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Gilda - Erased from History!

- This story follows up from Sweetie Belle Time Travels -
After entering a tomb of the blue flame, Gilda finds herself erased from all the memories in the future and is stuck in the past forever, what is her life like and how will she live it?

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sjosten

sjosten #1 · Mar 21st, 2013 · · ·

I should have known you wouldn't let us down while Sweetie Belle Time Travels is on temporary hiatus. I did see something I thought I'd point out:

What's wrong, Gilda?" a yellow colt asked [other words], "Name's Gilda."

It sounds like Gilda is introducing herself to somepony who already knows her name. Now, I can understand if Gilda wasn't paying attention when Apple Crust said her name, but I would appreciate if you cleared things up for me. Thanks.