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Horpip must have his title I see. The question is does he deserve it?
But does Spring even want to have a standing in the family, or just eagerly accepting welcoming treatment and behaviour?
The herd...and consort?
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Not sure if this qualifies as a question, sounds like a statement of fact...or low level demand? In this context anyway.
Not trying to create waves but the singulars and plurals in this seem confused.
How bout 'He was a fellow student of my mentor, and still is, but I no longer.' Don't know how that sounds to you, just a suggestive thought.(could use a shrugging Twi emoji here but I'll go with my standard.)
or ponynapping? She might be a young elf but Razz doesn't know that, and she is having a foal of her own. Actually could have Razz confusion fun with that, 'That'd be foalnapping...err ponynapping...or both at the same time. Anyway definite big no-no.'
Well Bubbles got over her disappointment quick.
7580255 With how he's been acting so far? Hell no.
Fun fact, according to the old PHBR8 The Complete Book of Elves, the gestation period for elves is two years, just like in this chapter.
Serendipitous? Or is David sneaking in a bit of geekdom?
7580461 considering he wrote ponyfinder, the latter XD
approached that office - approached the office
Spring pat Coco's - Spring patted Coco's
right up on the desk - right up onto the desk
Spring as her sides - Spring at her sides
student of my mentor - students of my mentor
pushed either away - pushed each away
didn't disagree with him - didn't disagree with him either
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Wonderful chapter today!
Lots of feelings laid out for examination today, and a further softening of Spring's personality. She had an almost childlike innocence when she hopped up onto the desk, then subverted that with her un-childlike fixation on Tabitha and the way she might discipline a troublesome elf. It seems like it's always the ones that appear to desire control of their surroundings the most that turn out to have a deeply submissive current flowing just under the surface.
Ms. Channel could have a second career as a marriage/relationship counselor if the fashion scene doesn't work out for her.
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"Spring, how would you feel if I started calling you a..." Tabitha hesitated a moment, searching for the right words to make her point, "a lustful broodmare, eagerly presenting herself to be defiled by an 'animal'?"
Spring started, her body suddenly rigid between Tabitha's hands. The elf's cheeks flushed, the pale skin suffusing with a delicate, rose tinted blush, and her eyes opened wide in shock, but quickly narrowed in defiant outrage... and a smoldering desire so intense that it set Tabitha's cheeks ablaze in return, coupled with a sudden tightening below and between her back legs.
"Oh."
7581186 Fixed! Oh, Spring. What will we do with you that you won't enjoy?
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That feeling when you spend the better part of an hour, agonizing over three sentences, then click 'Post Comment' only to realize half a second later that it would have been better if Coco were speaking and not Tabitha.
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Coco watched as the dissonance between Spring's harsh words and the ardent tone in which they were spoken only sired more confusion in Tabitha, clearly evident in the expression spreading over her face. Perhaps... could she re-frame things so that Spring would understand? She cleared her throat, "Ahem. Spring, how would you feel if Tabitha started calling you a..." She hesitated a moment, searching for the right words to make her point, "a lustful broodmare, eagerly presenting herself to be defiled by an 'animal'?"
Spring started, her body suddenly rigid between Tabitha's hands. The elf's cheeks flushed, the pale skin suffusing with a delicate, rose-tinted blush, and her eyes opened wide in shock, but quickly narrowed in defiant outrage... and a smoldering desire so intense that it set Tabitha's cheeks ablaze in return, coupled with a sudden tightening below and between her back legs.
"Oh." Coco went red as well and pinned her ears back, looking askance at Razz. Well, that could have gone better.
this little gathering shows a bunch of promise.
Family Council has been a pretty good success this session. Tabitha should really suggest a new pet name for Spring to call her, it would throw out the negative connotation of using "beast" and allow Spring to keep showing her affection.
Horpip probably knows Spring has more than mere Coco for support, we wonder how he'll react...
Keep going! ;)
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I briefly thought you were Georg with the quality you wrote in that snippet.