It was a normal day for the Doctor when it all started. A Dalek spaceship, near death experiences every five minutes, the usual. That all changes when a slip up ends with him falling through a tear in time and space while regenerating. Now he's trapped in an alien universe full of magic and...ponies. First time for everything right? Now a villain twice defeated is back for an encore and knows a lot about the last Time Lord for a creature who spends the majority of his time trapped in stone. Maybe it has something to do with the gray pegasus who seems to know exactly who he is.
I rated this teen for the more dark themes. Also, this takes place during season 2, just to clear up any confusions regarding the best villain ever. Thanks to my friend Rolona for the awesome cover art. Go check her out on Deviant Art!
Pretty good.
Thanks! You would not believe how hard it was to write the conversation between Twilight and the Doctor. I must have rewritten it at least four times.
DERPY!!!!
2047638 XD how could I do a Doctor Whooves fanfic without her? She's too awesome to be left out!
Prying eye... prayer... The Crying Angels!
This took forever. I almost forgot what the plot from previous chapters was about! Not cool. You're lucky I like this story so much...
Now be a good little pony and UPDATE!!!!!
Ahem. Please.
this is awesome
2296652 Glad you like it!
2297152 the best part is that it has river song and time trouble not yet meeting others
it
2299457 It does sort of have a Riverness about it doesn't it? It won't be anywhere near as dramatic when I tell you why Derpy took a break from traveling as it was when we found out who River was but hopefully it will be just as awesome. Did any of that sentence make sense? Words are confusing sometimes.
2299457 It does sort of have a Riverness about it doesn't it? It won't be anywhere near as dramatic when I tell you why Derpy took a break from traveling as it was when we found out who River was but hopefully it will be just as awesome. Did any of that sentence make sense? Words are confusing sometimes.
2300259 it made as much sense as the show
(not at all confusing by the way)
2300591 Well that's something. Take that random people on the bus! I do make sense! You know, sometimes.
2301887 well Sometimes is good
2304355 Better than all the time. If I made sense all the time life would be boring. Because, you know, what fun is there in making sense?
2306693 none at all of course making sense is just ridicules and silly who would want to do that I mean realy
2309185 That's why Discord is my favorite villain every and people should never drop into my conversations halfway through.
2312205 my favorate villiain too so much chaos its great love everything about him
2312209 He's just such a brilliant villain. He is able to make people unable to fight them withought hurting a hair on their heads or threatening to. Plus, cotton candy clouds. What's not to love?
2320155 oh so very chaotic and fun
2320218 Can you imagine what would happen if he came to the real world? I'm not sure my English teacher would buy the excuse "a god of chaos mistook my homework for a reforming spell and ate it."
2320470 lol
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THIS IS AMAZING! I think the doctor is starting to become Discorded! That'd be horrible for Derpy, since it's kinda obvious she's lovestruck. OOOOO! Maybe she's all like "please come back to me doctor, I love you!" and then he turns brown again and Happily Ever After! Ta-da! Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOOOD!
5711650 Looking back at that comment, I cringed.
I am so sorry about that.
But the main part of my comment still holds true, and I really hope to read more of this soon, so please update?!
This story is excellent, please update! I really enjoy the mix of characters you added in, the dialogue is on point and in character, and it's just over all a great story. Besides, who doesn't love muffin horse and time lord horse? Especially them TOGETHER... (Implying DerpTor, A.K.A. OTP!)