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  • 321 weeks
    Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

    Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather

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  • 341 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

    Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.

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  • 342 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

    Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want

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  • 343 weeks
    Slight revamp

    So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.

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  • 366 weeks
    Question for any Italian speakers out there

    So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To

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Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening · 1:53am Oct 2nd, 2017

Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want to know what happens, you have to read it. :ajsmug:

As I have received no feedback on Golden Bit's plot for the third story yet, I'm going to hold off on updating it for now, so's I can rethink the plot myself. It always bugged me the way it sorta petered out, so I'm going to give it some thought for a couple of weeks, and hopefully come up with something better. If anybunny wants to suggest something, then feel free to reply here and leave an idea or two. Otherwise, I'll continue to plug away at this. [rolls up sleeves] :trixieshiftleft:

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Comments ( 6 )

I was about to do my 'annual' rereading of this story anyway. Perfect timing!

But just finished re-re-re(add an unknown amount of re's) -reading all parts like two weeks ago...

4684467
Someone actually likes this enough to reread annually? You make me blush. :twilightsheepish:
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I would suggest you wait a bit before re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-reading it. Don't want to burn out on it. :trollestia:

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Easily. TSW has to be one of my favorite series on this site.

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D'aw, you make me want to write more for that series. :twilightblush:

4684967
That would be a blessing akin to the Holy Grail.

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