Feb
6th
2016
Contest Entry: Integration is Better · 10:11pm Feb 6th, 2016
I've been hoping to see a sequel to this one! Not sure if this is the direction I would have taken it, but that's the point, isn't it? To get a new view on them. ^.^
Integration is Better
By Reykan
It's been a few weeks since Chrysalis an Luna united in their attempts to embaress Celestia, and the three of them are happy. They laugh, they play, they sleep, they eat, and never is there a depressing moment. But underneath it all, the queen can't help but feel soemthings off. Like she's forgetting something. It must not be important, though. Otherwise Tia would remind her.
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Neat. I couldn't read past the first word, but still. Neat.
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Wow, killed it with one word?
That's going to be some thing to look forward to when judging time comes around!
Well I was about to say that there were FOUR (4) errors in the description alone, but apparently the writer has already had the good sense to correct them.
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All for the better. ^.^
Oh, I remember this story, it was enjoyable. In fact, I think I'll go re-read it..
Not entirely confident about this sequel, given the different author and very different tags, but I'll give it a try.
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Give it a try...
What more could anyone ask?
I'm glad these blog posts are helping the contestants get new readers!
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I did. Not my cup of tea. Especially since I'd already seen that exact concept done a couple times. Also, too hard a genre shift to make a good sequel, felt like a stretch instead of a proper fit.