What is love? Baby don't hurt me... Don't hurt me... No more!
--------------------Ponyville---------------------
Applejack pokes the unconscious yet somehow smiling body of the new stallion. "Twi', Ah think you kinda hitted him a might too hard. Because he's out." She said, continueing to poke the body.
"Well, how else was I suppose to react?! He just kissed me! You don't just kiss a pony you never met for no reason! Oh, but I hope I didn't hurt him too much..." Twilight was still trying to understand what the fuck just happened a few moments ago.
"Hmm... No, he's fine. No extra injuries or wounds, amazingly. Just unconscious." The doctor said, as he shines a light through the stallions eye.
After hearing that, Twilight let out a breath that she held for some reason. "Good. When he wakes up, there will be alot of questions that need to be answers from him."
"Darling, please, don't be so angry about this!" Rarity laid a hoof onto Twilight's shoulder.
"Why not? I don't see how you guys are even so calm about this!"
"Didn't you hear him? He said that he looked all over for you in Canterlot, all the way over to here! I find this to be... romantic honestly. I mean, it's not everyday a stallion will go to the ends of the world just to search for a mare from love at first sight!"
"That doesn't mean he was allowed to just kiss me! I don't even know who he is!"
"Well, it seems this young man won't wake up anytime soon, so back to the hospital for him. Nurse? Help me with him please." The doctor said as he levitates the still smiling unconscious body. Nurse Redheart already came back with a bed, and they set him down on it, and pushed him back into the hospital. All the while as the body was somehow STILL smiling.
With the guest of honor gone, the party ended too soon. As all the other ponies decide to get home, only the Mane 6 remained. Although due to the events that just happened, there was an uncomfortable silence.
"So..." Rarity started.
"What?" Twilight asked.
"Well, how was it?"
"How was what?"
"You know. The ... um... kiss?"
Twilight blushed from the reminder. "W-what about the kiss?"
"Well, you know. Was it... good?"
Twilight's blush grew even more. The other girls were looking at her expectantly, like they also wanted to know the answer themselves. "W-why are you asking that?!"
"Well, you should know that today, you just had your first kiss. So we wanted to know, how was it?"
"What makes you think that this was my first kiss? I kissed other ponies before!"
"Twilight, your parents don't count. Neither does your brother." Rainbow said deadpanned.
"... Ugh, alright fine! This is my first kiss! I really feel uncomfortable talking about this!"
"Well darling?"
"Well what?"
"The kiss! How was it?"
Knowing that they won't stop asking until she answers, she groans and thinks about the kiss. "It was... surprising. I guess. He was gentle about it. He didn't push too hard or made it too soft. It felt warm... felt nice and comfortable. I guess I can probably admit that... maybe... it was good... really good..." Twilight starts rubbing her hooves, having to admit something like that.
They all stood there in silence. Each of the others nodded, satisfied of the answer, and went their separate ways. Wishing each other of a pleasant evening.
Twilight still stood there though, looking down on her hooves as they continue rubbing. Alot of things were in her mind, but she was too tired to even want to work them out. She trots of to her home, finding they best way to solve this first, is a good-night sleep. Still, she can't seem to take her mind off of what just happened.
------------Dr. Conner------------
"Research attempt #452. CAN. YOU. UNDERSTAND. ME?!"
The changeling inside the glass cage continues trying to bite the pony's head off, with the only obstacle being the glass wall.
Dr. Conner groans in frustration. This has been going on for hours now. Ever since the discovery of a possible changeling knowing how to communicate, Dr. Conner has been trying to see how changelings evolved so suddenly. Through many attempts to try to get the test subject to speak, it has been going pretty well... EXCEPT FOR THE FACT THE DAMN THING WON'T SPEAK!
"What do I have to do to get you to talk damn it?!" The doctor yells.
The changeling in there, knowing it can't seem to kill the pony, decides step back, lay down and rest.
"Are you hungry or something? Do you need to eat in order to evolve?!" A random idea hits the doctor as he said that. He exits the room, "Don't go anywhere."
Had the changeling been you, you would of rolled your eyes, thinking 'Oh gee, and I was about to go for a damn jog around the castle too.' Sadly, due to the lack of a sentient brain, it only curled up and tried to sleep.
The doctor came back, while holding a small puppy on his wings. "Here! If you speak, I'll let you have the dog."
The changeling just yawned in response.
Dr. Conner's eye was twitching now. "Fine, have it your way. You eat the dog, and THEN speak." The doctor opened the lid and tossed the puppy in there with the changeling.
The changeling just sat there, staring at the small puppy. The puppy walked over to the changeling, and started to lick its face. The changeling, not knowing what to do, just sat there while being licked upon.
"Ok... I guess you don't like to eat dogs then. Oh, you're taste-testing it first? That's a bit weird, but ok... What... what are you doing no- OH DEAR CELESTIA, YOU'RE MATING WITH IT NOW."
-----------Changeling (NO, NOT THE ONE IN THE GLASS.)--------------
Trees... You fucking hate them now. Sweet Chrysalis, there is no words to describe how much you hate trees. Most of your headaches were caused by the fuckers. NEVER. TRUST. A TREE.
You have awoken hours ago, in the middle of the night. You stared at the moon outside of your windows, seeing it surrounded by millions of stars. Why haven't you noticed these beautiful lights in the sky before? Each one of them reminds you about Twilight. Her name... it sounds so beautiful, now that you know her name.
You couldn't go back to sleep. You couldn't stop thinking about her. Now more so than ever. She was constantly on your mind ever since the... first contact with her. You know knew her name, you know that she lives here, and you know that you finally found her. Your mind never stops thinking about her... except the occasional 'MOTHERFUCKING TREES!', it would always linger back to thinking of her.
What is this feeling? This feeling has always showed up when it involves her. It showed up when you first saw her, it showed up whenever you think about her, it showed up and controlled you to kiss her! What is this feeling?! It seems familiar but you just can't put a hoof on it. It feels like something you tasted before... tasted... the only thing you ate before was the love energy of other ponies...
Familiar.
Tasted before.
Love.
Love... you know what the feeling is now... it's love. You love her...
Honestly? Feeling love, its better than eating it.
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i don't know from where that was but
"trying the same thing time and time again, and still expecting different results is the pure diffintion of insanity"
so yeah i think the good doctor has more problems then the mental scars.
Another prof for his insanity is that he tried to feed a dog to the changeling, i mean not even 'Me' does know anything but love as changeling food and 'I' am a changeling -.-
2020443
(/sarcasm) He's insane? WOW! I never noticed before! (/sarcasm)
That was what I was aiming for :P
Insane doctor for amazing jokes and everything.
Because it's all FOR SCIENCE!
My god,I'm throwing a laughing fit because of this chapter!
I can't wait for the next chapter,but what will it hold?Also,does Queen Chrysalis know we are gone?Nah,bet she doesn't even care about us.
2020552
We shall see soon young one...
Soon...
2020589
,I might be better off reviewing stories than writing them!
Yes soon indeed......
Welp I'm gonna go play Black Ops 2 or something,cuz this might not be updated till tomorrow.
And to me,you are doing a great job with this
2020618
Oh you!
W-why? Why would a changeling mate with a bloody dog?!
2020724
I don't know! I'm just the fucking author of this story!
ts4.mm.bing.net/th?id=H.4532067581692291&pid=1.7&w=209&h=152&c=7&rs=1
I can't wait to read the next chapter! But seriously, a changeling mating with a dog... That's enough to scar anyone for life.
2020783
Blame it on the doctor.
His face is still smiling, not body just fyi. It felt weird reading that.
2020820
Honestly, it kinda felt weird to me if I said face instead. I guess it's just our different word fetish.
"you" should be ashamed if your family member fucked a dog.
2021097
Not sentient. "You'll" let it slide.
...have you ever felt the kind of light bulb that pops over your head when you come up with an idea? If yes, then you've probably also experienced the electricity go out as soon as you try to write/type it down.
This occurred to me a few seconds before I typed down the first word for my (no longer) useful comment. I'm only telling you this cause I'm bored out my wits and I've got nothing to do, at least, for now...
2021136
Interesting
2020783 not me seeing as i tryed to do it >.> DONT LOOK AT ME
Alright! I fixed the broken light bulb!
I remember the comment that I was going to make but then forgot, and now that I remember, ima lay this out flatly.
I noticed that Rainbowdash didn't tease Twilight the moment (insert your name here!) Kissed her! I don't know if others have noticed, but Rainbowdash would've definitely tried to rub that embarrassing moment on her friend's face, let alone, laugh her flank off
->
Also, i found sum grammar errors (which I bet you've already noticed) and a sense of need for sum more character development, mostly for the changeling's backstory. Anyways, glad you updated the story, it gave me something to do with a bit of my freetime
-hope to criticise more of you're work,
your #1 fan (not really), Deo
P.S. -I made this look like a letter since it takes you forever to update your story
2021716
Uh... shit... I don't know how to reply to this.
Lol, you don't have to
I'm just thinking what your going to put in the next chapter.I'm also wondering if Dr. Connor will ever recover from the scaring event he saw, and if he will go to Ponyville for...I don't know...Twilight's help?Bet she'll jump with joy to get another assignment from Celestia.
Side note:the internet is bucking with me, pics user have for there avatar won't load,and 17 emoticons just disappeard!
Oh great, now 18 have disappeard...
2022285
Uh... well now...
For the what happens next chapter, you will see soon enough.
For the other problems... eh... I have no idea
2022301
Guess I'll wait.*sits down*
But good news!The Internet isn't bucking me up anymore!
I hope that dog gives birth to beautiful Changling puppies!
That was unexpected, it seems that changeling just discovered a not bad way to get some love from the puppy, but when you think about it, changelings feed from talking ponies, cows talk, buffalo talk, Alicorns move sun and moon on the sky, PinkiePie and Discord exist and break rules of reality, so changeling mating a puppy, seems like day to day normal think to me.
Well sound's like that Doctor is scared for life.
comedy gold my friend, comedy gold
That won it. That won my like.
That immediately got me thinking of "Chairs are made from trees! We're surrounded by potential chairs!"
TREES!!!!! There has to be a pewdiepie reference there
Although due to... recent events/ Although due to everything that just happened
He didn't push too hard or make it too soft.
things were on her mind
You had awoken hours ago/ You awoke hours ago
You now knew her name
I will have my revenge on the trees