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Ahh,the english language. So many ways to seperate people who believe they are saying the same thing the other person is hearing.
Sunflower? What did I miss?
Coco
7507975 Fixed!
Not sure if this should be ponies?
? = and give
Like I said, confrontation, just not the one I expected yet.
Can't wait til she develops those photos.
dram is heading to the next chapter or too.
some how I get the felling that Razz is just to young to really under stand when a mare is just using him and when he has most defiantly bucked up.
7507988 Some of that tweaked. Even the show isn't consistent about the pony thing.
7508033 Wasn't sure if she was including other inhabitants like minotaurs, gryphons, diamond dogs, dragons, e.t.c. but also wasn't sure if they even used the word people, Silver had that same problem didn't he?
7508028 Knowing a friend for years and then living with them as a partner he'll find is two different things I believe.
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as the saying is bean there did that and lost a friend in the deal.
And the drama thickens between Razz and Tabitha.
I highly doubt Razz x Bubbles will last
to get that film - to get the film
She saw at least - She had seen at least --or-- She'd seen at least
Tabitha decied Bubbles - Tabitha decided Bubbles
This is a style trick when quoted dialogue breaks across paragraphs.
Did she really just tell - Had she really just told
If I'm reading this correctly, Tabitha smiles, then Coco speaks. It's a little confusing. Unless it's supposed to be-
*****
An unusually dramatic day with equally unusual typos to hunt down.
Bubbles and her attitude do not bode well for a healthy relationship with Razz, but perhaps he will be good for her and a closer bond will be good for them both. It was hinted in the main Silververse that a little rough physical contact is not unusual between ponies, but there has to be a line somewhere and she seems the sort that may cross it in her reflex to punch anything that makes her uncomfortable.
She seems much more attached to Trap today than she did earlier, when her attitude to Trap leaving and going his own way seemed to be, "Don't forget to write."
Will Tabitha and Coco be good for one another? Only time will tell there, as well. Neither of them seems to really know what they're doing, or why at this point, but I hope they find happiness in the end.
I had been wondering just how large the building was, too.
7508103 Typos hacked away at to clear the way. Tabitha has a last name! Who woulda thunk it?
Maybe she should just go with Easy Glider?
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An alliterative last name too! Stan Lee would be proud.
Wow, the fallout from what's going on is rather more volatile than how smoothly things have been proceeding up until now...and given that things really haven't been all that smooth, that's saying something!
Tabitha...is finally finding out that the choices that you don't make have a way of being made for you. She never returned Razz's affection, but at the same time she never firmly rejected him either. Now, on the morning after their first intimate encounter, she's still reeling when she's told that Bubbles has taken him away, or at least she's claimed that she has. I suspect that she's as surprised as anyone that she feels as upset by that as she does. Given that, I suspect that Tabitha might need to sit down and figure out exactly what she really wants; unfortunately, she seems to be naturally bad at that, as everything about her personality screams "don't ruminate; act." Throw in all the changes she's been dealing with - her new home, her new body, an attempt on her life, and now a threesome - and it's understandable that she'd been completely lost.
She might not be in the best place to make a decision, but life is like that sometimes; just because you're not in the right head-space to act doesn't mean that things will slow down and wait for you to get your act together.
Insofar as Coco goes, I was very happy with what we saw of her here. This is what I mentioned before: a new aspect of herself, unseen in the source material, that's a crack in her Little Miss Perfect guise. Specifically, her heartbreak regarding having been so casually dumped has now made her react badly to even the appearance of something like that happening again, whether to her or to someone she likes. She should have been at least a little happy that Razz was backing out, since she was telling him to do just that. Instead, she snapped at him for reasons that she doesn't understand herself. So why is that a big deal? Well, this gets in the way of her trying to take Tabitha for herself - Coco can't monopolize Tabitha when she's warring with herself to try and make sure that Razz doesn't hurt Tabitha's feelings.
But the real meat of this chapter, at least for me, was at the very end. The part with Razz was small, but very insightful into his character. I complained before that we didn't know why he decided to choose Bubbles over Tabitha, but I'm starting to glean a bit of insight now...Bubbles is easier.
That is, Razz chose Bubbles mostly because she's the path of least resistance. Tabitha has been reluctant (if not outright rejecting him) at every turn, even not letting him mount her last night; Bubbles, on the contrary, has been chasing him for a long time. Tabitha's mindset is pretty clearly a mystery to Razz; he knows Bubbles like the back of his hoof. Tabitha has a competitor for her affection now; Bubbles has no one trying to take her away. Being with Tabitha would require Razz to do some painful growing up; being with Bubbles doesn't require anything of him. Being with Tabitha makes him a pervert; being with Bubbles makes him a normal stallion with a marefriend. Etc.
In other words, I don't think that Razz's decision had much to do with who he liked more, or any of the more important aspects of deciding whom you want to be in a relationship with. Rather, he did exactly what he's likely done his entire life, and take the easy way out. The result of which makes me question how happy he'll be with Bubbles, and how happy he can make her.
Yes, drown your sorrows with food and drink ;-;
*Adds to favorites*
7508303 You're so fast to cast shame on Razz. I don't think the hardest path is, by merit of being hardest, is 'better'.
I could do a lot of hard things that aren't wise at this point.
7508832 Thomas Paine said "What we obtain too cheap, we esteem too lightly: it is dearness only that gives every thing its value." I believe that Razz would find a relationship with Tabitha more worthwhile because it's something he'd have to earn, and earn by making himself into a better stallion. Or he could just settle down with Bubbles without having to change who he is.
This isn't to say that any of this is a reflection on who Tabitha and Bubbles are as individuals - though given that Tabitha is a responsible landlady and Bubbles is an ill-mannered thug, that argument could certainly be made - but rather that only one of them will, simply by being who she is, encourage Razz to pursue excellence. So yeah, I feel pretty confident in saying that, where the two women in his life are concerned, the harder choice is better simply because it's harder.
The love triangle shimmers! And Coco helps tapping on it.
Keep going! ;)
"There's
Daremo is almost right here. When continuing a quote onto a new paragraph, the first one doesn't require an end-quote, but the second one does require a beginning quote.
7509745 Tweaked!
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Oops.
Her name is Tabitha Lawrence in chapter one.
So... what happened to that mare from the end of chapter 26?
Was she actually a tenant? Was she actually a pony?
Speaking of characters that were momentarily imminent but then poofed out of existence... what ever happened to that magic savvy expert Luna was supposed to send?
8071972 Keep your eyes open. She is coming.
So, her name has been retconned from Taylor to Laurence.. But the bit about it must be destiny because it sounds like Tailor is still in there. I was very very confused, until I read the comments.