MLove's Been a Little Bit Hard on Me
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Twilight's herd tries to get by without major destruction.
Sex
Twilight
Trixie
Cheerilee
Spitfire
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Slight revamp

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365 weeks
Question for any Italian speakers out there

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2017

Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2 · 3:15am Oct 8th, 2017

Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different. So, this is just a heads up for all the readers who liked Love's Been a Little Bit Hard on Me as it is now, save it while you can, because the changes, they are a-comin'. I also may, or may not push back the big reveal of the Elements' past, I haven't decided. That was the one thing (besides Golden Bit's terrible plan) that I regretted about the story. I caved to pressure and revealed it too soon, leaving me with nothing for the finale. So, yeah. Just a friendly notice, I'm gonna start the rewrites sometime next week, probably around Wednesday, or so.

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