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Begins loading a bag to go Elf hunting. Tabitha, please get back in touch with Luna I want this cleared with her. You do not mess with anythings gender without permission.
It wouldn't be the Silververse if somebody didn't get their junk scrambled.
Well, if she ever gets over how crazy this all is and settles into her new body she has a lot of options open now i'd think. Makes me wonder how this will affect Razz and his interest in her, WAS his interest only because she was human? Will any of it linger after the change, or was there more to it than we thought?
*Looks up at the rating.* Still teen... It's the kind of thing you rarely see in teen, though. There's a different rating that likes females growing penises.
Anyway, that's a little distracting... but this is a pretty good breaking apart.
In particular I like this line:
For some reason that really hammered home the fact that things have changed in a way that is highly alien to her.
7474401 The focus isn't those kinds of shenanigans. I hope I've danced the line gently and avoided all the outright things, not naming names or pointing hooves at what you'd only know if you already knew, as the saying goes.
I could go mature. That would be a different story.
I do hope it's being handled well so far.
Not sure what to say about that, so I'll settle on liking Coco. Good job, Coco.
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That's what she said!
7474339 That, my friend, was very well put.
I did not ask for green eggs and ham. ?
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You did AWESOME!!!
You've done such a good job of expressing the emotional horror there's no room for fetishism in it at all!
Even her form is genuinely discordant beyond any but the most niche!
I wonder if she thinks, on some level, that not evicting Spring allows for the possibility of earning another boon from Spring to turn her back?
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This is my first silververse fic, should i expect that in others?
That elf better get what's coming to her.
The Silver Verse-isms are coming through very strongly here, as Kiki noted.
Ironically, what made me roll my eyes the most wasn't Tabitha going from "normal" to "hermaphroditic pony-centaur." Rather, it was the fact that she was rubbing Coco's mane, with Coco apparently being just fine with that. This always makes me grit my teeth, because it's portrayed as normal, despite how drastically it runs against what we've ever seen in the source material. The ponies don't engage in casual touching - particularly touches designed to cause pleasure - any more than humans do. When's the last time you saw two non-romantic friends caress each other's faces?
Beyond that, the obvious point of note here is that Tabitha is no longer a "her," at least insofar as her genitals are concerned. That's not completely surprising, given how Spring Breeze was reading into Tabitha's desires, though that makes it no less tawdry. I do think that the story is doing a great job with displaying Tabitha's shock, particularly with her failing attempts to try and retain control over some aspect - any aspect - of her life, since this is just the latest example of her not being in control of anything, not even her own body. I am a bit surprised by how helpful Coco is being, since a slight amount of encouragement during the events of Rarity Takes Manehattan seems like it wouldn't warrant this much support, but on the other hoof Coco does seem like a genuine sweetheart, so I can't cast too many aspersions here.
That said, I am revising one of my previous predictions, in that I'm not longer quite so certain that Razz would be repulsed by Tabitha's new status. For all that her new form is an odd fusion of human and pony, the fact remains that she's become a being with the possibility, thanks to having male and female parts, of being sexually libertine. That doesn't mean that she necessarily will, of course (particularly in view of her rather repressed personality), but that she has the equipment to do so.
So what does that have to do with Razz? Well, he's got an exotic fetish, and as a very general rule people who have those tend to be more open-minded with regards to "experimentation" than those who don't. Whereas a lot of ponies would see what Tabitha is packing and be repulsed, Razz might be the sort of pony who'd wonder just what could be done with someone that can be both a mare and a stallion. (Particularly since Tabitha is likely still going to maintain a female gender identity.)
...and with Tabitha's mental state being what it is, she's not going to be in a position to refuse any kind of support network at the moment, even from a weak-willed pony with a thing for humans. That doesn't mean that Razz will push her into doing anything she doesn't want to do; I honestly don't think that he would even if he had it in him to do so. Rather, this is his chance to get closer to her. Tabitha needs someone, anyone who'll stand by her right now - her defenses are down. This is close as she's likely to get (barring more unusual circumstances) to needing someone to ride in and rescue her.
(And, because it needs to be thrown out there, I'm going to call it right now: Razz-Tabitha-Coco threesome!)
7474545 I will drop no spoilers!
7474570 If someone is mauled in a car accident and you find them and keep them company while the ambulance is on the way. You try to keep them talking while you keep an eye on them the best you can, but you don't know what to do. You're just there, that's all you can do.
They're hurt, so very hurt. They're rambling but trying to hold on. One of their hands lands on your face. They start pawing at you, talking still. The touching isn't appropriate, of course it isn't.
Do you shove them away? Do you flee?
Coco made her decision, and I think it was a mature and kind one to make.
I am extremely confused about how a human-sized upper body could ever fit on top of a pony lower body that's any smaller than Celestia. Did I miss a description in all this about how the scale of everything works out?
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I have enjoyed it, yes, and I understand that an actual adult version of the story would probably be very different.
I would continue to be careful with any direct references. What's posted is probably already borderline. It's not strictly try sexual content, but the literary equivalent of "nudity", even a nonerotic version, will earn a mature rating on this site sometimes. I'm not sure where the line actually is.
It was highly unexpected, though, and I was pretty shocked by it.
7474339 The trouble with this is now i feel a herd coming on! Maybe?
7474431 Though I can't seem to tell with you!
7474545 ♫♪ We're not gonna tell.♬ ♭ ♮ (⊙_◎)
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Sort of. In chapter 15 there was this line:
...I interpreted that as being indicative of her human upper half having been scaled down to been proportional to her new pony lower body.
7474597 I totes ship Tabitha with the yeti. Yetis are freaky like like that. That's not a stereotype, it's a fact.
7474650 As long as it's not the squid/octopus (still don't know which one it's supposed to be?), we don't need no frickin hentai.
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This is a beautiful comparison.
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I think the human upper half got scaled down proportionally.
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That's gonna be a problem, i don't bother reading completed works unless i get some spoilers to interest me.
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Well, that alleviates the body horror just a little bit. It also means her hands should now be little baby hands, so that'll be fun.
7474716 OK...a thousand pregnant mares in less than a month...from one stallion! Peak your interest?
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Not baby hands, teenager hands.
All that mattered in the scaling process was that her waist match the breadth of her pony shoulders.
Female Adult waists tend to be not that much wider than a pony, especially for someone as plain and uncurved as Tabitha was.
The shrinkage needed was minimal. Also, for a mental image you can use this image the author posted earlier for approximation, since a non-eqg human has a MUCH different build:
pre04.deviantart.net/40c7/th/pre/f/2014/251/4/0/my_little_centaur_by_agat8848-d7ygivq.jpg
So yes, there is plenty of body horror still in play! D:
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I wonder more about how The Monster On The Second Floor will react!
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Who is Sony?
7474716 Okay, is you insist. There's pirate raping, Cthullu is weak against song magic, and a big chunk of all of it happens in a subliminal demi-plane. Oh, and Pinkie Pie starts a plague on earth that turns humans into deformed rape-crazy ponies. And yes, I AM serious. Those are real spoilers.
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Okay but, are those all in the Clueless in Equestria book series or just among his other stuff?
7474760 Various places in the Silververse. You'll know it when you see it. If you want Clueless in Equestria Spoilers: Lyra is really bad at transformation magic, and something very similar to what happens here happens there, at almost the exact same point in the timeline. And that's it, that's all the spoilers you're getting from me.
7474545 From what i have read i can not say truthfully that you should expect it in EVERY one but it does seem to be a somewhat common thread, the gender issues i mean, of course.
well this is going to be different.
a centaur that is a mare and a stallion I am betting the mare will be dominate.
muster that will - muster the will
Tabitha pet - Tabitha petted her
what's between her legs - what's between their legs
left that office - left the office
*****
I feel a little better after today's chapter. Despite the additional twist of her nature, Tabitha seems to be in a better situation.
Efforts at friendship really pay off in magic pony land.
7475377 I can't help but notice the complete lack of shock in all long time readers.
7475377 Typos escorted out.
7474760 Treat the silververse stories like 'Inception'.
7475523 We all seem to be suffering long term 'silver shell shock', or is it Ramboisms?tse2.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.M3240bb64f70d8eb5bfbe79e5885be9f2o0&pid=15.1&P=0&w=320&h=144
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The things I've seen reading Silver'verse...
Coco wins Best Friend of the Month award! So tolerant and understanding!
Now the question being, will Tabitha build her cover story, or choose Honesty?
7475523 yeah, we're used to it by now.
Keep going! ;)
7474743 as another point of biology, she now has eight limbs, making her a spider.
;)
The ad at the bottom was for Halloween costumes. In the middle of August.
7474657 Hey, tentacled horrors from the depths of space need love too!
edit: On that subject, it would be interesting to see Tabby's reaction to gaining a Vuni-spawn as a renter. I won't feel bad if you choose to ignore the idea; it's just a suggestion.
Well, time to go hunt us some fairy bitch. Good thing we Germans just know how to deal with them pretty folk.*gets red string, a horse shoe, a solid iron frying pan, some holy water and a scissor*
7580734 The scissors may be the most important bit.
So, who didn't see that coming? Wait, really? You didn't see it coming? Then clearly you didn't bother to read the comments... philistine.
7475011 Given that the human part still has tits? And we've seen that she is rather attached to her femininity? That is a pretty damn safe bet.
Oh god! That poor woman. If that was me, I would end up murdering that damned elf for what she did. There HAS to have been some serious crime in that shit.
Generally I’m not a fan of transformation. Nor am I of romance(unless it’s written very well) or RGRE. I like the concept of the story and general going ons of running an apartment building in some strange new world, but unless the story has some major redeeming value to me I generally have low tolerance for even the smallest things I dislike.
It’s annoying being so picky because I tend to miss out on a lot of good stories, and with me in need of finding something to read. But anyways, the transformation here is tipping the edge of the ticks, so one more story I can add to the bucket of stories I didn’t finish.
It’s a shame because I was really enjoying the story and concept. Now I find myself with hundreds of stories in my read it later list and not interested in reading any of them again.