Pony Talk Episode 12-Sunset's Element · 9:00pm Jan 24th, 2016
There has been much debate about what Element of Harmony Sunset Shimmer should be. Well here are my thoughts on the matter.
There has been much debate about what Element of Harmony Sunset Shimmer should be. Well here are my thoughts on the matter.
I know I said I wouldn’t review these episodes until they aired in the States, but that was before I learned that Discovery Family plans on reopening the season with another double feature on the fifth. I really don’t like doing multiple episodes per blog. Doing so dilutes the attention either gets and keeps me from exploring their deeper design potential. For those of you still gamely avoiding spoilers (and best of luck to you,) I’ll say no more here and link back to this blog next week.
Hey, so the story's not dead. Between writer's block, college, employment, and the relative unavailability of my co-author a lot of the time, it's been written on-and-off (but mostly stagnating) for the whole year and a half since the Fluttershy/Terriermon chapter. I put a lot of planning into the story, and I'll be damned if it goes to waste.
Anyway, here's the visual companion for this chapter. Nothing extensive.
I finally finished it! Thank you everyone for being so patient! The past few weeks have sucked ASS! Do me a solid and leave me some feedback on this next chapter, please and thank you?
I know I said I'd be posting one more chapter then doing massive rewrites but...
I really wanna just continue the story for a bit since you all were so patient with me. I'm already a 1000 words in on my next chapter. What is everypony's opinion so far? Are you finding the trial interesting? I wanted to take a small break from all the combat since it takes so much time to write and describe everything. Feel free to message me your predictions, but please don't post spoilers publicly.
(Please start at 1:10 on video)
No matter how hard I tried, this chapter just keeps coming up short. Everything I try to add, breaks the flow of the chapter. I wanted to lengthen it, but there honestly isn't a good place to do it. I'll come back to it later I guess.
Next chapter is going up as long as I don't accidentally sleep through prime time!
Since the story will be starting soon, I figured I should show you which characters will be in the focus of this story. If you read "The Legend of Friendship" all the way until Season 4, then you should recognize at least one character here.
The return of Pony Toys in a new format and an update on my pony videos in general.
Didn't see much in the way of editing. This chapter still feels a tad messy for me, so maybe I'll come back to it.
(EDIT)
Alright, there. Spruced up some descriptions and explained some more stuff. I'm in this middle ground of wanting to explain Taraskan protocol, and not wanting to bore most of you with ideas that you won't care about.
The show is back and so is BB to talk about the stellar start to the second half of season seven!
I'm on chapter 5 currently for editing. Ugh some of these chapters are just so...sloppy. Like some sentences are bland and disorganized, others make me wonder how they got past my editing. In my defense, I was still rather new at writing.
Got a bit of work done on the next chapter and I finished editing chapters two and three!
This dialogue was irritating because there's a ton of dialogue that has to happen at this time. I tried to break it up with a few brief moments of interactions between characters and backstory, but it still feels dull to me. This is also one of those ties where I wanted to hint at something, while secretly planning something else. There's still that worry of it coming across as bad writing, but owell.
Help me decide! I'll leave you guys to vote which I should do!
1: Lord of The Elements (Element origins) [Short story explaining the elements' histories]
OR
2: Ending Rarity [Pinkie has a conflict with her friends over who poisoned Rarity's cupcake]
AAAGGGHHH! I've never tried to describe people doing choreographed dances before. Describing the beat of a drum and fire twirling, I just...uuuggghhh. I already wrote everything in the chapter that isn't dance/music related and it feels like I just have this massive hurdle.
Hey there Guardians!
I’m sure many of you, like myself, have all been having a great time playing all the new content we got with the launch of The Witch Queen expansion. I’ve been loving it so far and it’s blown me away with all the content they packed into this thing.
I realized I misworded some of the depictions of where he is. It was crystal clear in my head , but this is how you learn hehe.