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? = 'full time' maybe add this, seems right then?
Another Boulder? Stay away from Maud if you know what's good for ya!
An Ignor-anus?
This sounds like a hint? Starting to wonder if this is a halfway house for humans brought through and turned to beasts other normal Equestrians?
were
Doc Remedy, for all that ails you.
Doc, Im all pent up and need release.
Well dear, just bend over and cough. SNAP
7555357 As employees, she's referring to, rather than contractors.
7555406 OK as 'full time employees' at my ? prompt. A valid change I still believe, not insisting just suggesting?
'This' assuming her checkup is in the present tense.
Thank you for the chat yesterday, assuring to know I can talk with the writers sometimes.
7555385 Drop your shorts!!
7555425 Past tense is what we try to stay in, but two tweaks made.
7555449 Might have missed this one, sorry for harping?
were
Tabitha explores - Tabitha explored
made quick jot - made a quick jot
how it 'generally' works - how it 'generally' worked
an off-salute - an off-handed(?) salute
He--lo - He-llo
Where your parents - Were your parents
*****
A new day and life has calmed again.
Bubbles is still tough as nails, but isn't out to burn bridges. Though she's not willing to simply forgive, either.
Again, if I were in a position to whisper advice, I'd urge Tabitha to be completely forthcoming to her doctor about the fact, then allow him to ask for clarification. Taking a passive role and waiting for the doc to ask the right questions only makes life harder for both patient and doctor.
*****
Insert comment about being the filling in a Tabitha sandwich here.
7555488 Typos fixed! Define 'the' fact? No major drama here, but that conversation with Bubbles was quite needed, I think.
how it generally worksed- worked
I've been enjoying it so far, Spring vs Dark is curious :D
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Oops. Typo crept in on me. It ahoyls have been 'the facts'.
7555577 Oops, fixed!
We wonder if the doctor would notice what's happening with the scent blocker, complain about it, and ask for its removal. That "oh..." moment would be awesome.
That is indeed a complicated question: if someone unlawfully enters and you rape them, who's at fault? Not touching that one!
Keep going! ;)
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DUDE what the?
I reckon Hartsfire & I pretty much discussed that very thing last chapter, referring to bridges and there pylons as a reference to Coco, Razz & Spring being supports with Tabs as the Roadway suspended by them, albeit a weird reference. Same logic could apply to her, ponies & 'other occupants' as pylons, I guess the apartment block could be the roadway to cohabitation or something similar. (refer to earlier comment about crazy, going to see a tyre company about wallpapering my bedroom now)
edit: Whoops, sorry two chapters ago!
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I only noticed the Terabithia one, there was another one?
7555607 That depends entirely on the 'castle' rule in whatever state you live in, assuming you believe that was a reasonable defense and can get a jury to agree.
7555712 Pretty sure it would fly in Texas.
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I'm out of town visiting with family and have only a dinky smart phone to type on. The typos are exacting their revenge in my moment of vulnerability.
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As in, the facts of her situation, but not necessarily the drama llamas except for those caused by her multiple conditions.
First sentence incomplete. Suggest joining to second sentence.
it sounds like Tabitha and me just need to stop and think about all the happening in this chapter.
7556543 Tweaked.
I like the yeti/guy WAY more than the elf cunt. He may be mysterious, but he at least seems to mean well... and is not a dickhead... or needlessly rude... or self-important... or only self-serving.
Oh hey! Her name is back to being Taylor.