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Coco apparently has just a little venom in her. Basically calling Razz a kid that isn't in the league of Tabitha or herself...
It wasn't worded unreasonably (calling her a monster is overselling it) but I think it was the sorta thing that Suri did, she asserted dominance by claiming the other parties must be "beneath" her. Then went significantly further but...
And Tabitha makes the choice that makes sense given what she's thought before. Her mind was not significantly changed overnight.
She's got too many fears and reservations about it... There are an awful lot of things to get over:
A first romance, a romance with another species, romance with tenants of your building?! Romance with the gender you had no preference for a week ago, or as much as it seemed venomous to call Razz immature, with a stallion who has some issues with starting his own life?!
Berry thought breakfast - Razz thought breakfast
plates and eatery - plates and utensils --or-- plates and eating utensils
skins hone - skin shone
persue - pursue
*****
Quite a bit of time devoted to Coco and Razz today, and it was nice to see them working things out together. It really gives a clear picture of where they are now and contrasts to where they have come from.
This is especially true for Razz since we've seen more of him and know more about his past. He's making steady progress into becoming a good friend, not only to Tabitha but to himself as well.
Coco is, in a sense, the opposite of Razz in that she has maturity and experience, but she carries the scars that came from gaining those qualities.
There were considerably fewer typos today too, but every day can't be a feast or things would get boring.
7499587 Is that first a typo?
Also this:
Dangit, Razz. Le sigh.
... What's Razz's cutie mark, anyway? What is he actually good at?
I can kinda understand Coco's mean attitude here. I mean she was working under a total b*tch for who know's how long.
7499587 Fixed up. It wouldn't be natural, I think, for the two to be ultra happy about the other and put all their differences aside.
They can't all work like Silver.
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Honestly, I wasn't sure. It seemed a little odd for Razz to call himself Berry in that one spot, so I figured I'd point it out.
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Oh no, I certainly wasn't expecting them to be instant best friends due to their shared experience, and I found the entire interaction to be very believable through the lens of harmony that keeps them from being outright hostile to one another as, for example, humans might be in similar circumstances.
Edit:it's embarrassing how sneaky typos can be...
Part of the enchantments, pheromones causing internal conflicts through too subtle to noticibly smell or affecting the memories of the smells, but powerful enough for there to be a tinge of theres something wrong feeling?
Wonder how much Spring like Chicken.
Yes, though physiologically it would totally be possible for this little herd to form up, perhaps mentally and maybe emotionally there needs to be more bonding all around. Silly Spring, you can't just force love like that!
Keep going! ;)
I can only see this 3-way loving ending so "well" now
Well, I don't really think Coco or Razz would try anything stupid anyway.
I can't help but wonder how Bubbles is going to react to this situation, although that's IF she finds out.
7500312 I'm sure no such drama could ever occur... right?
7500312 Oh no, now you've given him ideas! This is bad....very,very bad.
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The ponies are lucky because Tabitha is not lucky.
I hope they can realize this.
Why aren't they declaring undying love for one another and forming a herd?
this is a vary simple answer. it is no ware near time for a hard that is a ways off yet if ever.
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