Raising Rainbow Based Clopfic (SurpriseBolt) · 3:02am Sep 13th, 2014
Alrighty, folks. As you know (or may not) I've been doing commissions lately to help my family with financial problems. The first one I received was for a mature SurpriseBolt clopfic. Easy enough, I suppose. I mean, I know the characters, so it shouldn't have been too difficult for me. The only real challenge was trying to work with the plot while keeping them in character. (Also, I didn't really know how to write for drunks....) The story itself has some ups and downs, but over all, I put effort into it and I'm proud of the final product.
To tell you the basics of the story, Surprise attempts to get Rainbolt drunk to open him up and get him to spill secrets. As you can imagine, she doesn't get what she expected.
For any Raising Rainbow fans who are strong supporters of SurpriseBolt shipping, the link is here if you want to read it. There's a bit of romance, bit of cheesy/sappy stuff, but it's mostly just cloppy stuff.
So, yeah. I'm not really sure if this'll be in canon with Raising Rainbow, so I put it a year ahead of where it's currently at.
I hope any of you who choose to read it enjoy it.
(Sorry for the short-ish blog. I'm exhausted and lazy.)
-Pizzema Forte
2450584 I honestly can't say. I'll have to think about that. I mean, it'd be a cute event to have canon, but at the same time, I don't know. I'll be thinking about it, though.
I'll have to check that out later. Good luck with the financial troubles.
So, just to clear thing up, this story isn't cannon with Rasing Rainhow, correct?,
Who in the heck is surprise....?
Please don't make this canon, I want to think of Surprise as a sweet, innocent mare, not the evil, conniving.... creature she was in that clopfic.
No offense to your writing, it was great, but she came off as very evil and sneaky in that story.
Oh no! I love raising rainbow but I don't like clop
I guess I'll skip that chapter
2450800 Most likely not.
2450984 derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/8/12/697862__safe_solo_g1_surprise_artist-colon-professorsly.png
This is what she looks like. If you don't read Raising Rainbow, or haven't got that far into it, you wouldn't know how I personify her.
2451097 Chances are, I won't make this in canon with Raising Rainbow. It was a commission after all, not something from my own imagination, so there's no chapter of the actual story you'll need to skip to avoid clop.
2451113 oh yay!!! Btw, your story is SO AMAZING!!!
I love it
it's like the only long story I would ever bother to read! COZ IT'S FANTABLOUS! 
2451117 Thank you.
2451123 no prob
2451113 well, at least it was nice to see them together, even for a second
2451113 Well of course I read Raising Rainbow I was one of the first people.
I just haven't gotten far, haven't read fanfiction in a while.