You find yourself as Pinkie's special birthday present, but she likes a good game before any actual play time. Enjoy running through distractions from the residences of Ponyville as you track down your target, but will you win in the end?
Still furious, still steamed, sti-FLUTTERSHY!? Well… This has taken a turn for the incredibly interesting. The plot has been immersive, the characters have been both interesting and in-character, and the solid means of story execution has flowed well throughout the chapters. Let’s see how the final Distraction turns out.
… “Tears dropped to the gravel and grass” – ‘dropped’ is past tense, when ‘drop’ is presently suitable. … “beach just passed” – ‘passed’ should be ‘past’.
I can’t help but feel Fluttershy was a bit underutilized. Maybe it’s just me, but I saw a lot more potential here… at least some comforting of the wound, maybe a hoof massage… Yeah, you’re burning daylight, but I’d be damned if I’d let Fluttershy just walk home! Sure, I’m meant to be in Equestria for a specific reason… but Fluttershy just got hurt enough for bruising to show THROUGH the coat!
I dunno… I’m not really feeling the “lust-ridden” aspect at this point. Maybe it’s because of how things have been handled, but despite a lack of anything happening with Fluttershy, I kinda wanted to at least be sure she would be fine… Hmm… Maybe I should continue.
Oh god, I hurt Flutters!? No no no no no! Not her! I like her too much to keep running! Nope, won't continue running! She's kind, adorable, an if she's hurt, I WILL comfort her! Too adorable not to.
Still furious, still steamed, sti-FLUTTERSHY!?![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
The plot has been immersive, the characters have been both interesting and in-character, and the solid means of story execution has flowed well throughout the chapters. Let’s see how the final Distraction turns out.
Well… This has taken a turn for the incredibly interesting.
… “Tears dropped to the gravel and grass” – ‘dropped’ is past tense, when ‘drop’ is presently suitable.
… “beach just passed” – ‘passed’ should be ‘past’.
I can’t help but feel Fluttershy was a bit underutilized. Maybe it’s just me, but I saw a lot more potential here… at least some comforting of the wound, maybe a hoof massage… Yeah, you’re burning daylight, but I’d be damned if I’d let Fluttershy just walk home! Sure, I’m meant to be in Equestria for a specific reason… but Fluttershy just got hurt enough for bruising to show THROUGH the coat!
I dunno… I’m not really feeling the “lust-ridden” aspect at this point. Maybe it’s because of how things have been handled, but despite a lack of anything happening with Fluttershy, I kinda wanted to at least be sure she would be fine…![:fluttershyouch:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershyouch.png)
Hmm… Maybe I should continue.
Who the hell would just leave Fluttershy after seeing her crying because of themselves? Not me, hell no!
Oh god, I hurt Flutters!? No no no no no! Not her! I like her too much to keep running! Nope, won't continue running! She's kind, adorable, an if she's hurt, I WILL comfort her! Too adorable not to.
Time to dawn my top-hat and be the gentleman here
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I would punch myself if I accidentally hit Flutters ;w;
WHY GAWD, WHY?!
//cries and holdes Flutters
Who ever left Fluttershy needs they ass beat.