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Wait so someone had to open the door back in Equestria from the link to be re-established? at least now Sweetie can go home. Plus now Jim has a good friend in Sweetie and hopefully they both can move forward with their lives.
7677891 There had to be two doors.
People recover, slowly, the Yeti rolls on, and Tabitha gets her Wifi Internet back.
Meanwhile, Celestia gets the report, and a Discord sized headache.
This story reminds me of...
7678143 Never heard of it, but I can see what makes you think of it.
Not a good moment to end the story, actually. If this was a series of books it would be a nice point for the first to end, but as a whole? Spring's situation and pregnancy, what exactly is the Nexus, how will Dark develop, tabs love life... A lot of loose ends still. So yeah, keep writing this one, it rocks
This was a solid ending to this arc. A milestone in Dark and in Tabitha's life and roles, and Squiddy has been handled and it was the antagonist for the last several chapters.
So if you're ending this is a time you could.
But there are also a lot of problems waiting to be solved. A lot of interpersonal conflicts that are in stasis but not really solved.
Please bring us more. I would greatly appreciate it. Even the typos....
a truly amazing chapter DS so much good so much bade and a door repaired.
Everyone is recuperating, but it's only Wednesday, we have six more days until the next wave!
Keep going! ;)
silently
Don't think I didn't notice that.
As it's dialogue, the normal rules of grammar can be waived, but usually when referring to an individual, it's policeman or police officer or just officer.
than
I could certainly stand to read more of this.
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7678143 Wish they'd continued this. There was so much left to tell!
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Sad to see the yeti go, nice to see Dark meshing, good to see the broken link is fixed.
7679164 Typos tossed out into the space between stars. Glad you liked it! Getting the right mood for the goodbye and Dark and Bubbles' meeting were two things that made me quite nervous.
I really enjoy this story. I'll admit the sex and stuff caught me of guard at first, but you don't focus on that. I'm also interested to learn more about Text, whether ( for lack of a better term) it brought Tabitha there, will there be more of the Old Ones? This is just a fun story that you can really predict, and I love that about it.
i really like it, can't wait for stuff to happen in everglow
7681241 Hmm? When did Everglow get involved?
7681307 some of the fantasy creatures was giving off a everglow vibe.
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What is this "Everglow" setting like?
7682634 Dungeons and Dragons, with 100% more ponies. It gets a lot more complicated than that, but there's a primer.
7682634 as David said but he invented it.
they migrate into - they migrated into
eye of that siren - eye of the siren -or- the siren's eye
She glanced back and back - She glanced behind her, then back -or- She glanced back
and backat Darkholding him... her? It back - holding him... her? it back
should we truly desired - should we truly desire -or- if we truly desired
the reminded of - the reminder of
*****
It was a good chapter and quite a relief that the dark times are over, at least for now.
Time to heal and recover.
7686181 Typos buried in the snow. No particular thoughts of the developments blooming?
I hope I handled the last goodbye with proper respect and weight.
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It's sweet that Bubbles is giving a relationship with Dark a chance. I have to wonder if it's another case of grasping at what is available because there is nopony else to fill that void in her life, or of she really is more open-minded with regards to lovers/mates than she has been presented up to now. I'm referring to Bubbles but this just as easily apply to either.
It's cool that Jim and Sweetie are back, but after the last several chapters it's such a quiet event that it's anti-climactic by comparison. That's not to say it's a bad thing, more that it almost becomes lost in the shadow of the heavier plot elements.
We know next to nothing about the siren and her husband, but I really hope they are both ok and that this is all behind them.
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Laying the (yeti) to rest was handled well. It leaves me wondering if she did somehow have the ability to manipulate reality in her role as caretaker that could have brought him back or erected some appropriate memorial to his spirit.