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Mar
5th
2016

What is Even Going On · 8:00pm Mar 5th, 2016

Kinkshaming everywhere, horsefuckers being horsefuckers, and another non-smut story that actually did well for some reason. Also I have a somewhat special surprise in store. After the break.



What an eventful week it's been on fimfiction. I don't even know where to start. I could start by wondering why so many of you like bestiality. Like seriously, that story now has more bookshelf adds than any of my other stories. This is not okay. I wrote that story in like two hours last Saturday because I thought it was kinda hot and spent maybe ten minutes editing it. That story definitely shouldn't have gotten as popular as it did; but I guess I can't really force what people like and don't like, especially since it was something I thought was hot in the first place (and would be lying if I said I didn't want to do more of).

And then there was the kinkshaming. Oh boy was there some kinkshaming. Besides the couple of comments that were basically "stop liking what I don't like", I actually got a certain popular author to blog about being sick of horsefucking. The story actually got around eight or so downvotes after that one, which is actually kinda funny. I'm not going to say who, because if the downvotes are any indication, there's definitely the potential of a flame war there that I really would rather not get involved in. One thing I saw a lot of was the claim I was bandwagoning, which confused me, honestly. The only other Sunset horsefucking stories I've seen are the one's by Pimapifi and those ones where Sunset gets a horse baby. Hardly seems like a massive trend to me, but hey, when people throw hate around they'll believe whatever they want to believe. The moral of this story is to not be the fun police and let people enjoy what they want to enjoy when it comes to stories.

At the end of the day though, nothing I'm not already used to. You may see another story with the mystery girl if I'm ever feeling up to it.

Anyway, the real reason I made this blog was to let you guys I was planning on rewriting Rainbow's Punishment. I read through it the other day and just felt that I could do so much better. The entire narrative is all over the place, and not even close to what I initially wanted this story to end up as. If you guys have some input on what you think might make it better, or what you didn't like about it, now's your chance to let me know before the story is completed again. Oh, and if you're worried I'll pull a George Lucas and make the rewrite shit then I'll leave a pastebin link for you guys once I'm done.

Well that's it for now, guys. Let me know what you think for the rewrite. 'Til next time.

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Comments ( 22 )

Plus, at least it wasn´t another friggin Displaced story, gah! I´d take most trends on the site any day, than THAT. I mean, there are a few good ones here or there, but the rest....

Anyway, its like me. I write a story where Celestia bangs a cake after one of my friends accidently gave me that idea during a conversation, and a side story with Futalight, and I gain lots of likes, not as much as some of my non porn, but Jesus.

Wanderer D
Moderator

Weren't you at the chat that time I posted the formula for getting Featured?

Because sometimes people just don't understand irony.

3792798
If I was I don't remember it.

Wanderer D
Moderator

3792805 "The chances of getting featured are inversely proportional to the amount of effort put into a story."

3792832
That would explain everything.

It is not that a lot of us like Bestiality, but most of us like reading about Sunset getting her brains plowed out.

Majin Syeekoh
Moderator

3792832 Yeah, pretty much.

As far as input for the fix of Rainbow's punishment, there were two things I didn't like, one story related, one kink related.

Story related...I didn't like that Rainbow was being emotionally broken throughout it. I get that it's her 'punishment', but I've never liked seeing characters broken.

Kink related...why is it that so many of the stories I've read that proclaim 'maid fetish' have the maid outfit come off before the sex happens? Half the fun of role related kinks - whether maid, nurse, waitress, etc. - is the sexy uniform. But once the uniform's off, the role is gone. So...more sex in the maid outfits, please?

3792886

Story related...I didn't like that Rainbow was being emotionally broken throughout it. I get that it's her 'punishment', but I've never liked seeing characters broken.

That's actually one of the things that I'm going to drive home even harder in the rewrite. It definitely isn't going to be for everyone.

3792900
...damn.

...any chance there will be other 'maid' stories where you can take my other suggestion into account?

3792911
It's not out of the question.

People are so fucking touchy. Fun is fun and good writing is good writing. I guess people have just forgotten, once again, that turning away from something is an option.
I mean; hurr-durr-horsesex. That's my two cents.

3792944 I've gotta say I agree with this.

3792900 the question is, will it light the fire of revengeance *Rules of Nature starts playing*

3792944

hurr-durr-horsesex.

You... raise some valid points.

Well to be honest I enjoyed the story simply for the creativity not the horse fucking. To clarify what I mean, you took what is taboo (and clearly still done out there in the world) and made a story out of it. You brought in key elements that made it interesting. Sunset's urges being put to the limit, her want to keep herself under control, the overall struggle. All of it just fit right into place, right down to the end when she was caught. You even shown how at the start she had worries about it, and when it came to that point she felt her social life was over. The one thing I didn't expect was Applejack being so understanding to the situation... or the fact there was another girl doing just that.

But it is as they say different tokes for different folks. So the story itself is in the libraries of others for different reasons, mine will stay as I have stated. Purely for the creativity and how interesting it was overall. You did a great job on it enough said. Now if you will excuse me I'm off to read 'My Best Friend', I already have great expectations on it.

You know what bugs me, how people need to try and censor and or disprove of anything they don't like...Hey if i have to listen to some White supremacist spout his dirty race etc. crap, or some East Indian rant at me to stay away from his daughter because I'm not Indian....then you know what people, when it comes to fictional (as in not real and just imagination) stories of bestiality? or anything really...all i have to say is grow up, bite the bullet, and mind your own business.

If you don't like it, fine, don't like it, don't fave, down vote maybe, then go about your bloody day and keep your nose clean and focused on yourself not others.

That story wasn't my thing at all, but you know what i just went baout the other stuff i did like and ignored it, but just becasue people bitched about it in this manner I'm upvoting it...deal with it.

I like it when horse penis goes inside of humans.

You already got my input and I'll probably be tossing some ideas and such elsewhere.

3792832 It's totally true. The only story I ever got featured I wrote in about an two and a half hours, with twenty minutes of editing.:trixieshiftright:

Sweet, a Rainbow's Punishment rewrite!

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