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She could lighten up on poor Razz, I know he seems a bit strange but who isn't? (You see a bunch of people you define as normal, then another group comes along that redefines your view of normal, then another & so on. There is one constant in this universe & any other verse, there is no normal.) He might be the best one to stand by her & she'll probably need to hire him, not just to get herself out of a soon to become hectic weekend work overload but to help him out as a good friend should.
(edit: I think I've got that Sheldon bug again.)
hadn't spoke yet - hadn't spoken yet
low-lives - low-lifes
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Another interesting chapter, not a lot of plot development, but plenty of hooks for developing later.
Seems that a certain pony did decide to carry a grudge. Perhaps if she survives her encounter with the power of friendship (and the landing), she'll rethink her options. Either that or she'll continue to try and escalate the situation and wind up dead or in jail.
Not sure if I feel bad for Razz or just disappointed that he's made some rather boneheaded decisions and has to pay that price as well. He'll be lucky if Tabitha doesn't just term his rental agreement and cut him loose if he pushes.
7446321 Typos fixed. Razz admitted his guilt with the guileless way that ponies have, with words that shouldn't be spoken and amplified body language.
7446350 Typos fixed, and you're the first person I've spoken to that sees Razz as doing anything wrong. I was wondering if I was completely off my rocker.
What'd you think of the Grateful Mares?
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Oh, I thought so, but I was curious if it was a cultural thing or just him being creepy (even if it came off as that was, slightly, he was still very friendly in the way most ponies are).
The big question was how she would react to this, especially with the piling stress, and we get a good glimpse now.
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well it's as you said, I figured they were cross between the Grateful Dead and 4 Non Blondes.
I wouldn't mind hearing a few of their tracks.
7446350 Ahh she'll get over it, she needs him.
7446357 In other words he's a bumbling social klutz (know what that feels like) he may have done wrong but not intentionally, I think this is the important thing. Razz guilt trip in 3 ...2 ...1 'BOOM'!
That ending tho ... Poor Razz ... XD
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How does she need him?
Poor, poor typos... happens to the best of us
7446864 She's about to have her apartment block overrun with temporary tenants for a weekend and she has no maintenance or cleaning staff, there's bound to be unforeseen problems with some apartments, she could use as much help as she can get and seems as if he could use a job anyway, win/win. Besides, even after a short term shock like that, I think their mutual friendship is strong enough to endure and progress further.
Razz should be ok as long as Tabitha doenst decide to follow in Eddie Valients footsteps.
A MAN.
I wonder if the Winter Monster gave miss congenitaility the cold shoulder?
Lyra? Whats this about BipedCon? Lyra? STAHP.
It seems to me Razz is engaging in changeling-like activity, enough that we wondered if perhaps the illusion break would still not show him as a changeling if he were disguised. Either that or he's trying too hard. Tabitha stole the question right out of our mind: what does he even do for a living? Someone's definitely desperate...
Attending Anthrocon might be the push we're waiting for, it would help answer her questions on humanity's presence and pressure her to start thinking of her decision before prompted...
Keep going! ;)
A much quicker review than usual on my end:
There are multiple instances of Sugar's name being written as "Candy."
The Grateful Mares seem suspiciously aware that something is off about Tabitha's pony disguise. Are they just perceptive (maybe from years of doing who knows what narcotics)? Or are is at least one of them a changeling in disguise, what with the green eyes and all? After all, being a rock star is a great way to gain the love of the masses...much like being a movie star.
What the hell is up with that thieving unicorn? Stealing tickets is a petty crime all-in-all, but now it's escalated to a revenge-foalnapping? Is this pony part of some gang, or is there something more at work there? Also, shouldn't down-to-Earth Tabitha know to inform the police about what happened to her?
Oh Razz...poor guy. He tries to act normal and ask out a cute pegasus landlady, only to find that she's his dream-girl...and when she susses out his secret, she's repulsed. That's not at all fair to him. He didn't ask to have a fetish for two legs, and he's been incredibly courteous the entire time, even if he was hoping for more. Tabitha was way out of line here.
... I wish I could say she was being harsh/rude, but at the same time, I totally understand where she's coming from, so... *Sighs* Sorry, Razz... Maybe you can get a second chance. You didn't seem like a horrible pony.
well that did not end well.
Um...not trying to be picky but still missing 'by' here as previously mentioned, sorry!
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If Tabitha would just think for a moment, she might consider Razz's attraction a good thing. He was attracted before he knew she was a human so he is not just into her for being a biped. And latter if she goes out on a date, what then? It is going to be a big surprise to any date that their dating out of their species and morphology.
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Or maybe she just doesn't find the idea of dating a small horse at all appealing and would find his constant refusal to take the hint unpleasant no matter why he likes her.
Sold on that one! XD XD XD
BipedCon.... I wonder if a certain mint green unicorn will be there