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Tabitha took Spring,
:sunglasses:
Right down the Centaur line?
The warning of things is appreciated... I'm at work and any serious usages of the mature tag are best avoided until later.
It's distracting.
dangerous close - dangerously close
what she just said - what she had just said --or-- what she'd just said
Coco's fore hoof - Coco's forehoof
You said, Tabitha. - She said, what? I don't understand.
she literally asked for - she had literally asked for --or-- she'd literally asked for
roughly divorce the elf - roughly divest the elf
loud grunt - loud grunts
bipedal 'victim - bipedal 'victim'.
in acting effort - in an effort
stretching monstrously to fit in - stretching them monstrously to fit herself into
she grunted - Spring grunted
settling her pony body down on Tabitha. - settling her pony body down onto Spring.
Style: consider changing one of instance of 'idea' to another word to avoid repetition?
*****
And now this has happened too.
I admit I didn't expect that the speculation that Spring wanted to be ravished by a beast was the correct hypothesis, but now it's clear I was on the wrong side of that debate. Still, some part of me wonders if this isn't part of some grander plan, that she needed or wanted a hybrid child for some reason other than being a parent and fulfilling her wish to be taken and impregnated by a 'beast'. It's probably just me clinging to the shreds of my desire to see Spring as acting with more complex motives.
This can only complicate things between Tabitha and Coco, yes? I hope that somehow Coco isn't hurt by this new development, but I fear that I cannot see the path that would allow it to be avoided.
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By Celestia's soft, alabaster... wings... that was a horrible pun.
I applaud you, sir!
7513347 Typos fed to a ravenous horse stud. I shudder to think what may result.
Surely this can only lead to more complications. What directions are you hoping for?
Spring really likes her RP fetish
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I'm a softy. Something that doesn't end with a brokenhearted Coco and Tabitha.
7513393 Why doesn't Tabitha just roll with it and be the beast Spring wants?!
7513398 Oh please, we're done with that chapter, move on.
Roll with it
I suppose now it's self-evident that the author's note being at the beginning of this chapter was not, in fact, a technical error.
So Spring finally gets what she wants from Tabitha, for the low price of having to be very slightly more direct about it. Clearly, it was everything Spring wanted, since from how she's described here it was incredible for her. Interestingly, it was good for Tabitha too, since at least part of her was "happy" at what she'd done, even as her full awareness was still coming back to her after finally getting off.
At this point, the question is one of fallout where Tabitha, Spring, and Coco are concerned.
Insofar as Spring goes, I have to wonder just how honest she was being about being pregnant now. Even if we leave aside that Spring has a talent for twisting the truth in all kinds of creative ways, there's a more fundamental point to consider: that this is her fantasy. Emphasis on the word "fantasy" - most of the time the desire comes to an end along with the accompanying orgasm. While Spring might very well have "being knocked up by my bestial rapist" as part of her fetish, I question if she's really willing to follow that through with actually experiencing pregnancy, let alone having to care for and raise the resulting child. That's particularly true in light of it having been exposed that this is quite deviant by her culture's standards; one can hide their kinks, but having a child (which will doubtlessly have some pony qualities) is something else again.
On the other hand, we know almost nothing about Spring's culture. Perhaps taking thirty or forty years to raise a child is no different than a brief vacation for her, particularly if she's not shy about leaving it to be raised by someone else. (Or, for all we know, Spring has no problems with abortion.)
Turning our attention to Coco...I don't see her as being mad at Tabitha about this. Coco is very level-headed, as well as fair-minded. Presuming that Tabitha tells her the truth, Coco will recognize that Spring is manipulating Tabitha for her own (that is, Spring's own) personal gratification. Rather than blaming Tabitha for that, I suspect that Coco will march right down to Spring's door and get in her face about it. I also suspect that that will end up badly for her...but maybe in a sexy way? ("If you want to keep the Caretaker to yourself so much, beast, then you can carry the child she placed within my womb." *magically puts her baby into Coco*)
As for Tabitha...this is more confusion to pile on top of confusion. Leaving aside that she's now going to have to wrestle with whether or not she just raped another woman (in fact she didn't, since Spring made it exceptionally clear that she wanted it), she's also going to feel guilty about cheating on Coco. Of course, the realization for her will be in recognizing that Spring seduced her, rather than anything else, and that her (Tabitha's) new body apparently comes with a powerful sex drive that won't be easily denied. That makes sense, given that she's already a pheromone factory. Given how strong her urges have become, she's going to need to adopt at least some level of pragmatism in that regard; having a girlfriend (or boyfriend) who wants to put out a lot is going to need to be the very least of what she needs from now on, in all likelihood.
I have to wonder if she'll consider throwing Spring out, after this stunt, but...that seems unlikely. Leaving aside that Spring does still owe Tabitha a book (which gives Tabitha some measure of control over her; pity she seemed to forget that here), can she really throw out the mother of her child? Besides, Spring did save her life before, and asked for nothing in return. And, to be blunt, the elf is a great lay...particularly since she seems content to ask for little else besides being the "victim" of Tabitha's lusts.
At this point, it looks like Razz might have gotten off easy (pun intended), but we'll see how long he and his girl can keep out of the shenanigans.
7513412 I like some of those thoughts. They're bouncing around the empty cavern of my mind dangerously.
If one entirely abandons the moralities of it, it was a day of delights.
Shame most don't do that.
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Given Springs inhuman fey nature, how can we even tell she would have a human helpless offspring from her body when she quite happily uses magic to handle a far larger and I would hope with the ability, mature deposition. Also why would a magic filled being hang around for almost a year when Tabitha is there to continously feed the parasite the cellular material and other mass compounds it needs, saving on magic?
At least so far Spring isnt being catty about things and demanding multiple pregnancies from multiple sources.
Aint Magic infused nature wonderful.
Spring's hard work has finally paid off. She did mention that she can't create life with just magic. As to why she selected the Caretaker... Her devious nature has much in store...
Keep going! ;)
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most objectional views - most objectionable views
Found one more.
7513917 Fixed!
I defiantly did not see this coming.
Coco yes I saw that but not Spring.
7513412 Spring sounds like a submissive bdsm partner what with all the false accusations and pretend kicking, not to mention why she didn't just fade out and sealed off the room.
7513558 The choice word there is Caretaker, but of what a building alone, not important, a possessed building with demons in residence, now we have something!
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A-another chapter like this?
"Our relationship won't change" my ass.
Christ. Commits to Coco and immediately bangs Spring and Spring all but announces she's pregnant...
It's like... either of the first of those is expected, but both then the third one...
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I think you mean she announces it outright because there is no ambiguity in her words at all.
Makes me wonder if she's talking like she thinks a dwarf would talk at that point.
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For some reason I had forgotten the clear comment about seeding, and only remembered claims of broodmate.
I dunno I think the constant plant metaphors are pretty elfin.
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Wanna bet that's another one of her fetishes?
Was just going back reviewing something and spotted this, how do you strip someone to the air?
7527140 When you strip them enough for air to get them. Naked.
See now I'm starting to lose interest very quickly. If it's a clopfic then just say so. I was hoping for more focus on relationships, but this female lead has next to no proverbial spine. I'd have cracked a few heads by now and thown out a bitch or two. She's being jerked around like a fucking puppet and she seems perfectly okay with it. Fuck that. Grow a spine!
didn't she become Lawrance?