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  • 322 weeks
    Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

    Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather

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  • 342 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

    Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.

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  • 343 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

    Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want

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  • 344 weeks
    Slight revamp

    So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.

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  • 367 weeks
    Question for any Italian speakers out there

    So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To

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May
8th
2014

An experiement I would like to perform... · 11:44pm May 8th, 2014

So I found some old comments that I had made on other people's stories, and saw that they had replies to which I had never been notified. I know for a fact that I had never been notified of them, as they were of (then) recent vintage, and were new to me. This fact had been percolating in the back of my mind for a while, but a recent conversation with a friend put a new thought in my head, to wit: why not see if this is the cause of my new stories low attention stats.

Yes, there's no denying it. My two most recent stories (granted, one of them was just a one-shot, AU of another author's story made with permission) aren't exactly breaking any records (personal or public) in terms of stats. So I decided to see if the cause of this was the site, or my story's contents (all OC cast). Now, I'll grant you that an all OC cast would be a turn-off for most people, but I have to wonder if that alone is enough to make people hit the back button without even reading. Please. If you number among the (as of this posting) 676 people who follow me for my stories, let me know in this blog post that you still exist, drop me a line, tell me to sod off, think my new story stinks (though I beg you to leave a reason why), whatever. I just want to make sure that the people who do follow me are still getting notifications of my updates, new stories, blog posts, etc. This of course does not apply if you already commented on the story. I know you received notification.

I'd like to announce that this experiment has been successful in that I found out it's my own craptacular decisions that are the cause and not the site. I thank all who participated and am requesting everyone else to just ignore the previous request for replies. I realize now just how needy that sounds, and hope that I didn't bother any of you with my whining.

For the story that I think needs more attention...
...
Heh heh. You thought I was going to promote my own, weren't you? No worries, I'd never be so gauche. No, the story I think that needs more attention this time is Experiments by YourBronyGod. It's a cute little RariLight shipfic told mostly from the perspective of Twilight's experiment notes. Give it a read. You won't be disappointed.

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Comments ( 25 )

I'm here and all that. I personally haven't read all of One of These Days yet but it is still on my radar.

I still follow you. I haven't read "One of these Days" probably because of the all OC thing, but I did read "Rock the Casbah".

I can see your posts, yes. Haven't read your two latest stories yet, one because I will wait until it is completed (I do that with everything) and the other because I haven't gotten to it yet.

Why did the Wrabbit cross the road?

I am present and while i havn't read One of These Days I will...eventually, i think i have bout 5k+ stories in my read later list X.x Also, Enjyoed Rock the Casbah....You need to do more sidestories with that dude >.>

I got the notification, just haven't gotten to read it yet.

I usually love your stories. I don't read stories about OC's. Well, they can have OC's in them, but I usually don't read them if they are mostly OC's.

Still here. OotD is on my "when I get to it, which is probably after it's finished at this rate" list.

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Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it. :twilightsmile:
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That's cool. I know it's not for everyone. :twilightsheepish:
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Then you may want to know that Rock the Casbah was a one shot. Just a smutty little AU idea I had for Fusion Fool's story that involved Twilight and the Saddle Arabian princess Amira. :trollestia:
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To get the porn, of course. The porn shop is always across the street. :raritywink:
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I'd like to know what else I can do. No, seriously. What else can I do to my story to get more people reading it? :twilightoops:
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Oh, but Sir, it's just a wafer-thin mint. What harm could it do? :duck:

GGRRrr
[Sup. Still following you.]
GGRRrr
[I saw your notification of the new story, but I was too busy reading other fanfics and doing, ugh, "responsible" stuff.]

The lack of notification seems to stem from the reply being on a different chapter from the original comment (the site doesn't seem to be able to handle that effectively) It can also sometimes happen if they're on different pages of comments, but that happens less frequently.

As for your stories, I enjoyed the one-shot, but your continuing one just didn't hook me, and I'll admit part of that was probably the all OC cast.

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Fire & Rain wasn't an all OC story. Sure, it had a couple moments where there was focus on an OC, but it wasn't the entire story. Wind and Stone though... that's definitely my favorite all OC story out there, even though it doesn't have many views at all.

~SolidFire

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Thanks for the reply. :twilightsmile:
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Hmmm... that actually explains a lot. Guess I better put a stop to this experiment before it gets out of hand. Thanks for the info, and sorry it didn't grab you. Maybe you could try it again when it's more complete. I admit that I could have handled the prologue better. :twilightsheepish:

let me know in this blog post that you still exist

Your asking if I exist? :twilightoops:
Well technically I do but I don't. :facehoof:
I am after all Schrödinger's cat
I exist by not existing
Alive but dead
:ajsleepy:
Sorry..if my answer doesn't help

I just want to make sure that the people who do follow me are still getting notifications of my updates, new stories, blog posts, etc. This of course does not apply if you already commented on the story. I know you received notification

As for this, I just haven't gotten around to reading any stories lately..damn real life....but yeah, I'm receiving this loud and clear.:yay:

I'm reading a lot of fic.
I read two first book of twilighxchereliextrixiexspitfire in one trait, but for no special reason, I'm just a little slower on the third, probably because of the change in plain sight life.

And I don't think I'll read the prequel you are writing, because to be frank, I'm not interested in that story. I don't read only for the clop, but what interest me is the character's story, I don't really like the plot with the ancient princess, reincarnation, etc... It's interesting, but in that story I only find it out of place. It touch only twilight and her friends.
Her concubines are only here in second place.

So, if they are absolutely not in another fic supposed to be set in the same universe, that doesn't interest me.

As for your other works, I'll probably read them when I'll finish my read later and favorite list (so not soon).

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Well, quantum beings are/aren't funny that way. In any case, thanks for the reply. :twilightsheepish:
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Well, I'm glad you read them at all. And I can totes understand limiting yourself that way. It's not like there isn't a dearth of good material out there for the Mane6. :ajsmug:

Spacecowboy
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Hey, Wrabbit. I've actually just recently come off a pony hiatus, but looking at the last two, I personally don't have too much interest in them. All OC casts have a hard time interesting me, as its the few canon characters I enjoy that draw me to a story, even if they're in more of a support capacity. All OC just kinda throws things into the bushes for me, and it's usually not worth the effort. The other one, well, gotta be in the mood to read sex stuff still. Probably have a small issue where most folks followed you for the dynamics you had going between Twi and her herd, and the others just don't compare after the previous works.

Hope life has been treating you well and stuff, too.

I know it says the experiment is concluded, but I am gonna toss in my two cents anyway.

It's mostly just a matter of a relatively high backlog for me to read, other projects, and Minecraft. I just...haven't gotten to it yet. Though prequel nature of the story, all things considered, has probably contributed to the low priority "One of these Days" has.:applejackunsure:

I am still here though.

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Oh... sorry. :twilightsheepish:

~SolidFire

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Just to precise, it's not because your casts are with OC that I'm slow reading your fics.
It's just that the pot interests me less and less.

I really like Plain Sight, but her constant indecision and the fact that her situation with twilight doesn't evolve at all, I feel it displeasing. (the word it too strong for I want to say but I can't find another.)

As for the herd, I find the story is too centered on Twilight. Even the chapters dedicated to the herd looks more like plot filling than character story.
(I have tendency to do the contrary, I'm too focused on the characters of my stories than the plot.)

Just by curiosity, after you finish the prequel, will you make a fourth book of Twilight and her herd ?

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Most likely. Either focusing on the kids of the herd, or one focusing on Plain Sight. Also, thank you for your honesty. :ajsmug:

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