A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner Changes. · 3:32am Jun 23rd, 2017
Hey, Guys.
Raptormon132 here. I wanted to give you all an update that my story, "A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner" is going to receive some changes soon.
Ever since the post of the Rage Review of my story, I have come to notice that there are some things in the story that I may have to fix. I don't agree with most of what they said, but I do sort of see their point of view on things. So some time in future, in response to this, I'm going to make some changes and alterations to the story to hopefully fix the so called confusion.
For example, I planing to add things into some chapters to explain how the character, Abacus Sum was proven innocent, including things that the character, Turncoat did to prove what was going on between Hoofstrong Prison Center, and the corrupted Canterlot Investigation Force.
It will not be easy, and will take a while, but I will try not to change it too much, and it will still be the amazing story you guys know and love. Especially since there is the squeal being written by Equestria Girls Fan 94 even as we speak, and the two or three other prequel stories I plan to write someday to look forward to.
That's all. 
Good luck for it!
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Thanks. I'm going to need it.
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Your Welcome!
RR is overly harsh because that's their shtick, the only thing they pointed out that I really agreed with was when Luna showed the graphic details of what happened to impressionable children at the request of an emotionally compromised stallion. (in case anyone hasn't read it) Other than that I loved the story and I wouldn't take them too seriously.
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True. But there are things that need to be explained better, some paragraphs, and whatnot.
Also, I'm going to keep the scene where Luna shows Abacus's graphic memories to everyone, including the children, because that's part of the story.
But in one of the stories I'm hoping to write in future, Lawful Eye, Celestia, and Luna would lecture Abacus about what they were asked by him to show almost the whole, and the emotional effect it could have on the men, women, and children in Ponyville. Abacus of course would say that he doesn't care, for they had all made him suffer, and it was only fair that he made them suffer in return, and that he was never returning to Ponyville anyway, so it wouldn't have mattered. When Celestia and Luna would mention to Abacus that Scootaloo and Apple Bloom had saw it too, he would begin to regret that those two had to see it.