Update on the story with polls · 6:55pm Jul 27th, 2016
Just a heads up, don't ready this blog unless you've already read the recent part 4 update to the Changeling Invasion fic.
Anyway, the main point covered in the recent update was the changeling officially moving out of the hive and in with the ponies in Equestria. There are a lot of changes and events to pony society that happen over the course of this and I just wanted to warn you I'm probably not going to cover it all in the next chapter. There's a ton to mention with all the story lines and characters this fic has brought up, so if there's any particular thing you want to remind me to mention just comment below.
But speaking of the next chapter or chapters, I was thinking it would be fun if I had my followers vote in a poll for what they would want to see done. I might write about the most voted option... I might not, who knows? First time trying something like this.
The first poll is concerning Starlight Glimmer, the likely target for the next section.
http://www.strawpoll.me/10848169
(Yes, I know the first option in there is long overdue in a story like this)
The second poll is just me wondering who the new Pony Changeling society should target next to add to their club.
http://www.strawpoll.me/10848192
If any... comment below if you think they should just stop. If I did decide to continue this story line, I probably would start a squeal fic for it as this one is getting pretty long itself.
I don't think they should go recruiting
Also you need to clarify your poll. I don't even remember what Suri did
4116323 Suri was the one mare who decided she would rather be a dominant than a submissive, and currently owes Rarity.
Heh. You probably already know what I would like to see happen concerning Blueblood and where he might have gone. However, that doesn't have to be instead of the options discussed. It can be covered relatively easily, I'd say. Also, I love this story to pieces, despite how I keep ragging on the Changelings—who are, admittedly, the one thing irritating to no end with how easy they have it!
4117252 I gotta say though, I added that 2nd option to the first poll from what you said you wanted to see. But I could have sworn people would be springing to see a changeling character other than Chrysalis in the story. Would have been a good way to show all the things a changeling went through and how they function.
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It was a tough choice, to be honest. Another Changeling besides Chrysalis would've provided us with an interesting perspective and I'm sad that we'll probably won't get one with the way the poll's going. However, Glimmy-Glimm doing silly crazy stuff for silly reasons is just too funny-sexy a concept not to go for it!
Lets see. The main 6 of course, the princesses, C.U.N.T. Maybe Coco Pommel, Spitfire and perhaps some from Suris arc. Like big mac, Braeburn, Double Diamond, Party Favor, Sugar Belle and Night Glider. Daring Do and what happened to the Pie sisters?
Ok thats a long list. But yeah. It is a list I guess.
when it says humans (CHS and shadowbolts), does that include the Dazzlings? i voted for dragons because i wanna see ember with Spike. also to see garble get rekt. zebras were a close second.
i wish i knew what the third option on Starlight's poll meant before i voted. only found out afterwards.
4118168 Yeah, I would probably throw the dazzlings in there. I know there's a whole lesson on properly wording your polls that I just ignored when making these things.
4118434 There is something that keeps nagging in the back of my head.
Everything looks a little to "happily ever after" here, I would like to read a little more of drama, for example a couple of ponies that don't get together after everything that has transpired, like we see a mare that returns back to Equestria after having lots of "fun" in the changeling hive only to realices that there is noone waiting for her, the reason is her last lover realised that she didn't really tried to get back to him and was oblivious of all the things that he had to endure while she enjoyed her long vacation.
Something in the lines of this:
- Hi sweety I am back
- Oh my Celestia you are back! after all this months! are you ok, did the changeling hurt you?!
- Oh not at all, I have a lot of fun while I was in the hive
- Um...What?
- Yes! I was having a blast having lots, and lots, AND LOTS of sex there
- A-are you serious?! I was worry sick about you! I have to endure a lot of shit during this fucking invasion!
- What?
- I have to leave home, scaven for food trying to reach some level of civilization in this fucking place, and during all this time you were happily sucking changeling cock instead of trying to reach me, or just sending a fucking letter so I know that you were OK!
- Yes honey I know I should have contacted you but don't worry I am here now and we can be together again and have lots of sex I will be your sex slave and I will do everything you say, what do you think?
- ......
- Honey?
- No...
- What?
- I SAY NO! I DON'T WANT TO EVER SEE YOU AGAIN YOU FUCKING SLUT!
- B-b-but sweetheart I love you I will be your slave and th...
- NO! After all this time you think you can come back and say all of this shit you where doing and then act like nothing happened?! I AM SO OUT OF HERE!
- No pleace honey I LOVE YOU! I WILL BE YOUR SEX SLAVE!!!
- GO SUCK A CHANGELING COCK YOU FUCKING SLUT!!!
I'll be laughing my ass off if the dragons are next.
I mean, just imagine Torch's reaction.
4120553 I'll admit, clop scenes with him would be rather difficult to write lol.
4119595 To be fair, they did literally come crawling back.
Hmmm Starlight turning other ponies into her sex slaves does sound really hot. You should consider doing an alternative version of when the mane 6 are sent to her village.
Or maybe an on the run Starlight ends up gathering Trixie, Suri, Gilda, Lightning Dust, and others who felt wronged by the mane 6 and plot revenge. The sexy kind.
4120630 lololol Yeah but they enjoy doing it now XD
I've been following his post for a bit, just to see the outcome and i'm surprised how dragons and CHS have been neck and neck all the way. I kinda want them to tie, since they are both great options.
By the way, there's four relatively known youngsters we haven't learned anything about: Babs Seed, Twist, Snips, and Snails. Are/were they off hiding someplace together? Seeing as how they're the dorks (Snips and Snails) the dweebs (Twist) and the former bully outcast (Babs), they might've decided to grudgingly band together for protection.
I say make a epilogue and end it here and now.
4167853 Eh, you're probably right. I've been thinking lately I don't have enough in me anymore to come up with another 4 parter. Leave that for another time.
4172549 Well the way I see it with Blueblood temporarily out of the picture you have no threat left unless the stallions decided enough is enough. And since you are not going in that direction they're is nothing left to oppose the Lings. So the story in itself is finished. You could just make a different story with Clop-Shots with some of the characters the readers decide to see. Or save up for a sequel.
4172561 There's still plenty of conflict to be had even without Blueblood in the picture.
For one thing, no one is really asking what happened to all the saved griffons and zebras after their minds were freed from the spell by the changelings...
4176792 I'm pretty sure they were either dropped off to their homes or made cock-sleeves and have a place in the Ling Hive. Or they probably want revenge on the stallions. But no offence but that pony has been beaten to death. I mean what would they have to gain by running in and castrating the stallions? Let's face it the God-Lings do not wish for that to happen. Killed/In pain stallions are bad for business.
Edit: You're right but Blueblood is your biggest opponent, Concerning Chrysalis.
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I'd have a suggestion regarding that topic. If you want to hear it, should I post it here (in spoilers), or woud you prefer a PM?
On that same note. A Changling OC is very difficult to make. Especially for your kind of story. What I mean by this is, you've tried to sell us on the idea that these creatures are instinctively driven and know the arts of seduction because they understand emotion like no other creature. So a changling OC capable of thoughts and feelings means they can think for themselves. This will destroy the entire narrative of Ling's behavior and render any type of favor for the lings to be null and void. It'll open up doors to other questions. Like,
"If they. Can think and feel for themselves then didn't they know the stallions never wished to be turned into mares?
Or "The queen is off her rocker. I think it's best to get rid of her"
Or "Why can't the lings who are against the Queen go to the stallions if Appleossa with team C.U.N.T and negotiate?
In a nutshell, what I'm saying is if you make a Changling OC with to much character, then you have effectively destroyed the last valid argument that they are just loyal soldiers.