MThe Teacher, the Sorceress, and the Wonderbolt
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Twilight has not one, not two, but three ponies after her affections. Who will she choose?
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323 weeks
Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather
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343 weeks
Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.
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344 weeks
Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want
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344 weeks
Slight revamp

So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.
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367 weeks
Question for any Italian speakers out there

So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To
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Sep

28th

2017

Slight revamp · 7:14am Sep 28th, 2017

So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels. Yeah, not the best use of my time, but hey, I finally got around to tweaking Spitfire's date to add that scene I've been meaning to do.

So. Now that it's done, feel free to reread it, and pick apart anything and everything you don't like about it (seriously, there were some pretty harsh opinions about the ending being a copout), or just be nostalgic about something you read a year or two ago. But while I have your attention here, I have to ask you all for a favor. I am going to give the two sequels the same treatment, which means that a certain subplot may end up being replaced. However, I'm gonna need something to take its place. So, if you ever thought that you could do something better than Golden Bit's evil plan to get Blueblood married to Twilight, I'm all ears. Mind you, the goal of his plan will always be to get his son married to Twilight, but how he gets there could do with some major tweaking. So, let me know what you would have done to accomplish that, were you in his hooves. Best idea gets used (if it's better than his, that is)!