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A new chapter, yes! Perfect moment to login to fimfiction.
I haven't read the latest chapter yet, too scared to read! Let me know if I need to be emotionally prepared!
***I'm sad Pinchy was killed off-screen. I had actually gotten to like him. It would have been a cool animal companion in the wastelands.
***I'm worried that Angel doesn't have the statuettes with her while in Sanctuary. I fear she may do something stupid without them to provide a moral compass. Especially knowing there is a raider in the complex. PLS don't do something stupid Angel.
***I'm liking Deliverance. Hope the red zebra joins the gang so we get to see more of him, I wanna know what his deal is besides "find big old treasure". Plus he would make a nice contrast with Jack in the team's dynamics.
***I'm curious about Angel's dream. The "stabbing in the back" implication that it may be a metaphor for an upcoming betrayal.
Borsuq pls don't make Aite into Scope 2.0
D'awwwww
D'awwwww x2
Oh boy, the callback from the Stable Guardian. I guess that answers what happened with him. After uniting the Talons and Rangers into defeating the Raiden Queen, he settled down and formed the Mustangs.
oh thanks again! that hit the spot! I may have not noticed it before but you manage the transitions very well. Got me lost into reading for an hour without realizing it. Very nice plot twists and turns as always :D
Btw that last part, was a reference to Arroyo from Fallout 2?
"Reese, who you might all know from the comment section under each chapter with all the grammar mistakes myself and all the others who go through those chapters somehow miss pointed out^^ Hopefully this means you'll finally get a chapter with perfect grammar for a change "
Haaaaah... yeah, I think perfection might be a bit much to expect, sorry. :D
I've been on both sides of this before, official editor/proofreader and person in the comments, and typos, well, they are sneaky things. Proofreading just seems to make their number asymptotically approach zero, at best, but never actually reach it.
Thanks for the compliment, though. :)
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Well, I don't know just what your tolerances or sensitivities might be, but I'm guessing you should be fine here? Sorry in advance if it turns out I guessed wrong.
Extremely happy to see this updated, as its one of my favorite stories on this while site now. Now onto content for the chapter:
Aite may not be as innocent as we readers think, or we would think that if Deliverance haddent revealed his cards so early. Only two logical outcomes are foreseen here.
1. Deliverance is trying to sow unease and discontent in the group (for an unknown reason) or
2. The more likely senario deliverance and Aite came to an agreement of some kind while they were alone. There is a large gap of time where its just those two together, and with the bodies being gone, the vision for Angel, and how Aite WASNT being nosy as i think shes noticed Angel being sneaky/emotion changes before, they might be trying to goad the good doctor to do something. They only have our good bats word on what really happened, and she claims ignorance for a 30 second window, and post battle its just those 2 coming to sanctuary. Ofc i also dont want scope 2.0 but im keeping an open mind haha
Tldr the gap of time plus aite and deliverance being the only possible culprits makes a dangerous setting for poor Angel.
Other than that love the story and the people behind making it happen, till next time Borsuq and family
Why do I get the feeling that the Doctor is going to end up in bed with either Aite or Deliverance? Maybe I'm just reading too much into their interactions.
Awesome update!
Oh wow, took me a while to get around to reply
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Thank you for enjoying my story^^
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Hm, as far as I'm aware there wasn't anything emotionally scarring in this chapter. But then again, my two favorite fictions are Warriors (basically Game of Thrones for children but with cats) and Project Horizons ('nuff said), so I might be a tad more resilient (he said, ignoring how unhappy he was just yesterday because during his big re-read of Warriors he got to the point where his favorite couple there broke up, despite knowing they'll be together again at the end of the next book)... Anyway, if by now you still hadn't checked this chapter I think it's safe to read.
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Technically he wasn't killed off-screen, If you follow the events after Angel's horn got shot, her consciousness is shifting between her body and Pinchy's, until he gets killed. Couldn't draw too much attention to the moment at the time due to the pain Angel was in, though.
Angel: Do something stupid? Me? Oh sweetie, you say the most ridiculous of things!
I'm glad you're enjoying Deliverance, he's probably the character that went through the longest stage of "planning" in my head, with many different ideas shaping him during that time. I'm quite happy with how he turned up^^
I promise nothing!
I found it very humorous that people seemed to think the point of that story was to talk about Misery, when in fact it was just to set up the Mustang Tribe.
.., Or was it!? Nah. But maybe...
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Happy to provide entertainment and thank you for your praise^^
Yep^^ As I stated a few times, Fallout 2 is actually my favorite game from that series, so don't be surprised if more references to that game pop up^^
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Yeah, typos are sneaky indeed. But still, I reread this chapter just now and I couldn't spot any^^
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Glad you're enjoying my story^^
Oh sure, the bat pony bounty hunter assassin must be scheming something...
Thanks Next chapter coming soon^^
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... I feel like this says something about me if my writing gets interpreted like this
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Thanks
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Hah, well, past experience even with my editing leads me to suspect that there's still something lurking somewhere, but thanks. :)
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Oh yeah fallout 2 is great, I struggle to play it because back then I didnt know any english so I had to use very buggy fan patches :D
Hope you got a happy new year and many updatesto come
Only one chapter left. This has been the best fallout Equestria fic I have read.
I FUCKING KNEW IT, great chapter btw