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I'm happy for ya!
I'm finding that suspicious ... eh, probably nothing.
7457794 Razz is determined to turn his life around. Go Razz!
Actually...
When it comes to body, Razz is inhuman.
But Spring is inhuman in attitude, whereas Razz's attitude is basically exactly that of a human's, and easily relatable.
... Is this going to turn into a Harem Comedy? Tabitha gets more suitors who, either by misunderstandings or desire, want to be her romantic partner? Or will two be where it stops?
I'll tune in to find out!
7458089 Now you make me curious. Would the fic be bettered for it?
7458089 Is this NOT going to turn into a harem party? Who forgot where this goes how? I predict sunshine and rainbows.
Yes, it had... - Yet, it had... - (not 100% sure this was a typo)
those bond together - those bound together --or-- those bonded together
sort of conscious - sort of conscience
*****
Interesting developments. I'm still enjoying each chapter as it comes!
Wait... what? Blood? I'm starting to hear alarm bells.
Silliness aside, chances are good that they could probably clear this up over time by speaking and defining the meaning of the words that they are using. Spring is not a native speaker of American English and Tabitha most likely doesn't know a single word of whichever dialect of Elven that Spring speaks, so establishing some common definitions and terms goes a long way toward understanding one another. Of course, that isn't very exciting to read about.
Alas, Spring clearly has some knowledge of what is going on with Tabitha's building, but while she is more approachable than the yeti on the second floor, she is just as inscrutable in her own way. I would not predict answers to come from that path. Where is a linguistics/philosophy major when you need one?
7458281 Typos zapped with elven magic. They'll make fine trees and woodland creatures.
What'd you think of Razz's part?
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Honestly, I'm not sure. Normally I avoid harem comedies, but the concept doesn't seem like a problem here, and I'm not sure why.
But it has so far been the formula... although, a ll suitors have made themselves unsuitable rather shortly, instead of very attractive in short order.
So far, Tabitha has been a viewpoint character for more colorful side chars and experiencing weirdness.
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Razz is motivated to be on a better path.
What remains to be seen is what he will do when the initial euphoria of having the new job wears off and/or his old 'friends' come calling. Will he fall back into old habits, or will he learn new habits and lean on new friends to carry him forward?
I'm curious to see if we learn more of his backstory at some future date. At present, I'm cautious but have not given up on him because there is still so much to learn. I mean, I never gave up on Rough Tumble, so the least I can do is cut Razz the same break.
8/6/2016 - edited to correct for a typo that snuck in. I am ashamed.
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And I'm proud of him for that
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I think she's referring to without fighting maybe, or at least that's how i took it. or maybe one of those bonding things, slit inner palms to bleed a little and tie palms together as bonding process, can't remember what movie or show that was from?
Razz is giving me a sort of addict vibe with his not quite answering questions and misdirection, what his addiction is I don't know.
Spring is mostly having issues because she takes everything literally and her lack of social training makes us wonder how she even got to her place to begin with. Then again, Text.
We're curious at her usage of the title "Caretaker" therefore. This along with the extra-dimensional shenanigans and the other guy give credence to something... Odd going on, and not just "my apartment got switched with another dimension" weird...
Keep going! ;)
7459894 It starts with dimension hopping houses, and then...
>> David Silver After that email, I gotta ask. Is Discord in this story?
7462053 He hasn't shown up yet.
Cleopatra that's thinking that is utterly barbaric ( the real meaning of the word, that cultures and thoughts are so different that understanding is incredibly difficult) or ponies that are a colorful and somewhat anthropomorphized version of Earth's ponies.
I would take the pony any day. Brains , in this case thought and culture, before beauty.