The Child In Me Chp 3 Teaser!

Yup, Time To Leave

My mind was adrift amongst a sea of darkness. Yet the darkness…was comforting, I could even feel the warmth emanating from it.

And then there was…a voice, a soft, loving voice. It called to me…neigh, she called to me. She was everywhere, around me, within me, echoing deep inside my soul.

We love thee Arcturus…

Arcturus?

Who was that?

Was that…me?

No, no that’s not my name. My name is Oliver, I’m twenty two years old, I’m human…not…not whatever I was before.

Was it all just a dream before? Did I imagine myself a little pony, a child even?

Did I imagine the tall, imposing alabaster figure?

Did I imagine the eccentric lavender...mare?

Did I…Did I imagine the dark Princess who pretty much claimed me as her own…on the spot?

I must have…

…

Of course not child…

Oh no.

Thou art ours now…thou art min baby boy, and we love thee…

She…loves me?

Yes, we do love thee deeply…

But you’ve only known me for all of about fifteen minutes, that’s a little quick to…umm, love me, isn’t it?

A soft, melodious laughter surrounded me, just as an even gentler force picked me up and began to…cradle me?

I was being rocked like a baby!

Time means nothing to us. Many a pony have we seen claimed by times hooves, but thee…thee is like us. Thou shalt not age beyond thine mid twenty’s…and we wish to love thee for that, for thou shalt not fade with time, but like us, remain for all eternity.

A sudden set of loving turquoise orbs materialized out of nowhere in front of me, gazing down with such tenderness, such kindness that I was rendered speechless by the sheer unfamiliarity of it all.

That is why we fell in love so swiftly, Arcturus. This is why we have claimed thee as our colt, our child…out baby boy. This…This is why thou should call us mother, for we shalt never treat thee with anything but a mother’s love, a mother’s touch…forever.

…

I have no idea what to say to that…except that you’re absolutely NUTS!

Yet again, the soft, musical laughter filled the air around me. And, yet again, I found myself being rocked…before suddenly being pressed against a plush surface.

Fur?

It matters little how you see min love for thee, for we shall swear here and now to thee…

The set of eyes quickly found their way in front of me, boring into my own with a fierce determination.

That no matter how long it may take, thou shall be whittled down by min nuzzles and kisses, by min love and maternal touch. Thus in the end…thou will love us willingly, and call us mother til the end of days.

Comments

[DiscordWhooves1]

[my_little_medic]

NOICE! Can't wait for the new chapter mate!!!

[Jollygoodfellow]

Still waiting on RIF

[Zamairiac]

1939833

It's almost done, I'm just chucking one of these up first.

Keeps the rabid fans at bay for a while

[Captain Scrappie]

Jesus, Luna. There's being motherly, THEN there's being down right creepy.

[Zamairiac]

1939865

As will eventually become apparent, nearly every mare is this creepy around Oliver

[Captain Scrappie]

1939869 Well he better get working on that dart gun. He's gonna need it.

[Alpharius IV]

Jeez, is it me or do you portray Luna as psychotic a lot, eh?

[the_sane_maniac]

If you look closely you can clearly see that the sanity train has now gone completely of the rails and has started to to do barrel rolls downwards into the abyss below

[Shadow Bolt]

Luna is slightly creepy at the end, but not a problem comparing to Celestia.

[Zamairiac]

1939967

Well she does kidnap kiddies and try to bring about eternal night every tuesday so...yeah

[Thatoddwriter]

1939986
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[Bast]

1939822 This times 1000 , Princess Luna has declared his soul and heart will forever belong to the eternal night xD And she has all of the eternity of time to drill in his head that she will be his mother whether he wants her to be or not x3

[Late Night]

Everyone thinks he's got some form of brain injury and is suffering from a form of memory loss. Because of that everyone is likely to be willing to 're-teach' him everything he should already know about the world.
Luna Would be an easy source of any information he wants to know, and taking on that mother role she'd also likely stick up for him should he get caught doing something odd.

Personally, I think he could be in a much worse situation than he actually is.

[Lighting Ace]

Oh good she is hypnotized him with mind control too, goodie, and here I was expecting he manage to escape, oh well I hope Luna get the clue very soon

[Blackwisp15]

1939967 He portrays all ponies as psychotic. I'm starting to wonder if psychotic characters are all Zamairiac knows how to write.

[Zamairiac]

1941445

Hey!

I can write non-psychotic characters. The Interrogation has a few, as does Nothing is set in stone, The Eye Of The Beholder and Celestia's Royal break Up Chronicle!

So I CAN write normal characters...

Doesn't mean I prefer it to completely obsessed psychopaths

[Blackwisp15]

1941460 I personally don't like the direction you took with Never Judge, but that's mainly because the idea of being mind controlled majorly pisses me off.

[Zamairiac]

1941481

Don't like, don't read

[Blackwisp15]

1941486 It's well written and Richard is still around so I'm gonna stick around for the ending.

[Zamairiac]

1941533

Good lad!

Here, have a

[Blackwisp15]

1941568 Already got the one growing on my face to deal with, but thanks for the offer.

[Shining Dawn]

1941396 I think I'd rather stay a pony prince forever.

[Lighting Ace]

1944880
Yeah you do, he don't and nobody is listen to him! I start to wonder how long until he go into a full vendetta against Twilight for putting him into the claws of a psychopath and he has the power, if he gives he will not rest until he gets his revenge against her…or study enough to send Luna and Twilight ass back to the moon.

……oh and Celestie better not saying anything she is pretty much useless so far.