This story is a sequel to In The Darkest of Hours
In the aftermath of Nightmare Moon taking over Equestria and plunging the world into an endless night many things changes. Follow Twilight, or Fallen Star as most know her nowadays as, as she and her 'friends' travel around the world, fighting to keep themselves safe of the dangers that lurk in the omnipresent darkness. Will Twilight ever go back to Equestria, or will she move on and start a new life? And where are the whispers, that seems to haunt her every waking moment, coming from? Are they simply her own minds creation, or is there something more to it?
While reading In The Darkest of Hours is not necessary, it is recommended as some things are easier understood that way.
All comments are welcome! I love to hear your thoughts, just remember to be civil folks! That's it, enjoy!
Did not read tho
7115650 Well, I'm working so that reading both will give you ideas on some things, but they will be explained in this story nonetheless, just later on.
good story
7119198 Thank you, I must confess that the latest chapter was inspired by The Clockwork Consequence and The Conquering of Love. Both are stories that I enjoyed.
Good job
Rainbow dash is a traitor plan and simple is she were actually loyal she would be leading a resistance.
Slight issue with the action part; there's no indication of Dash actually doing anything that would render Star unconscious, so it reads a bit abrupt and weird.
7137583 She jabbed her horn after knocking her to the ground. That should be enough, remember that she was knocked down from behind, at high speeds, and then struck at an important nervous system. If you have something you think I should add do tell me, but I'm not trying to make them invincible. The reason someone wears armor is to protect the body, it's not just for decoration. I hope you understand my thought process on this now.
7139265 Oh, no, not complaining about it happening or anything. It's not like Star is some sort of hoof-to-hoof expert.
It's not really clear what action Dash took (other than catching up to Star), that's all. The way it's worded, even the jab at her horn was aborted.
I wonder how the story would progress, it's really interesting.
7139356 Woops, that I agree with. Ugh, this is why I need to get a proofreader...
Thanks for pointing that out.
YOU HAVE MY ATTENTION.
In the beginning of you your description you say " Nightmare tacking over" think you meant taking
7205773 I most certainly did, I'm not sure how I missed that. Thanks for pointing that out.
Well, seems like Comet is waking up...
hmmmmmmm I think it either comet or celeita that is talk to twilight,
7231874 Could be Nightmare Moon... I wouldn't know as everything is in quantum superstition until I have posted a chapter...
7231887 or it could be luna who trap within nightmare moon, that would be cool,
7231889 Completely possible.
7231894 anyway good story, cant wait for more
7231894 it seems that you are in need of a cover art. I would be happy to draw you one just pm me anytime.
I absolutely loved reading this chapter
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter
i have a feeling rainbow and "star" are gonna be best friends
Rip.
Wow so Twilight has Gilda and these Gryphons scared shitless? Nice
Seriously, its not enough to where she is banished from Equestria, now NMM has her guards chasing her down.