Dec
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2019
The Stars Revolt: Fanfiction · 6:47pm Dec 26th, 2019
Shepherd: "Dash? I'm picking up a theme with your Daring Do fanfics."
Dash: "That they're all awesome and amazing?"
Shepherd: "... Nooo. Try again."
Dash: "That they're all awesome?"
Shepherd: "No."
Dash: "Good?"
Shepherd: "No."
Dash: "Okay?"
Shepherd: "No."
Dash: "Readable?!"
Shepherd: "Not even a little. No, what I noticed was that you reach a scene promising sex and then you just have the characters hugging a lot before falling asleep."
Dash: "Well DUH. That's what sex IS. I'm not stupid!"
Shepherd: "..."
Dash: "... You're supposed to agree with me!"
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Ouch. Harsh.
Granted, sometimes that's what someone needs to hear, but maybe not so blunt.
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To be fair, typing is hard with hooves...
You think this is actually a very clever way of putting the moves on Shepherd? Like now he has to explain sex to her and Dash asks him to show her since she learns better by doing?
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It's quite possible.
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Clever girl.
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Although, it is also possible that she just doesn't know...