I'm the guy that wrote the weird Human on pony smut...Should I Get More Lewd In My Next Clop? · 10:52pm Jan 30th, 2017
Hey guys... I had a quick Question for you all. As you know I have a story coming up and the first two chapters are almost done, but the next chapter is the clop. So I was wondering if maybe I should go into more fetish territory for it. Normally my stuff is kind of vanilla, but I was wonder what you guys think I should do, or what do you want me to do? For a little background on the story, it's a romance clop with some plot and character development. It's supposed to be a very loving kind of a feel good story, so stuff like rape or bondage can't really happen. But would you guys mind if I went a little more extreme with the sex? What I mean by that is, stuff like cock/musk worship, cum inflation, hoof/feet worship, ass worship, spanking, squirting, or anything else you can think of. For the stories sake, stuff like vore, scat, diapers and other similar kinks can't happen.
Basically, my question is, how extra would you guys like me to go? Or should I just stick with a more vanilla scene.
I can’t guarantee that I will put any fetishes in that you guys suggest, but I would like to hear your thoughts.
Also I should say that I am going to give my Patreon supporters early access to the story once the cover art is done. So if you want to read it earlier, you can support me there if you want. 
It doesn't matter the amount you pitch in, everyone there will get to read it. https://www.patreon.com/Pusspuss But if you can't donate, or just don't want to, thats perfectly fine. It's still going up on this site for free for everyone!
How you've previously went about it is fine and more enjoyable to read than nearly any other clopfic on this site, so I'm gonna have to say stick with vanilla
Pinkie is clearly a looner, so it exists in-universe.
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Redheart inflating and playing with rubber gloves?
My vote goes to "Yes" with "(Consensually) Stick it in her pooper." and maybe a little ahegao ("Fucked silly face").
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So thats one vote for vanilla. Honestly, if I do got with a fetish, I might make it some what light so others can still enjoy it, but we will see what everyone says.
Go with what works for the characters and the story. The best erotica isn't just about fetishes, it's about people [ponies] and how they feel. If something more extreme matches what the characters would do, go with it.
For example, though you may consider it to be vanilla, Chase Me works so well because it wasn't just about the predation fetish, but about two characters experimenting with that fetish in the context of their relationship. It was full of nice little human [equine] touches.
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So some pooper sex and a orgasm face?
If you turn anymore lewd, you'll officially be the God/Goddess of Lust, Love, Patron of all who are considered "dirty and/or dirty minded" and all that relates to these subjects mentioned
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I feel like Chase Me was more extreme but still pretty vanilla lol. But yeah I know what you mean, thats why I said stuff like rape and things can't work for this story, but I could easily put in like a hoof fetish or cum inflation and stuff like that if I really wanted. So idk... I don't want to go into anything thats too unreal, but I think I can stretch it a little for this one.
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That's my goal.
4403077 More or less, yeah. If you need inspiration for the latter, just look up an image search for ahegao. It's not just a face, it's a state of mind of being fucked so hard and thoroughly, that one cannot think of anything more at that moment than sex and cannot do anything more than drool and babble incoherently.
4403088 Well, good luck and take some alcohol along for the journey there!
And it's on the house! Free of charge!
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Cum inflation, spanking, and squirting!
Take some of the more vanilla aspects and up the kink level
Anal!
I can't bring myself to tell any artist what to write or what to draw.
Just create what you like, and I'm sure the rest of us will love it !
femdom!
4403086 Yeah, if it obviously breaks physics/chemistry/anatomy then it can detract from the suspension of disbelief that's essential to any story but especially filth. On the other hand, taking the opportunity to do things that only an equine body could do is a good thing.
It's up to you, of course. You are the master.
I see the interest, but for you I would keep it mostly vanilla. It suits you better.
If you want to take a dip in the darkside maybe make it humorous and/or pleasurable in someway for the one on the receiving end. Like a Ponut Bandit!
No ponies ass is safe, or left unsatisfied!
I love spanking, spanking is good. Other than that, Vanilla is preferable. Or, at least really light kinks. I'm not into most things out there.
P-put... put a dick on her.
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Touch hooves.
That is entirely up to you.
Whatever you decide is fine, but cum inflation and spanking are neat :D
I love your style of writing, so any (non-dark/mood-breakingly absurd or gross) fetishes that work with whatever story you're telling would be welcome. If it's friendly, happy, and consensual, I'm probably OK with it. If the story works better with vanilla, keep it vanilla.
I've liked the stories you've put out so far, and I'm not a fan of the kinks you mentioned...
That being said, write what you want. If the story contains stuff I don't like, I just won't read it.
I'd be fine with pretty much all of those except the inflation.
I will agree with most of whats already said.
You vanilla work is, for a lack of a better word, fucking hot. Chase Me was great as far as light kink goes.
Spanking is light and easy. Could progress to paddling. I dont get foot/hoof worship. Cum inflation while great, works better more for absurdity. Depending on what level of realism or not you want to go with, I dont really see that working. Squirting is always good. Now given that this is a Nurse, you could go for a more edgier fetish. Needle play. Cock worship would be interesting. You write some amazing fellatio scenes. Femdom was mentioned, and that might be something to explore. Though again with Redheart she may be more submissive. Depending on the level of dominance her job requires and how much she would want to get a break from that. Oh breath play perhaps. Though that might depend on pony size and more on the strength of her partner. Ponys got some strong necks. Light bondage could be doable. Belts or scarves, more for the impression of but not going so far as to be heavy rope work. Then again you can do all that without bindings. Just telling them they cant move and them believing/wanting to fulfill the order would keep them in place. Sounding might be to extreme. Fisting would be kinky but nothing to heavy. If your partner for her is sturdy enough, rough body play. Leave them nice and bruised all over.
I could keep going but I got some other things to do.
Looking forward to reading this.
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I don't grok. Yeah, balloon fetish is pretty vanilla, but I happen to know it's pretty common among both bronies and furries.
I imagine Pinkie at least would like to have a human help her inflate a helium bouquet, tie them to her crotchtits, playfully bat at them, and then bounce on and frolic among them.
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Edit: Wait, I can say more. Bon Bon has an erotic dream where Twilight's experimental growth potion accidentally gets spilled on Scary and then he has romantic cuddly light-bondage spider sex with her.
Write whatever you feel like writing Puss. Most of us will enjoy it either way.
Personally, I wouldn't mind if you add some spanking to your stories. After all, ponies do have some loveable tushes that just beg for a good smack
. I honestly dont get the whole inflation thing. I think its just odd. No offense to anyone who likes that sorta stuff. Anything else I'm pretty mellow about.
And yes, please stay away from those extremes you mentioned, because ick
on all accounts. I would have to dislike you on principle. 
I'd say cock worship, futa, and cum inflation.
Pretty much what you already said I would like to see from you. I already love your vanilla stuff (Chase Me being debatable between different people) and I want to see what your stories would be like if you went further.
I think those fetishes you mentioned are perfectly acceptable since they dont fall into the "extreme" category. Pretty sure the extreme stuff is the things you listened at the end.
Spanking and ass worship are probably your best bet in my opinion but other people may not agree with that so go with whatever you feel people will like
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You would you perv.
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I think thats like three votes for anal now haha.
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I'm just getting ideas and seeing what my audience would like.
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That's actually already in it, haha.
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I wouldn't go to crazy with it if I did it, but we will see.
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I do want to try and add the cum inflation... but I don't want to go nuts with it... Like... just a small part what shows her womb being flooded, but idk.
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Oh it shall be.
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Haha, well all those are nice ideas. I'm still thinking about it but I will keep all these in mind.
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Haha, you would!
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Maybe...
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Oh no I was talking about cum inflation. Like... the girl takes a lot of cum.
Just b yourself
Honestly though, feel free to experiment with fetish stuff if you think it fits the scene, and if it reads good on your end go with it. Whatever you do you really shouldn't force yourself to write more racey stuff if you're not feeling it. By the same metric if you feel that vanilla doesn't work, and it needs more spice, then go for it. You've shown that you have pretty good instincts with this stuff, so just roll with them.
If you want suggestions I'll say that dock play and a bit of tail pulling are fun tooi1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/975/912/034.jpg
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A lot of people seem to like the spanking... Not sure if it will work in this story, but we will see.
Inflation is weird, but I am talking about cum inflation. And when I said that I mean like, he just cums insider her a lot. Nothing extreme, but a lot lol.
Well you are safe... I don't think I would ever do those lol.
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I might do all those, expect the futa haha.
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Maybe one day I will do just a really extreme fetish story lol.
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I think those are more weird, haha. But they can all be extreme if they are taken far enough.
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There will be a moment for ass worship, so that might happen.
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Haha, thanks. I do think I want to add the dock play though... that sounds like fun and it works with the story.
I like some anal and cock worship, but if you could squeeze in some pet play (which is NOT the same as BSDM) i would be a happy man.
Lewd, ledw is good! :D
4403631 I mean most people here have already said what I would like to see from you, along with what you already listed off. I also have no shame in what I read so whatever you end up writing I'll end up reading it anyways.
Max is also correct in what he says.
But if you really want me to make a list I can; it'll just be a very long list.
4403631 Well hey, if it doesn't work for this story, then there's always a next time right.
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In all seriousness, do what best fits the story and/or your vision. If you want to go lewder, you can. If you don't, you need not have to. If it's a specialized fetish, I say you should still go for it. It might actually be in character for it to be a specific fetish...or not. All in all, just do what you think is best for the story/clop.
Very kind and loving... so, vanilla from the start, and maybe something more as the time progresses? I'm perfectly fine with vanilla, but from your description of the story, I think it would be better if you didn't go into fetish stuff immediately. That's just me though.
4403605 Well, you still have your amazing artwork to get ideas from. That threesome with Anon, Velvet and Night Light. The Sequel to "A Mare Named Octavia" with Vinyl, Anon and maybe more of Octavia. Rainbow's pissing and virginity loss. Either way, you'll come up with something good and lewd, and we'll be waiting to read it!
You said inflation. I might be the only one that asks for it, but I would like cum inflation very much.