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Well, interesting introduction to a new character and then a case of musical ponies as almost all protagonists choose to make her feel lousy about her self.
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Closest I could come to finding a representation of Dark.
7515713 Did Dark attack her self worth?
I am Dark Vision, and I will serve as your story watcher I am here to stomp out all the Typos.
a good chapter even if I am not sure about Spring just what is she up to? and is she really pregnant ?
Becasue of the phased psychology of Spring, its very tricky to work out what she seems to be wanting, but Im pretty sure having her under the desk, or even on the end of a one way summons amulet would be part of her possible desires.
Im in two minds wether to have the Mage magic react with the Elf magic, so Tabitha is either small and pheremone producing, or the pheremones go and the stimulation goes from olfactory to ophtactory. Greeeed.
You know, I figured Tabitha would actually have told Razz something about how something went weird because of Spring (although perhaps not in such terms that might make him furious at Spring... since she can't recognize Spring's manipulation and... because this is all her fault in the first place, straight up violation) and it might not be entirely his fault... but I guess not.
So solution one to pheromone psychosis is "don't not get laid" it seems.
But... the thing with Spring is going to leave it's scars on Tabitha. I wonder if, at the end of this chapter, she already feels like she cannot trust herself.
Even though who she really cannot trust is Spring.
7515749 ophtactory?
7515760 No thoughts on reconciliations or new pones?
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I'm making up for shock from last chapter.
The new sorcerer sounds like a good ally. Controlled and knowledgeable.
It's nice she made good with Bubbles, but I dunno how well I'm supposed to take Razz's apology given that Tabitha was thinking how she basically didn't want to forgive him while outwardly forgiving him.
7515772 She's tired and frayed. Can you blame her?
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Nah,.. And while I'm sure she's going to outwardly make peace with Razz, I hardly want her to nurture a relationship that she can't help but feel bad about.
7515719 Excluding the new sandwich meat. Although she did sort of rub the aroma of the office in her face, give it time I suppose she'll have other things to say to Tabs too.
7515823 Not following. Do expand?
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When you say 'her' I assume you mean Tabs. Dark pretty much was having a go at Tabs about her trying to entice her into an 'act' with her pheromones and was pretty much snubbing her down hard as if it was an intentional act. But it's not, so Dark then goes into embarrassing questions and making Tabs feel even worse about it.
(I should have wrote it as 'Although Dark did sort of rub the aroma of the office in Tab's face', need to use names more often in comments.)
7515873 She started skeptical, but came around, and even offered to help, and expressed pleasure at Tabitha's attitude. I'm... not sure what more she could have done.
She'd not be terribly good at her job if she reacted too differently, but that hardly seemed offensive or hostile.
7515824 Dark wouldn't happen to be an extension of Luna like Celine was, by chance?
7515878 Did she give that impression?
7515877 She just seemed very blunt and inadvertently not caring about how her questioning effected Tabs. A lot like Luna does. I don't think Tabs was in the right mind to pick up on Dark's positive assertions.
Thinking back, it's only been week hasn't it? Give or take an extra few days.
7515883 Not much time has gone by in the last many chapters, for sure.
7515879 Sort of, but she did state she didn't fully know Tab's condition which tends to disprove that, although a lapse in memory transfer could explain that to I suppose?
but she never looked - but she'd never looked --or-- but she had never looked
of a sorts - of a sort --or-- of a sorts
*****
And somehow life continues on, embarrassing and confusing moments and all.
It's about time that Luna's guardian arrived. I wonder if she'll be up to the task, or will get steamrollered by the first threat that appears. Tabitha also forgot to mention anything about the other tenants in the building, that could be a recipe for tense confrontations that would otherwise have been avoided.
I hope everything calms down and Tabitha and Coco can have a chance at exploring their relationship... but realistically I'm securing myself for a stormy ride.
7515896 Typos fixed. What do you think of Dark Vision?
7515905 I get a feeling like the one scientist guy from Mass Effect from her with how analytical she got.
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Dark vision seems to be competent, or at the very least has a keen sense of observation. She has also confirmed that it /is/ pheromones that Tabitha is putting out that are affecting the ponies around her. She never got around to mentioning other ways that she might be able to help Tabitha with her problems beyond getting relief on a regular basis.
I mentioned before that Tabitha, in her haste to get back to her apartment, forgot to make any mention of the more exotic tenants in the building, but Dark does not seem to be the sort to make headstrong decisions, so even if she encounters the 'monster' on the second floor, or Spring, it should not devolve into a violent confrontation. At least, I hope that it won't; I've never been a fan of the trope where the person sent to help is instantly eliminated.
Dark is neat. We found it hilarious that she was like, "um, can you stop smelling sexy now?"
Someone cameo Midnight Song here for a bit!
Poor Tabitha just needs to relax. All this stress can't be good for her.
Keep going! ;)
Sounds more and more like spring created Tabitha so she could create her own new life forms and be the mother of a new race.
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Sorry,bad attempt at twisted humor. From Opthalmology, eyes.As in sight for sore eyes, or illusion, or hypnotism etc.
The mere sight of such endowment caused fair ladies to faint, etc?
7515878 Or maybe it's all a dream, and Tabitha is "patient zero" for Luna's "dream therapy". Luna still won't own up to which of the two humans she used that on came first.
7515970 Oh come on, David doesn't immediately eliminate ponies. This isn't one of those b-side, spin-off Silververse stories.
7517081 Oh now that's going deeper than I anticipated.
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You shoulda said that last chapter!
7517836 Might have to say that for every chapter now!
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I suppose it is true, things are getting deeper, going deeper, gone deeper every chapter...
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Spring just likes to complain I think.
Who's chin is Bubbles fondling in this scene...?
Never mind, there she is.