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Tabitha you had one easy job, keep the sent blocker on you and now everything looks like it will be crashing down on you. So how will poor Coco deal with this I wonder?
Thats getting a very busy office. Tabitha might need a hammock at this rate.
I wonder if Spring can still move given her progression, or if her magic will let her spring the minitirek suprise instead?
Then again, given the weirdness of the building, Im half expecting Spring to lay an evolution egg like Pokemon or Digimon or Demon. Where the size of the egg bears no relation to the size of the offspring.
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7545164 Nobody said for her to do much about her own bed.
Activating silly humour mode:
Have You ever wondered....
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Don't fear, it was the evil monkey!!
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EVIL MONKEY!
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Why do I do these things?
Who's Samantha? (in relevance to THIS story?)
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Perhaps they were hoping that if any other ponies were on the bed with Tabitha, it would already be ponies she was willing to bang.
I was going to say that "once permission is given then all bets are off" but the fact that she's been in that bed all this time makes that seem like a likely culprit as well... probably both.
I wonder if there will be a point where Tabitha will be tired of this creeping up on her randomly, so she asks it to creep up on her.
Poor Bubbles, Tabitha is making a mess out of her already messy emotions, because those pheromones...
heard a door - heard the door
soft presses - soft clops/clopping
wanted those twitching - wanted that twitching
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Hmm... once again, that happened.
I am nonplussed, and I'll have to go back over every scene with Razz and Bubbles now to see if there was even a hint of foreshadowing that he was unhappy with his situation with Bubbles. As it stands, I was most of the way through the chapter before I decided that it probably wasn't a weird dream sequence where all the key players just happened to appear when Tabitha was vulnerable. The unannounced visits have been part of Razz's character since he was first introduced, so that's not at issue.
Honestly, I would not be surprised if this is the end for Ms. Pommell and Tabitha. I don't blame Tabitha. Thanks to Spring, she has little to zero control over this portion of her life. But how many times can Coco be hurt? How far is she willing to bend who she is to be with Tabitha? The flaw in my feelings are that I don't really have a complete grasp of Coco's character, she may be more flexible than she appears.
But it's still a surprise punch in the gut.
Edit: Yikes, completely missed the Samantha/Tabitha typo. Good catch Boulder.
7545255 Those/that, isn't that wrong for what's taken as plural, I thought?
The angle to take on it is Razz's fierce wish to live up to the ideals pushed on him. Bubbles wanted a stallion, he wants Bubbles to be happy, so he tries to be her stallion.
He was also growing his own spine, and these two things came together in an emotional mess that resulted in him confessing that he'd made a mistake and didn't want to be married to her. He cares for Bubbles deeply, and will hopefully serve as her loyal brother, even if he won't be her stallion.
There was also his orientation. He liked Tabitha, and liked odd females, and no matter how much he pretended, he couldn't just turn it off on a whim.
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Umm, did he tread on it?
Tabby needs that scent blocker mounted in a pendant chain and worn at all times it seems (excluding when she wants to get it on), like a medic alert pendant.
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7545361 -headed added.
7545374 Well I know I wouldn't want to be running around headless.
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(chuckle) Thanks Miss! (hands apple to the teacher)
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I guess if you had been hanging out with male and female friends in a tight knit group for years, it would be hard to not associate them as pseudo siblings. Would be very hard to take it further.
And Bubbles and Razz return, and throw a giant wrench into everything (again).
I quite enjoyed this chapter, but I would have enjoyed it more if we'd seen more evidence of Razz's discomfort with Bubbles as a lover. His frantic breakdown at the beginning of this chapter is the sort of thing that needs build-up to illustrate it, or at the very least a hint so that it doesn't seem to come out of left field. Maybe there was such a hint in previous chapters, but if so I never noticed it. That robbed the opening scene of a lot of its impact.
The good news is that the rest of the chapter recovered remarkably well. Razz's issue with not being able to see Bubbles as a romantic partner felt incredibly believable, since he'd never had that idea in his head before, making it very plausible that it would be too alien to fit with his existing notions about how to relate to her. It's likewise honest that this would throw him for a crisis, to the point of tears, since now he's caught in a situation where he either has to stay unhappy, or break his close friend's heart. For all of the strength he's gained recently, I can easily envision Razz folding like this when confronted with such a problem; while I don't mean to denigrate his running to Tabitha in tears, the fact that he did that rather than talk to Bubbles showed that he's still childish in a lot of ways. Insofar as the narrative is concerned, this is a good thing - a character feels much more real when their growth is shown to be an awkward, drawn-out process, rather than something that's instantaneous and total like flipping a light switch.
That said, my heart is broken for Bubbles, since this is the sort of rejection that allows for no illusions to soften the blow. Instead, she got the harsh reality of it: that he doesn't feel that way about her not because of anything - and so, there's nothing that can be altered, fixed, or defeated to change his feelings - and so there's absolutely nothing she can do about it, except admit that the one person she wanted most is now lost to her forever. Despite that...or perhaps because of it, Bubbles handled herself with a shocking degree of maturity. While she initially lashed out at Tabitha, that felt more reflexive than anything else, and once that passed she surpassed my expectations by not sinking into acrimony, instead telling Tabitha to take good care of him.
That scene where she took out the tiny socks, and admitted that she'd been thinking about having children with Razz, completely broke my heart, though. For someone as guarded as Bubbles, that sort of admission regarding her dreams for the future was beyond all expectation, and did a lot to convey just how hurt she was.
Given how heady everything had become, it's really not that surprising that things got raunchy. (Something Tabitha herself noted, amusingly enough.)
Here, I was rather surprised. Not so much that Tabitha let Razz mount her - her desire to have a stallion stick it to her had been nicely telegraphed for a little while now - but at Bubbles running away. That's not at all out-of-character for her; she's made it plain enough that she's heterosexual, at least according to everything we've seen of her so far, but I'd have expected her to latch onto any sort of chance to keep from completely losing Razz. True, Tabitha would have been the one in the middle of it all, but presuming that their encounter lasted for more than one round (if not descending into an outright orgy), it would have been entirely plausible that Razz would have fucked Bubbles again. He might have said that he didn't like it before when he and Bubbles "did things," but I took that to mean that it wasn't arousing enough for him, rather than he wasn't deriving any enjoyment from it whatsoever. If you add in his crush (e.g. Tabitha) and her pheromones, that might be another story.
That's kind of important, because I can see Bubbles internalizing the message that if she and Razz are both in a relationship with Tabitha, then they're not "really" broken up; they're just in a different, much more debauched kind of relationship...but it's still a relationship. Even if most of it is Razz mounting Tabitha, who is mounting Bubbles in turn, it's not inconceivable that there'd be more to it than that. (Plus, Bubbles could then point out that if she can get used to getting it on with a freaky hermaphroditic pony-centaur, Razz could get used to fucking his childhood friend).
That's entirely immature, of course, and easily the sort of thing that could turn into a disaster later...but it's arguably better than being dumped. But instead, Bubbles let her homophobia (or xenophobia, or what-have-you) get the better of her, and ran away, probably to go crying to Trap. (I also can't help but note the irony here; Bubbles had previously marked her territory by having Razz do her right in front of Tabitha; but now things ended with her watching Razz give it to Tabitha right in front of Bubbles' face. Poetic justice at its finest.) Maybe she'll realize that she's missing what could be her last chance and come back later? Or is this where Bubbles exits the story?
Of course, even if Bubbles does come back, this brings up the inconvenient fact that Tabitha does have a mare in her life already, namely Coco, who just now got to watch her girlfriend take it from a suitor that Coco obviously thought was ancient history by now. That said, I don't see Coco running away from this the way Bubbles did. Even if we leave aside that Coco had made it clear that she's serious about Tabitha, she's also a mare with a good deal of inner strength; even if she's shocked, I don't see her being shattered. Maybe she'll be able to admit that Razz is fulfilling a need of Tabitha's that another mare just can't fill (notwithstanding buying some "toys" in that regard), but that's iffy...all the more so if she finds out that Tabitha did try to fuck Bubbles, and only failed because the other mare ran away.
Going forward, who will get Tabitha in the end?
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Vulva is a singular noun and vulvae the plural, so 'that' is the appropriate pronoun in this case.
7545521 Learn more every day!
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squirmed past those hands - squirmed past them
gotten on her - gotten onto her
clambered up on the - clambered up onto the
they became to slam - they began to slam
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Found a few more, boss. -munches- they taste funny, again.
7545735 Oof, fixed!
7545512 It would be odd of Bubbles to rebound quite that hard and fast, especially free of any mind-altering drugs, as she is free of that room. Two other ponies are less fortunate?
I think everyone involved acted as themselves.
Does anyone else want to see Bubbles ship with Bumble the Yeti? Bubbumbles, the unspeakable ship that should not exist!
Bubbles broke free? Well she has a lot to think about (and perhaps clop about)...
Curious, what was Coco coming to visit for this late at night?
Keep going! ;)
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That's a good point. Why would Coco be standing outside Tabitha's door the middle of the night, about to knock? The only thing I can think of is that she heard something from the going's on in her apartment and was coming to make sure everything's alright.
That, or someone - or something - is subtly manipulating things to cause these sorts of situations to happen. Maybe Spring used her magic to somehow draw Coco there without her knowledge?
ok it looks as if Tabitha will be having the best of both world's.