Well I have to say that when I readed to the six chapter I could conclude that this history is pretty awesome but I can´t shake the feeling that this is a mix of the fanfics ¨Xenophilia¨ and ¨a not brony in equestria¨ with a little bit more spicy.
“She has requested to not be seen by anypony.” Celestia then smiled at me. “Seeing as you aren't a pony, I think it should be fine.” She stood from her throne. “Follow me Anon.” She then looked to the others. “You five may wait in the dining hall if you like. This shouldn't take too long.”
“It wasn’t one sided, I kept pushing her even when she gave me fair warning. To punish her even when I do not want to press charges is rather odd.”
Celestia sighed as though the weight of the world rested on her shoulder. "Twilight's is being punished because she has great magical powers and abilities. With great power comes great responsibility. Also, what Twilight will be subjected to is a refining process. Just as you wouldn't want a metal tool to be weak because of dross affecting it, so too the counseling and meditations which Twilight will undergo shall, I hope, remove her undesirable traits and forge her into a better pony, ally, and friend."
“She has requested to not be seen by anypony.” Celestia then smiled at me. “Seeing as you aren't a pony, I think it should be fine.” She stood from her throne. “Follow me Anon.” She then looked to the others. “You five may wait in the dining hall if you like. This shouldn't take too long.”
Man, i love cultural loopholes fcking troll monarch
Well I have to say that when I readed to the six chapter I could conclude that this history is pretty awesome but I can´t shake the feeling that this is a mix of the fanfics ¨Xenophilia¨ and ¨a not brony in equestria¨ with a little bit more spicy.
7687921 Agreed Ponissar, sir!
You know I've always been a big fan of your work ever since "Pretty in Pink" showed up in the Featured box.
That being said, it's not hard to see that this was your first piece of MLP fanfiction.
You've come a long way, and I can't wait for your other stories to update and for new stories from you.
This is getting so hard to read. Go on without me.
Wait, didn't she try to rape him earlier? And now they're just ignoring it completely? How- Why- ...This makes no sense!
So...Rarity and Pinkie is right out as members of the herd, that leave the rest, and Twilight is in consideration state for the herd.
Emotional rollercoaster. I mean, dayum!
7712384 well as Dave Chapelle says: " if ya get raped you just gotta walk that shit off."
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I’m drawing a blank there as well.
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Nice
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Considering how old this story is I suspect it pioneered the 'Anon as a passive doormat' trope.
Man, i love cultural loopholes
fcking troll monarch