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There were two scents all along
Tabitha is throwing everyone off on the wrong scent.
I can help you with that hump.
What Hump?
Wow for a bit there at the beginning I felt Tabitha was under something like a Jedi mind trick. Glad to see that she is socializing more now.
7542555 Jedi mind trick?
Due Diligence is in for a bit of a shock if she ever gets a peek under Tabitha she is packing a bit of a weapon.
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At the beginning of the chapter she was agreeing with Dark about what things, like leaving her door open to air out her room. The way she responded made me think of the Jedi mind trick from Star Wars. I know she isn't, I think, but it was how she basically repeated what Dark said that got me thinking that way.
blocker
Accent thing or 'boy'?
Due
? = as
OK done now
7542586 Fixed!
7542581 Maybe Dark was still noticing these, but this shirt from Coco fixed that!
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And if that doesn't work!
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Tabby is not of the weak minded!
and half-lid - then half-lidded
scent blocked - scent blocker
quite a boi - 'boi' seems like a strange word for a pony to use, should it be stallion or colt?
without prompting without complaints coming from due. - without prompting and without complaints coming from Due.
so far love goes. - so far as love goes.
raised a brow a silent moment - raised a brow for a silent moment
she was building - she had been building
old fashioned - old-fashioned
*****
I didn't notice the extra 500 or so words today, but it was a good chapter and with a fair amount of ground to cover.
Perhaps Ms. Pommell can sew Tabitha a sash or something to keep the spell from Dark secure from accidental loss or outright pilfering. Nothing is 100%, but she can make it less prone to falling out of her pocket and the hilarious hijinks that could follow.
Due Diligence almost certainly has to know that Tabitha is gifted with extra parts to her anatomy if Due Note has been going on about her. She has to know her brother's leanings, right?
*****
I understand that Tabitha was distracted by the gift from Dark, but she really should have asked about those complications.
She definitely noticed it since she commented immediately afterward.
Tabitha tried oat burgers back in chapter 2.
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Darn, this is what I get for sleeping in... Ninja'd by Boulder.
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Sorry my Lady, but your grammar radar works better than mine, so I bow to your superiority.
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7542646 Typos fixed. Due Note's word to Diligence was not revealed and could be a great many things. What makes more sense, given what we're told?
The fact that Tabitha has eaten an oat burger before doesn't stop her from being mildly surprised when she runs into one when she expects a meat burger, albeit foolishly.
Okay, since I can't seem to bring myself to comment over the weekends, I'm going to try and get back into it now.
I'm honestly starting to wonder if it's the story, or if it's me, but a lot of the conversations that have been going on lately feel like they're careening through topics. It's never bad enough that I can't follow what's being said, nor is it implausible that different subjects would come up over the course of a single conversation, but rather that a lot of the discussions that have been had lately honestly feel as though multiple topics were under discussion at the same time. In this case, Due Diligence - whose name I am absolutely in love with (and no, that's not sarcasm) - and Tabitha seem to be talking about Tabitha's (supposed) pony heritage, her building, looking at a room, and a possible romantic overture...all very nearly simultaneously.
I don't want to over-stress this point, because in all honesty this isn't a very egregious issue, but it's present just enough that I feel oddly cognizant of it. Normally, a single topic will be focused on and resolved (at least for the immediate present) before moving on to something else; tangents will come up, but they tend to be reined back in in fairly short order.
Beyond all of that...I have to admit that the idea that Tabitha is being hit on by not just a pair of siblings, but a pair of gay siblings is rather sublime. That's because, since Tabitha is equipped with both sets of genitals, it seems self-evident that there's a strong likelihood that she'll need to be with a mare and a stallion simultaneously, simply to sexually satisfy all of herself. While I suppose a single stallion, who didn't mind receiving as good as he gave, could pull "double duty," it's more likely that Tabitha's going to need to be in a polyamorous relationship. Having that be with a pair of siblings adds a layer to that might seem little more than prurient at first, but actually makes a great deal of sense. What destroys multi-partner relationships is jealousy, and so having both of your paramours have preexisting family ties largely negates that...even if it does leave open the idea of "how do they react if I want to do them both at once?" That both of them are homosexual adds a twist to that that's nicely ironic.
That said...I don't think it's going to happen. I say that mostly because the story seems like it already has candidates in place for this (e.g. Razz and Bubbles). Of course, there's a very big grain of salt here, namely that the two of them haven't been featured lately, and with the recent spotlighting of the dual Due's, I'm honestly starting to wonder if Razz and Bubbles are on their way out, to be replaced by the not-so-ambiguously gay duo.
Approaching this from another angle, I'm seeing some vindication for the Text here. Recall that, several chapters back, it needled Tabitha about all of her sexual escapades involving her playing the masculine role. At the time, that seemed somewhat petty of it; now it's coming across as prescient, or at the very least insightful. Tabitha seems like she's on something of a slow burn with regards to keeping the feminine side of her sexuality - that is, her desire to be penetrated instead of being the one doing the penetrating - in check. Notwithstanding her reluctant blowjob for Razz, she's been ignoring that part of herself, which I'm presuming was there prior to now (or at least, she seems to think so). In other words, she's still got portions of her identity to work out, and in this case the Text called it.
To that end, Due Diligence might be just what Tabitha needs. If Tabitha really wants to explore her feminine side in the bedroom, but isn't quite ready to go too far (and doesn't want to take the chance that she could be knocked up), then having Due Diligence's (or another mare's...since Coco really doesn't seem inclined to swing that way) tongue on her might be what she needs. Considering that Tabitha seems at least somewhat inclined to enjoy other girls (even before she became a centaur, she was hot for Spring, after all), that might be the way to go...even if it's not all the way, per se.
All of this, of course, underscores a potential problem with Dark Vision's anti-scent item: it may stop Tabitha's scent from spreading past her body, but presuming that Tabitha isn't affected externally (e.g. she's not inhaling her own pheromones), but rather internally (e.g. her pheromones are a symptom of her having a much higher sex drive now), then it will do nothing to quell Tabitha's own mounting desires. That certainly seems plausible, considering that Spring pointed out that Tabitha has two hearts and so benefits from that; why wouldn't that be the same for having two genitals?
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Ah, no worries. I made some incorrect assumptions when Due stated that it wasn't fit to say on a street corner.
Also, I love the possible puns that can be built around the Due family name.
7542881 Ideally, conversations are about one thing at a time. For me, iRL, I rarely have this be the case. There's what I want to talk about, what you want to talk about, and what crosses our minds as we jabber, and these three things rarely line up.
7542881
There are some very good observations here.
With regards to their conversation, my take is that you are seeing Due and Tabitha speaking at cross purposes.
Due wants all the interesting facts for her story. She also wants to know more about this strange pony that has captivated her brother and smells just like an interested mare to her.
Tabitha is understandably reluctant to share intimate details about herself that could end up published, she only wants to rent a room to Due and get an ad for her building.
At the moment Tabitha has the leverage to drive this conversation, so it's going to drift back to topics of interest to her. That may change as Due works more info from her and starts assembling the pieces of Tabitha's tale. She is a professional journalist, after all.
With regards to the Text, since it is the voice of the author it's not too surprising that it's prescient to omniscient in its observations.
Also, I'm not sure how you can qualify Tabitha's passionate experience with Razz to be 'reluctant'. She didn't initiate it but she could just as easily have turned him away. I'd also posit that it didn't seem like a pity-fuck either. She wanted to explore her feelings with these two ponies, admittedly part of that was the effect of her own scent, but the decision was hers made she made
outit.This wins for the best double entendre I've seen to date!
7543147 Thanks for the kind words! (I'm also tickled that you caught that "mounting desires" bit. )
I characterized Tabitha's going down on Razz as "reluctant" not so much because he crashed the encounter between her and Coco rather than being invited, but because he initially tried to mount Tabitha only for her to buck him off, and instead she gave him a blowjob afterwards. While it's probably more correct to say that she was reluctant to be taken as a mare, I felt that there was an undertone of her being conciliatory in her sucking him off after she'd denied him what he initially wanted - that is, after allowing him to join in, Tabitha went down on him to "make up" for not letting him fuck her.
Thinking it over again, I'm probably seeing an aspect to it that wasn't there. Still, it's notable that the only time Tabitha has acted on another male's sexuality - rather than acting as the male - has been when she's been at least somewhat nudged towards it. Razz invited himself into their one and only encounter, and her sucking him off was his idea, not hers.
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If I remember correctly, there was a line during that encounter where it seemed to indicate she had pity for him, towards the beginning. I think it seemed like she had ambivalent feelings about him staying.
Then, of course, she was brusque in knocking him off and she seemed to "accept" that she was going to do a blow job reluctantly.
... I wonder if she didn't think about Coco in the same way becuse she didn't have to do anything for it or think about it too hard, or because she was actually more comfortable with it.
And this even makes me wonder if, between this and the Spring encounter she's never actually had a sexual encounter she was totally behind and willing to intitate.
Everyone's gay for Tabitha! What's funny is that Diligence was probably sniffing for her scent again. Field test success!
Maybe she could have the stone integrated into her apparel? Perhaps a necklace or belt of sorts?
Keep going! ;)
damn Silver, you really like your orgese
7558071 None in this chapter.