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if she even had tried - if she had even tried
use, and you - us, and you
She was made - She had been made
*****
A good chapter.
Dark Vision knows her business well. I hope she can sit down with Tabitha at some point in the near future and educate her on some of the rules that govern the people that she is going to be interacting with on a regular basis as Caretaker.
Coco seems to be good for Tabitha too, and doesn't seem to be nearly as hurt by the encounter between Spring and Tabitha as Tabitha had feared.
7518544 Typos tossed to a passing lunar that I'm sure you wouldn't recognize.
Tabitha's a soldier, but she's not one standing alone out there. She has some friends.
Coco did good this chapter.
Dark did good too.
Adds a different perspective on "the text" now that I've been instructed to read it in the author's voice. Especially when she's pressed by it, insulted, which causes her to lash out defensively and expose a different perspective.
7518783 The Text can't help but be the extra hand of the author, whatever author is writing in the Silver Verse that day, which isn't always me, so it isn't always me, and that's alright.
Interesting how "the monster" seems to align so closely with Text. Is Text experimenting with a more active presence?
Who would be shoved into Tabitha's path anyways? The Razz path is plenty weak that it doesn't seem an option...
Keep going! ;)
The important question that strikes at all the ties beneath the veneer of civility.
Good chapter.
coco showed up at the perfect time.
Magician faces Monster, and the building remains standing.
Off to a good start then.
This time, is it going to suck or blow with Coco?
That went a lot better than it could have.
I liked this chapter MUCH better. It focuses on relationships and some development of the main cast.