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Somehow I dont think they bother much with police horse apple bags.
After all, have you seen how big Cod pieces grow?
Pity Tabitha couldnt put a provisio on that boon.
Tabitha:Spring,You are going to enjoy me enjoying you in whatever way you make me.
7479553 You don't want a boon that the fae gets to pick out. Be firm, be polite, and be clear.
Tabitha kinda failed there.
Lots of people think that simply not caring about others and believing that you always know what is right is a bigger source of evil than ill will.
By that metric, Spring is much worse than someone who would do Tabitha ill...
But for the most part those are talking about broad sociological things, not always the effect on one particular person.
But, regardless, Spring is still a frustratingly smug asshole, and every confrontation with her is incredibly polite and non-accusatory, which I'm sure feeds into her attitude that she's done nothing wrong.
7479572 Sounds like she really stole the chapter for you.
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There was more to the chapter?
Just Kidding
7479553 Spring probably wanted to be reamed by Tabs. Hence the ding-dong, if it even works as normal?!
7479736 Well it doesn't work as an ice cream dispenser.
7479741 Not quite what I meant, it might physically work fine but I was thinking can she be a father (or a mother if her other bits still work correctly)?
7479799 She'll have to pin Coco and conduct experiments, for science!
Yeah, as owner of the apartment it is indeed a good thing she is willing to stay there when others would have fled to try and get help.
I wonder how she'll enforce to rules against those who might otherwise not care...
Keep going! ;)
She just remembered - She
justrememberedlet's see a hundred - let's see. A hundred --or-- let's say a hundred
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And life continues.
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Respectfully, it's not her failure if circumstances set her up to fail.
Tabitha didn't know the rules, didn't even know to ask about them, and didn't ask for a boon in the first place.
Fortunately, because she is a good person she built up enough of a circle of friends to buffer her through the worst of what followed.
Are readers really down on Tabitha for not playing the game she didn't know she was participating in?
7479905 More people are on her case for not grabbing the nearest blunt instrument and attacking Spring.
Missed a couple.
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irreverant - irreverent
didn't fit in anyone's neat little - didn't fit into anyone's neat little
7479929 Fixes applied! How was the monster of the second floor, and Coco?
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I don't know the specifics of Everglow elves, if that is where Spring is from, but in mythology they are forces of nature in a form that resembles humankind. One may as well be angry at a thunderstorm or an earthquake, than at Spring for being what she is. I still quite like her as a character for the reason that you're writing her as creature as alien to us as we are to an ant, and not as a human with pointy ears and well developed... magical abilities.
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The tenant on the second floor is as much a mystery as it's ever been, but I think Tabitha may have discovered one of the rules to interacting with him.
Coco is being kind and supportive, as a good friend should be whenever possible. Someone had to get Tabitha out of the apartment building and comfort her when the pony xenophobia reared its ugly head.
7479950 She is more of a mythological elf than any Tolkien elf.
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Then I continue to have no issues with her character.
Nature cannot be blamed for being what it is. However, with care, time/patience, and hard work, perhaps nature can be sculpted into forms that are more easily dealt with, to a point. Beyond that point, it is possible to plan around and avoid some of its more destructive properties.
It reminds me of this moment.
7479802 For research purposes of course!
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You are rapidly becoming one of my favorite writers.
7480819 High praise! But I'm curious what brings it on?
7480883 Well, you seem to portray your characters in a realistic manner. Being turned into a centaur and made half male to boot would not be an easy thing to deal with and you took that into consideration. Whereas most writers here make it so there characters just blithely go on about there business as if nothing untoward had happened to them. You also have a good grasp of setting and your descriptions of the locales are very easy to visualize. Some may not agree with my opinion but then again, it is an opinion, and all have them.
7481391 Quite fair enough. She won't wallow in it as a focus of every chapter and every moment, as that would also not be realistic.
7481409 indeed.
See now that is how you're supposed to run a business. That is true salesponyship. Too many today think customer service means that the customer is the one who is doing the service.
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The situation can change the proper response.