EG 3.

Sunset sat on the school's entrance stairs with her friends, holding her phone to show them what she had captured from Celestia's wedding. After showing them the video of the wedding ceremony, Rarity and Fluttershy shed some tears of joy.

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Jan
29th
2016

DELETED SCENE(Sweetie Belle's small problem) · 6:28am Jan 29th, 2016

You know, it pained me to remove this due to me having planned this reunion scene since the time travel portion of the fic but in the end, adding her into the story again by this point is not really needed due to the fact that Sweetie Belle after has a wide cast of support characters.

"You know, your looking really nervous right now. You should lay off the caffeinated drinks." A calm but nerdish voice said.

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Nov
13th
2016

Scaleless alterations and deleted scenes. pt. 2 · 4:10am Nov 13th, 2016

So folk want to know what's gotten cut or altered during the course of 'Friendship is Scaleless' up to now. While no doubt this list is nowhere near complete as I'll no doubt continue to change things as time goes on, hopefully this gives some insight as to how my thought process and reaction to reader commentary works towards producing each chapter:

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Report Limescale · 202 views · #deleted scenes
Nov
13th
2016

Apologizes for the delayed chapter + a deleted scene · 6:07am Nov 13th, 2016

I've been distracted these past few weeks by one thing or another (including the USA elections), and as a result suffered a bit of writer's block. Also, I wrote a whole segment featuring Luna visiting Mabel's dream, and was working on her visiting the others--when one of my editors, MyOwnNameWasTaken, made me realize that those scenes were adding nothing but unneeded drag to the story. As Mabel's dream was the only scene finished, I'm

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Mar
22nd
2017

The More Things Change Deleted Scenes: PROLOGUE and INTRODUCTIONS · 9:47pm Mar 22nd, 2017

As a kid, I always really liked watching deleted scenes and commentary tracks on movies. Even today, I really like seeing where stories could have gone and what kind of things could have happened to them. So, as I write the Equiforce series, I'll expand on each chapter in the comments and display deleted scenes on my blog.

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Report Kai Creech · 73 views · #Deleted Scenes
Oct
13th
2015

Aaaaand another scene form the sequel to 'To Reassemble A Broken Heart' · 9:59pm Oct 13th, 2015

Again, I had to write something, or I would go crazy :pinkiecrazy: And of course, this may be spoiler-y for the first story if you haven't read it yet.
This time, it's a scene with Twilight :twilightsmile: Sure, this may or may not make it to the actual story. Consider it an EG movie short :pinkiehappy:

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Report Henry101 · 126 views · #scene #sequel
Jul
18th
2016

Real Places Inspiring Forest of "Will to Survive" · 3:08pm Jul 18th, 2016

Now that I've finished "Will to Survive," I'm planning on writing several shorter fanfics in the coming weeks. Before I move on, I thought I'd give a sort of "Behind the Scenes" of "Will to Survive" for anyone interested. When I was considering the forest of Underworld, I performed some research to craft the jungle. Many of the seemingly fictional plants, beaches, and bodies of water used in the story are actually inspired by real places. Unfortunately, I'm having difficulty using the "Insert

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Jan
21st
2016

Another deleted scene from "Sweetie Belle's Small problem" · 6:45am Jan 21st, 2016

This was removed due to the fact that while I loved the idea of a secret all teenage pony club hidden right under the residents noises, it literally added nothing to the overall plot of the story and I doubt I would ever came back to this location in my fic again so in the end, I decided to remove it.

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Jan
29th
2016

DELETED SCENE(Sweetie Belle's small problem)(Rude Rarity) · 9:50am Jan 29th, 2016

"And no funny business." The unicorn added much to the chagrin of Scootaloo whom blushed heavily and gave her an offended glare.

"The buck do you take me for?! She just tried to-" Scootaloo began to snap only to see the wide grin on Rarity's face and scowled upon realizing it was a bad joke. "Not… Cool." Scootaloo said hotly before she resumed trotting up the stairs.

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Report Deathsia · 187 views · #deleted scene
May
1st
2018

Behind the scenes. · 7:53pm May 1st, 2018

So I've started working on a back story recently. I can't tell you much as I haven't really worked on it but it's kind of a secret project. I will be trying to make the next chapter for No Matter Where. I might not get to until next week. Until, enjoying looking at this duck.

Report Clean Karma · 60 views · #behind #the #scenes
Oct
11th
2016

Update on first Chapter and a deleted Scene · 6:21am Oct 11th, 2016

Still working on the first chapter - work has been slow, especially since it is sometimes hard to decide between things to keep and to remove completely, because they do not fit into the "flow". I hope I made the right decision with the last thing I changed.

Still, the scene I deleted contained a nice theory. I don't want to remove it completely, so I will just post it here:

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Apr
13th
2017

About "The Invisible Alicorn" · 3:07am Apr 13th, 2017

Over the years I’ve gotten occasional comments to my stories on this site regarding my use of mind control as a plot device (especially that one chapter in Best of All Possible Worlds where Celestia admits her fault in practicing it on not only her ponies, but on herself).

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Report McPoodle · 391 views · #Behind the Scenes
Mar
30th
2017

IRL Update and DELETED SCENES: A Slow Start. · 1:53am Mar 30th, 2017

So, I finally got a job! I'm a factory worker at Imfac making brake lines and cables, which is boring, but I can do it and it pays money. I'm really happy I can finally be a functional adult again. Thanks for those of you who said you were praying for me, and anyone who just thought nice things about me. I really can't express how glad I am to have something. You may remember back in January that I

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Report Kai Creech · 125 views · #Deleted Scenes
Oct
5th
2015

Just a scene from 'To Reassemble A Broken Heart's sequel · 10:27pm Oct 5th, 2015

First of, if you haven't read To Reassemble A Broken Heart, then this maybe spoiler-y, you've been warned.

I don't know why I'm even doing this. Maybe just to remind myself of writing, because I haven't written anything for a month or so. My school is preventing me from doing anything good on this site :ajsleepy:

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Report Henry101 · 153 views · #scene #song #sequel
Jun
30th
2016

Behind the Scenes of Writing Legacy of the Greatest · 7:54am Jun 30th, 2016

As I've said in a previous story of mine where I detailed a lot of behind-the-scenes development, below is basically me rambling on about things that didn’t make it in the story, things that got changed, and so on. I always think Word of God interviews and the like are cool, but similarly dislike it when authors dripfeed stuff (see: J.K. Rowling and her releasing new tidbits nearly a decade after the Harry Potter series is done). Feel free to ask anything as well in the comments, and I’ll try

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Aug
21st
2015

Deleted... Chapter? ("Deep Blue, Part 2") · 12:57am Aug 21st, 2015

It's true! There really was a deleted chapter! Or, that is to say, a pretty different version of "Deep Blue, Part 2." After writing it and having my editor take a look at it, I decided it needed some heavy rewrites. Since a lot of it is the same, I won't post it all here; it would be tedious to look through and compare. Instead, I'll post some differences followed by a large scene that was cut entirely.

Changes:

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