Now now, AJ is just against porn. Sex between consenting adults who are married is another thing entirely. What she would object to is the fact that her Granny was committing adultery her entire married life with the kindly zebra she always knew as 'uncle Zeke' until he became 'Grampy Zeke.'
nice twists to the story you evil genius but the last part, *shrugs* i don't think its a good idea reading something like that while picturing every image in your head
Not going to lie, I skipped most of this chapter. All I really read was the arguing between Applejack and Iron Will and the crowd confronting Rarity. The talks between the Diamond Dogs and Spike very quickly reminded me of clucking chickens so I rolled my eyes and skipped over it.
I also skipped the last scene when I saw immediately where it was going. For the love of Celestia, avoid the squick. It's why some clopfics, and as a matter of fact, lemon fics in general, are utter garbage. Also, trolling doesn't make you any friends.
So you skipped the comedy... in the comedy fic? A bold choice but I respect it. Get used to skipping, Spike is the designated buttmonkey.
Also... Is it so hard to read the comments? That's not trolling. In the universe it's a showing of hypocricy, Granny and Zeke going on about morals while confessing to decades-long adultery. Out of the univers, as I said, because of the character designs I am not repulsed by the idea of Granny and an old zebra getting it on. But I accept the tastes of others, though often grudgingly given some of the things I have read.
Not because it was comedy, honestly. I skipped it because I could easily predict how the scene was going to unfold. Going back and actually reading it, I was pretty much spot on. As funny as it might be, it's less funny when you know the joke :D
Hmm. Well, the ick factor always plays a role here. And I'm cynical.
Well, that dog does give us a "bad pron actor" so that Iron Will can shine more, one who´s egoistical, more on the mean side (talking down on a baby dragon? Dog, you got lower than low) and, maybe that´s just me though, seems sex-hungry enough to force Rarity even if she says "no, not today". Dunno, but till now i thought we´d only get "the bad bad goverment guys" vs the "good good porn actors", seems like we do have a bit of diversity. Both AJ and Iron gave good points and i agree when Rarity did the whole two dicks going hard into her while she was in her uhm ,eight (?) month i really wasn´t sure if Rarity really has the best in the mind for her child or if she craves sex with dogs so much the first thing she´ll do after having born her kid is sucking a "hot dog". I dunno, expect for Twi/Iron/shy the other characters seems kinda vague to me, like they could get to do anything, from good to grey stuff to bad, and it would still fit with them unlike lets say if Iron would suddenly rape AJ just for funs.
I´m interested to see what other ploys Twi got in mind to get the porn industry down and when she´ll open her mind (and vagina/asshole/mouth) to sex and start liking it. Or gets raped and then saved by RD, as i said, so far it looks like it got go both ways.
Eh, the Dogs are just dudes. They aren't meant to be bad. Spike started it with his "White knight, Nice Guy" routine trying to "save" Rarity because he can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality.
Oh and she knows what she's doing. She's a professional and would never endanger the child for which she cares deeply.
Telephone trees: For those who grew up in the American suburbs and had PTA moms, or who watched movies and shows aboutthe same, telephone tree has a particular meaning: a series of names that a particular person must call in a particular situation such as an emergency or a needed notation. It works like this, someone has a message to pass (like a porn protest) so they call a few names at the top of the tree. Those folks call other, pre-designated folks and so on until everyone is informed.
Maybe I was a little amused. I'm not squicked but I understand others are. Honestly I would totally read a Granny Smith clop story. Sure, the character bugs me but the design is fine.
That was a one-time thing, I'm afraid. As cute as I found writing it and as much as I like them I just have no place for more of them.
I am a ridiculously big fan of sentient interspecies relations (Ponies and zebras, donkeys, Diamond Dogs, Changelings, buffalo, dragons, in any gender) and have lately had a thing for Diamond Dogs. They get so little love I've been fixing that. As for Rarity, it sort of plays off of "Dog and Pony Show" and sort of has to do with her being elegant and especially "pony." The species contrast is all the higher. It makes her selfless love and adoration all the more pure and sweet.
Porn doesn't condone rape, and besides isn't it the responsibility of the parent to make sure there kids don't watch it. jebus man I hope applejack can shut the fuck up, also twilight is a bitchbecause she is a virgin so she is mad, and also spike might join in this studio which is a funny thought. All I can say is this story is awesome.
Comment posted by Johnny Walker deleted Jul 31st, 2015
MMMMMMM......
DAT HYPOCRISY.
I LUV IT.
Ah, hypocrisy.
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Plus old people sex Because of the character designs I am less repulsed by the idea for ponies.
Old people/pony sex still icks me out.
Granny Smith having secret sex with a zebra while her granddaughter is protesting against it?
Best thing EVER!
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Now now, AJ is just against porn. Sex between consenting adults who are married is another thing entirely. What she would object to is the fact that her Granny was committing adultery her entire married life with the kindly zebra she always knew as 'uncle Zeke' until he became 'Grampy Zeke.'
2512110 I did say 'secret sex with a zebra', and that was what I meant.
nice twists to the story you evil genius but the last part, *shrugs* i don't think its a good idea reading something like that while picturing every image in your head
it's times like this i'm glad people actually listen to a guy with a minigun.
Well it's not like you don't have material to work with IRL with the PTC and the like.
Spike, dude. Stop. You're just going to get kicked in the nuts.
I could have done without that last scene ,but I can imagine you giggling all the while, while writing it.
I wondered how you were going to work Spike and Rarity's relationship into this. Now to see if he gets let down easy or shut down hard.
Not going to lie, I skipped most of this chapter. All I really read was the arguing between Applejack and Iron Will and the crowd confronting Rarity. The talks between the Diamond Dogs and Spike very quickly reminded me of clucking chickens so I rolled my eyes and skipped over it.
I also skipped the last scene when I saw immediately where it was going. For the love of Celestia, avoid the squick. It's why some clopfics, and as a matter of fact, lemon fics in general, are utter garbage. Also, trolling doesn't make you any friends.
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So you skipped the comedy... in the comedy fic? A bold choice but I respect it. Get used to skipping, Spike is the designated buttmonkey.
Also... Is it so hard to read the comments? That's not trolling. In the universe it's a showing of hypocricy, Granny and Zeke going on about morals while confessing to decades-long adultery. Out of the univers, as I said, because of the character designs I am not repulsed by the idea of Granny and an old zebra getting it on. But I accept the tastes of others, though often grudgingly given some of the things I have read.
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Not because it was comedy, honestly. I skipped it because I could easily predict how the scene was going to unfold. Going back and actually reading it, I was pretty much spot on. As funny as it might be, it's less funny when you know the joke :D
Hmm. Well, the ick factor always plays a role here. And I'm cynical.
poor Spike, i hope he comes around in the end
That last scene is evil. EVIL!!!
XDDD
Well, that dog does give us a "bad pron actor" so that Iron Will can shine more, one who´s egoistical, more on the mean side (talking down on a baby dragon? Dog, you got lower than low) and, maybe that´s just me though, seems sex-hungry enough to force Rarity even if she says "no, not today". Dunno, but till now i thought we´d only get "the bad bad goverment guys" vs the "good good porn actors", seems like we do have a bit of diversity.
Both AJ and Iron gave good points and i agree when Rarity did the whole two dicks going hard into her while she was in her uhm ,eight (?) month i really wasn´t sure if Rarity really has the best in the mind for her child or if she craves sex with dogs so much the first thing she´ll do after having born her kid is sucking a "hot dog".
I dunno, expect for Twi/Iron/shy the other characters seems kinda vague to me, like they could get to do anything, from good to grey stuff to bad, and it would still fit with them unlike lets say if Iron would suddenly rape AJ just for funs.
I´m interested to see what other ploys Twi got in mind to get the porn industry down and when she´ll open her mind (and vagina/asshole/mouth) to sex and start liking it.
Or gets raped and then saved by RD, as i said, so far it looks like it got go both ways.
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Eh, the Dogs are just dudes. They aren't meant to be bad. Spike started it with his "White knight, Nice Guy" routine trying to "save" Rarity because he can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality.
Oh and she knows what she's doing. She's a professional and would never endanger the child for which she cares deeply.
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Reread Spike's introduction, he's a miniature dragon here, not a baby; a baby dragon with his personality would be kind of creepy.
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Yup, you have to be careful, not celibate.
Anyway, time for notes.
telephone trees. What?
into ins mouth. his
toady," The. toady," the / Beryl!" She cried. Beryl!" she cried. Again with the dialogue grammar.
said, Loud. loud.
The closing scene, ah the closing scene. You laughed evilly when you wrote that didn't you, knowing how many would be squicked out.
So we have AJ being the crusader, is Pinkie going to pop up sometime soon?
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Telephone trees: For those who grew up in the American suburbs and had PTA moms, or who watched movies and shows aboutthe same, telephone tree has a particular meaning: a series of names that a particular person must call in a particular situation such as an emergency or a needed notation. It works like this, someone has a message to pass (like a porn protest) so they call a few names at the top of the tree. Those folks call other, pre-designated folks and so on until everyone is informed.
Maybe I was a little amused. I'm not squicked but I understand others are. Honestly I would totally read a Granny Smith clop story. Sure, the character bugs me but the design is fine.
Pinkie... just guess who she might be.
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Watch out for those Mares in Black. They know where the aliens are buried.
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I wish I could take credit but Bronystories did Photo's line. I provided Hoity's straight line. But glad it amuses
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Ah, I see. My family prefers to just call people randomly, or my grandmother, whichever.
As for a Granny Smith story, Crowley's doing one next.
I already guessed about Pinkie and I was wrong, now I have no idea.
I'll never look at Granny Smith the same way again.
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Link?
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Not posted yet, should be coming soon, though Crowley soon is like Blizzard soon.
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Please do keep me posted. It should prove interesting.
More Trixie/Gilda.
Also interesting choice to pair Rarity with the Diamond Dogs. How did this come about?
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That was a one-time thing, I'm afraid. As cute as I found writing it and as much as I like them I just have no place for more of them.
I am a ridiculously big fan of sentient interspecies relations (Ponies and zebras, donkeys, Diamond Dogs, Changelings, buffalo, dragons, in any gender) and have lately had a thing for Diamond Dogs. They get so little love I've been fixing that. As for Rarity, it sort of plays off of "Dog and Pony Show" and sort of has to do with her being elegant and especially "pony." The species contrast is all the higher. It makes her selfless love and adoration all the more pure and sweet.
Porn doesn't condone rape, and besides isn't it the responsibility of the parent to make sure there kids don't watch it. jebus man I hope applejack can shut the fuck up, also twilight is a bitchbecause she is a virgin so she is mad, and also spike might join in this studio which is a funny thought. All I can say is this story is awesome.