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I decided to post mid-day Friday instead of competing with new episodes and such.
7625070 well, now you've got us curious. What happens then?
Oh, and Spring is going to get so disappointed with Tabitha... but Horpip better not that that for granted. Tabitha will NOT stand for him bulling the mother of her children... foals? Mini-centaurs? Hmm
I'm trying to figure out which words you mean in the author's note. "It was a cruel, cheap trick"?
7625126 I do not see these words in the author's note.
7625133
You said to remember the Text's words, but it said a lot of things, most of which seemed completely generic and devoid of any real meaning. So I was trying to figure out which of its words you were referring to.
7625136 He made promises. He does not fail those.
How far will horsepipe the Suck go to demand his impressiveness, or will he learn that his ego isnt as big as others abilities?
Dark/Paul is getting complicated. Dont know if Bubbles is going to hump them or eat them.
Just as long as that squd stays behind the door.
Well, Horpip is still a dick, but he does back down and I'm not so sure if his dickishness goes much far beyond "doesn't know proper boundaries" and "is trying to tattle on his rival, proving she's just awful."
We'll have to see if he's really a toxic guy or not... the second can be basically bullying, after all.
And Paul/Dark... Daul? Park? is still going with the "of two minds" thing.
The original mind seems to be almost entirely Dark, but the second mind seems to be Paul both free of his self doubt and having Dark's propensity for assertiveness without Dark's corresponding asceticism.
hum this sounds all most like a puzzle.
and I like puzzle's.
7625092 Tabby doesn't know of her powers as a 'caretaker' as yet, whatever they may be, so me thinks she'll go mildly on 'Horslip"-up (pun intended). Maybe just a first warning, depending on what Spring informs Tabby of about her abilities.
7625342 It's all about exceeding boundaries today it seems. Dark/Paul are going to have to be shown how to share and 'tag team' ...Don't know how else to describe it.
denegrated - denigrated
accepted that cup - accepted the cup
to not say horse, - to not say 'horse',
the cup of tea forgotten on the ground. - the cup of tea forgotten on the table. [Unless Spring dropped it in her glee of catching Horpip out.]
or things taken - or had things taken
horn glowing bright - horn glowing brightly
*****
What a happy after work surprise to come home to, a veritable home cooked meal just waiting for me!
Spring's character continues to soften, given how long her pregnancy may be, I hope she learns from this time and doesn't revert after she has their child.
I am suspicious that Horpip is savvier than he's letting on and that this is all a ploy to get Spring to make a mistake and play into his hands. From what we've seen, she lets her guard down when she's feeling especially smug and superior.
Dark is definitely falling into the trope of the Pony with Two Brains, or the Pony with the Screaming Brain for something a little more recent. I hope she and Paul are able to strike some sort of balance, because they're in a dangerous place and people are relying on them not to make matters worse. I suspect that at this stage in the Silververse, a letter or other alert to Princess Luna would end poorly...
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This is a level of self-awareness on Spring's part that is quite shocking compared to what we've seen of her in the past. Perhaps it's the hormonal changes she's undergoing, or perhaps she's maturing in the company of loving, thoughtful family members.
Hmm... I wonder show she will explain it without cutting her own throat in the process?
Yes, they do?
7625599 Udders on their chests. Revised to be more clear about that. Typos baked with a light peppering and lemon sauce. Enjoy!
Well hopefully Bubbles can help sort out the Dar/Paul thing because Dark is having a miserable time with all this.
7625637
on their chest - on their chests
Dessert!
7625646 A saucy dessert at that.
7625506
If they really are one person it might be even more than that... but while Paul is probably okay with the dilution of his identity, I doubt Dark would feel that way.
On the other hand... if it were for Duty, Dark would probably be happy with some dilution... the problem is that Paul is not very good for duty.
Dark really needs to devote some time to working out a balance between the two personalities composing her psyche. She has the potential to become a much more well-balanced individual in the end, but she could just as easily become completely unhinged if her components mesh poorly.
7625764 Somepony with experience in psyche work is going to have to help her sooner than later, I'd hope Luna might get involved there but she may be too busy with Silver related problems at the moment if I remember right.
7625637 ...and another Paul memory causing confusion! on both sides of the 4th wall it seems.
Poor poor Dark. LLuckily she has external support now.
We feel that Spring isn't sinking down to their level, she's just upside down.
Keep going! ;)
Every time I see a story with The Text, I get the impression it needs a foot lodged in it's colon.