7698410 True, but I doubt the author will fix this. He's reuploading this, which is his first story, technical errors and all. If he wanted to update those I'm sure he would have.
Welp, that's it for me. Was really enjoying this, but the whole 'marked' thing kind of ruined it for me. I get what you're going for, but it just got weird...and kind of dumb.
Yeah I think I'm done here, I enjoyed it for a bit but I like my action to much for this slice of life style. your other stories after this are mostly good.
So I found out that my home is a little out of town but not by much. I honestly had no problems with it, though ponyville is not by any means a loud and busy place. I have always liked the sense of being alone in the wild. I probably wouldn't do anything like that, but it's fun to pretend.
I have never been any good at picking out presents. Everyone says it's the thought that counts but I have never felt that way, at least when it comes to what I give them.
As a perpetual amnesiac with no memory of his previous life or self, he can't actually make these statements unless he was actually capable of remembering what he was like and had memories to work with...
Good grief. Now he's attracting the young 'uns.
I feel Rainbow stop in her tracks as she asks. “Are you read big guy?”
"Are you ready big guy?"
Missed a 'y'.
reverse molestation
To be young and in love... NOT!
Ahh that awkward moment moment when I kid confesses to you.
7698410 True, but I doubt the author will fix this. He's reuploading this, which is his first story, technical errors and all. If he wanted to update those I'm sure he would have.
Just letting you know!
Well that happend.
Welp, that's it for me. Was really enjoying this, but the whole 'marked' thing kind of ruined it for me. I get what you're going for, but it just got weird...and kind of dumb.
I wish you luck on finishing this thing.
I don't know why I still read this
Not bad. Just needs work,like how everything is going to fast,but then again what would I know
It's 'marking'.
Yeah I think I'm done here, I enjoyed it for a bit but I like my action to much for this slice of life style. your other stories after this are mostly good.
As a perpetual amnesiac with no memory of his previous life or self, he can't actually make these statements unless he was actually capable of remembering what he was like and had memories to work with...
I think MC will adopt Scootaloo, but the backstory talk keeps getting put off. Rainbow has only mentioned the Wonderbolts once or twice so far, too.