• Member Since 18th Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen 11 minutes ago

Wrabbit


More Blog Posts56

  • 321 weeks
    Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

    Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather

    Read More

    7 comments · 606 views
  • 341 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

    Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.

    Read More

    3 comments · 410 views
  • 342 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

    Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want

    Read More

    6 comments · 415 views
  • 342 weeks
    Slight revamp

    So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.

    Read More

    2 comments · 495 views
  • 365 weeks
    Question for any Italian speakers out there

    So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To

    Read More

    11 comments · 385 views
Apr
21st
2017

Question for any Italian speakers out there · 3:52am Apr 21st, 2017

So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To that end, I've done some searching (read: tried using Google translate), and have come to the conclusion that I don't know what I'm doing with another language. I wanted her mother to use something along the lines of "my little joy", and have only come up with "felicituccio" and "felicitacchiotto". The first is okay, but I've read that particular diminutive suffix can have pejorative connotations, and the second is a bit long. I haven't even started on Octy's affectionate name for her mother, but I was considering something along the lines of "big note". If any of you Italian-fluent readers (if there's any) know of a better way to do this, please let me know below.

As a side note, I already have a new project in mind when this one is done (yes, it's a pony story), so let's keep our paws crossed!

Report Wrabbit · 385 views · Story: Amore Obbligato ·
Comments ( 11 )

Oh, hey, good to see you kicking about again. :pinkiehappy:

4504280
You do know I just updated a story like, last week, right? :trixieshiftright:

4504416
Actually, yes and no. I somehow missed the update when it happened. Usually I catch that stuff in my feed, but I guess there was a bunch of stuff that day or something. :pinkiesad2:
However, I had caught it just a couple of hours before this blog post. :pinkiehappy:

4504914
That's why I turned off all notifications from groups. I got tired of seeing 500 alerts in my pile, and knowing that I would never get through them all. :rainbowwild:

4505301
But how will I get my futa-clop notifications? :raritycry:
:pinkiecrazy:

4505504
Fair enough. :trollestia:

"felicituccio" and "felicitacchiotto"

:unsuresweetie: Sweetictionary disapproves. Fair attempt though; these things are not easy.

"My little joy" can be translated almost literally, as "gioia mia" (my joy) is actually used in that context. "Gioietta" is a diminutive of "gioia" that literally means "little joy".

For notes... Note values have actual names (instead of just fractions), so maybe you could use those? The 4/4 is "Semibreve" and it's the longest note. Notations for longer notes exist but from what little we studied of basic musical notation I can't remember seeing them.
In fact, I just checked. Breve (8/4) is rare, and Lunga and Massima (16/4 and 32/4) are not used anymore. If you want Octavia poking fun at her mother for being old you could use one of those :rainbowlaugh:

4525910
Oh. That is brilliant. I am definitely going to use that. Thank you so much for the help. I hope that if I need further help with Italian in this story in future, I can come to you. :pinkiehappy:

4525910
Also, when calling someone "Massima", is there anything I should be aware of? I'm not sure if I want to make it a diminutive to make it more familiar and possibly take some of the sting out of it, but what would be the best one for that particular word? I saw a few pages that shows various diminutives in Italian ( https://www.thoughtco.com/italian-modifying-suffixes-2011381 https://www.thoughtco.com/alteration-in-italian-diminutives-2011565 ), and I know that nouns in Italian have genders like they do in Spanish, so do they follow the same rules (-a for female, -o for male)?

4526941 Yes, like names they are differentiated by gender: -ina/-ino, -etta/-etto...

A common one for children is mamma->mammina, so "massimina" (lowercase, so there's no confusion with her name) could probably work; nicknames are meant to be silly anyway.

Edit- let me clarify: Massimo is an actual proper name. It's female version, though, is almost unused, and could work well as a nickname in this case.

4527052
Neat! Thanks again. :twilightsmile:

Login or register to comment