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Ah the random song and dance number. I bet that they think she participated and her her part in their heads or they felt something off and she got skipped over.
She spat out that gum. - She spat out her/the gum.
her measure her safety - her measure of safety
It was as if the horse word was powered by puns. - It was as if the horse world was powered by puns. (And typos! )
disturbing than there impromptu - disturbing than their impromptu
*****
Another bit of world building and character development.
My thoughts in order of events:
I think that the ship between Tabitha and Razz that some readers were hoping for is looking more like a coffin, and Razz just hammered in another nail.
For some reason, I thought that the mugger was a unicorn and was a little surprised that she's a pegasus, and upon checking--
--it seems that she was.
Tabitha is settling into her new situation. but she's not completely in sync with the Harmony of the Land yet. She is building a network of friends and acquaintances though and that will no doubt serve her well in times to come.
7463441 Typos addressed, at least those of the written kind. How will Tabitha deal with Spring? Will she boot her into her own room?
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I expect that Tabitha will approach the matter as kindly and professionally as she's been all along.
How will Spring take the offer? Will she take it as a rejection and be offended or will she realize that Tabitha knows nothing of her ways and is acting out of kindness and respect? As much as Spring wishes for Tabitha to mentor her in the ways of the land she finds herself in, perhaps she would be willing to teach a little of her ways in return. Nobody has even asked Spring what she is doing in Magic Pony Land in the first place.
17 percent chance the shop owner's cousin is one of the gang!
At least our unnamed protagonist has genuine care for Razz, that's admirable. She just needs to redirect her talents into outward productivity...
Keep going! ;)
I'd probably act like that too.
Hmm... I get the feeling that she only has Razz as a friend and nopony else and doesn't want to lose him because she doesn't want to be alone and cares about him too much to act defensive? Then again, with what she does, it's not helping much. That's what I'm getting out of that unicorn and in a way, I want to feel sorry for her.
Ha! Get used to ponies randomly singing out of nowhere Tabby! It's going to happen often XD
Hey, someone actually exasperated by Spring!
And Razz was STILL more polite than she was, since she was delivering insults directed at him.
And the evasiveness of Razz's friend is impressive. They got accused of mugging and did their best to not even address it. And I'm pretty sure the whole "what do you want him for" is projection on her part. She only uses him for bad reasons, and assumez the only reason anyone else would want to associate with him is for his utility in the same way.
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To a criminal, everyone else is a criminal too. That's nothing overly profound though. People in general project their own motives upon those they interact with. It's called empathy and anyone short of a full psychopath or personality disorder has at least a little of it.
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Empathy is not what I would call it but I think you're strictly right: it's putting yourself into their shoes and assuming they would make the decisions you would make for the same reasons you would make them.
That being said, the problem is with projection is you deny the presence of that mindset in yourself, which just makes your accusations and contempt for others displaying something you hate and are denying in yourself worse... which isn't necessarily happening here, because we don't have a good picture of how the unicorn sees herself.
Mayhap I spoke too carelessly.
Its a good thing Spring is that sort of elf, because if she had been one of Those elves, by the time Tabitha left her room to find out what Razz was doing, he would already be out of his depth holding a centaur foal.
Tabitha has lucked out with the con, given none of her temp residents have installed a ball pit in their room yet.
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Er... what do you mean by, 'Those elves'?
song magic will sneak up on a pony.
know
Accidentally triggering a heart song, haven't seen that in a while.
And continuing without her parts in it