another quick, but not so little change · 7:50am Dec 3rd, 2015
As many of you may know, i unpublished a lot of chapters from Living Nightmare to rewrite it again. After much forethought, i have now written it so that the story matches more with how Season 5 went, leading up to Hearth's Warming Eve.
And, yes, Stellar will be in a chaptered version of what Twilight went through in the finale, joining Twilight and Spike. You can imagine i'm going to have a bit of fun with those, though that won't be for a while.
I have just one question for you. Are you serious I mean it was good as it was before but adding new stuff that's just WTF level.
3589043 exactly, there was no reason to mess with this story. It was PERFECT as it was.
And why add in the season 5 finale, it didn't make sense. the only timeline that should have existed was Nightmare Moon's. However i bet it would be auckward for Nightamre Moon to see Luna and Stellar with Twilight.
Please man. I beg you. Restore the last version of the story.
3589050 Thank you for agreeing with me on this one.
Oh, that means that we have to reread the story again when you finish.
May be you really should consider to post it as another, alternative story instead of removing compete one that was already quite good?
3589098 You know in my opinion that sounds like a good idea which I can get behind.
Good luck.
You should have done all this re-writing and additional / alternate ending stuff as a new story. I liked the story as it was before... even before you did the first changes. I wish I had downloaded it.
I don't think I will like this new version. In fact, I'm not going to even give it a chance since I did not like the season ending.
But, it is your story, so you can do whatever you want with it.
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For the record, the season ending would not come for a while. That time will require Stellar wanting to even be near Twilight, which at the moment, she doesn't. I will give warning when the season finale chapters are coming, but for the moment, it's character building for stellar i'm aiming for.
3591312 Overall, like me and several others mentioned, you should have kept the story as it was and do an alternate telling of it as a new story.
3589056 just read the first rewrite and very dissappointed. the only good part was Nightmare Moon taunting Stellar.
3591335 Okay hey chapter 15 is just messed up I'll admit that, but changing the story so it could be better not need.
3591312 Okay looks no offense, but please return everything back to normal because if you do stuff like this you end up losing those who are waiting for different stories, not this shit.
3591363 It's not like things won't happen like they did before, it's just that Luna know knows how much stellar feels hurt.
3591368 Autumn this move you are doing is just not popular. Please reconsider. You are George Lucasing
3591368 *sighs* Listen if you wanted to add something to make it into a different story like I don't know put a letter 'A' then what chapter, and so on.
Oh, I see that you re-uploaded updated chapters, but the story is still unpublished and password-protected.
When do you plan to re-publish it again? Just wanna reread it and see all the new changes...