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Well Tabby sure has interesting dreams
But, then again, who can blame her?
I don't like debts over my head, try to get rid of them asap. Outside of normal public utilities, am currently debt free.
this was from ch:3
And now we have an octopus? (I only noticed this as at the time I'd associated it with Nemo's Nautilus being attacked by a giant squid in the movies, the things that pop in my head?)
Sorry to ask but I must be too tired to guess, so what is the rest of this word please?
Shame she didn't hook up with Silver, maybe they could have done a basic phone line hookup with their computers to message each other or online game together for that extra feeling of home.
but had become - but had appeared
building stripped away. - building stripped away?
scout through forest - scout through the forest --or-- scout through forests
wizard who's name - wizard whose name
like nothing happened - like nothing had happened
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I liked this chapter. Spring Breeze has a personality as mercurial as her name would suggest, excellent writing and characterization for a non-human intelligence. Spring is just enough like a human to be recognizable, but just different enough to be unsettling.
For the record: For non-elves, metal is also easier to sanitize and lasts longer than wood. Early cast iron cookware may also have provided some nutritional benefit as well in the form of iron oxide.
Still, this indicates to me that Spring is possibly the sort of elf with a vulnerability to cold iron, though if she could tolerate being enclosed in a steel elevator, not to mention living in an apartment building built with a steel frame, for any amount of time she is perhaps not as sensitive to its presence as the sidhe.
It's also been interesting to see this Princess Luna and compare to the Luna that she will later become after a few million words of story and character development.
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I assumed it went from squid to octopus due to dream logic and didn't think on it too long.
The Third Option Dream? Hm.
And, yeah, Spring seems like a rather frustrating experience.
7460390 Sorry I'm just a stickler for continuity, either that or there is more than one creature in 'apartment space'!
7460385 I thought it was fairies had a aversion of being burned by iron (e.g. Maleficent)
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In Irish (and neo-Irish) mythology it's almost all fey that are poisoned by 'cold iron'. Which makes it a little ironic that humans and elves get along in fantasy settings at all, given that humans have iron in their blood and require it in their diet to remain healthy.
7460561 Fair enough, haven't studied Irish myth, guessing Tolkien didn't either when he wrote LOTR?
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7460288 Typos fixed, but no comments on the not-dreaming part of this chapter?
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I can't think of anything to say about the rest ... hehe
7460666 So besides pine...something and magic, what else was in the gooey breakfast food? Also if Spring feeds her elf food continuously, will we likely see Tabby develop a magical ability? When will she and Coco sit down to discuss Tabby's past?
7460731 It tasted like butter and cheese got together and partied in her mouth. She was alright with it, if a bit worried about the consequences of eating elven magic.
A nice and sedate conversation with Coco might be exactly what's called for.
Luna is intrigued ! Would that be why she was present... Nice tie!
Keep going! ;)
life is starting to get completed for Tabitha.
this story is getting interesting.
Thats definitely a serious amount of magic distortion if Luna is coming round personally and quickly to investigate. So far theres three beings that can write that Email. Discord, The Doctor, and anyone with Auditor abilities?
That Elf power though. Body modification is tricky enough, Twiligh and Princess level, but Natures Fury? Thats what you use when you dont want to unload an entire squadron of heavy bombers carrying full dispensers of nukes. Or you want to destroy several thousand square miles in less than a day. Even a single twister in the right place and the right time can take out a heavy mechanised army. At least I think terminal velocity of a tank is higher than 350 mph, but when its being bombarded with 20 ton trucks at that speed, Im pretty sure it wont remain working for much longer.
Im now thinking of Luna visiting th Space Squid room because she wants a certain beak sharpening item for Philomena.
7460748 Them elfin roofies. She got hem from a nice changeling who was cagey about his name.
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My reaction to the rest was summarized with expressing that Spring is rather frustrating...
I'm trying to put "she's got an alien mindset" in my head, to try to excuse her condescending and demanding attitude, so that I'm not so much angry at her as just put off!
7460577 Tolkien's elves were far more Norse than Irish.
That poor eldritch horror! All it wants are hugs, and it keeps getting the door slammed in its face-analog!
Eleven chapters in and only Coco was close to asking the right question but her timidity won out :T