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Wow. Speak of the devil, huh?
I guess it would make sense that Text would need Discords consent to do what It's doing.
7651775 The plot thickens, does it not?
So yet another reason to hate Text. I hope his "gift" doesn't get Discord turned back into a statue. Hopefully something will put Text in his place.
7651837 That gift already happened... in the future!
Damn prequels.
I'm not sure exactly what Text did evilly this time, except stop Discord from riding into the scene in a very loud fashion.
knuckles
I'll assume he's referring to Tabs but start of the sentence confuses me as to what it's meaning? Is something missing?
Horpip had a Le_Mat revolver? Fired a ball & cap round from upper barrel or buckshot from lower barrel.
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Prequels are good if done correctly.
7651947 Which does this qualify as?
7651904 Fixes applied! I do hope you're enjoying the ride.
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It is good. I just need the time to catch up on all the stories in this verse. Stupid life making me work to live, getting in the way.
As Tabitha and crew get closer to The Offence, they leave the building, and Equestria and Earth further behind, proceeding more into its realm, where it is stronger?
Pity Paul coldnt bring in the Wesley special. Worlds smallest Warp Core. Unstable version.
Otherwise known as The Holy Hand Grenade Of Holy Hell.
Of course, what I can do with a warpfield would probably give Discord the time of his life. And quite possibly create the Eye Of Horus as a side effect. After all, The Eye is just the largest bulgy bit of the Mandelbrot solutions to the chaos warp function.
Go Go Dusk/Paul. Sweep, sweep, sweep that abomination with the banhammer broom of sweeping.
7652033 Meanwhile back in the foyer at the touch screen help kiosk...
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The Book.
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Nice to see Dark starting to mesh well. She/they may just come out of this more well-adjusted than before.
Discord leaned dangerously - Discord leered(?) dangerously [might not be a typo]
a fresh psuedopod rushed - a fresh pseudopod rushed
that bone spear - the/her bone spear
chitonous outgrowths - chitinous outgrowths
tried to raise to her hooves - tried to rise to her hooves
not two pointed - no two pointed
likely too far to much - likely too far too much
*****
Nothing like a dinner of Texas brisket style typos after a long day at the office. Mmmm...
Silliness aside, you've done an excellent job of writing otherworldly horror here. There is nothing worse than seeing innocents suffer at the hands of an uncaring universe. Lovecraft achieved his horror usually without more than hinting at the monsters, but you've managed to create just as much unease and emotional turmoil by letting us see the things we'd rather not.
And I guess this is why Discord more or less disappeared from Silver's story, not to mention a perfect retcon to mesh more closely with Ki's work. Bravo sir!
Dark and Paul seem to be meshing a little better. I never got the impression that he was a glory hound for all that he's amazed and ecstatic to be a pretty little pony now, so it felt a little unfair that Dark was being so down on him before they found some common ground.
Texas!?
You know what's found in texas, right?
Only steers and beers are found in texas and you don't look like no beer.
We were wondering when Discord would take notice. Now to see if he helps or hinders. There's already plenty chaos here, how will he make things more interesting? Hmmm...
Keep going! ;)
7653405 Typos served!
Thank you, on the aberrations of ultimate peril. I'm never certain how well I handle action scenes. Talking is easy. Were they in character and was it interesting? Done!
Paul was seeking glory. He was quite eager to prove he had become something greater in being a Warlock and had expressed that he was eager to do it, to show he wasn't what he was before. That's what got him yelled at by Bubbles to learn to follow orders.
He's doing it now. It was a growing moment, I think, and needed in this time of darkness.
Discord popped directly into Silver's troubled little head back when he was David, if you recall. It was a bit odd that he kind of backed off a bit, no?
Explained.
7651864 Actually the Text is about to rip a mentally unstable human out of psychiatric hospital and throw him into an endless nightmare to keep it's side of it's deal with Discord. But that's total spoilers.
This thing attacking the building reminds me of some of the Great Old Ones from H.P. Lovecraft's stories.