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Oh, looks like we are going to be getting some action in here...
OK, I still don't know what direction you're going with this narrative, but I gotta keep reading, it's too intriguing not to read. I gotta know what's going on inside Mac's head. Keep doing what you're doing.
Just dropped everything again to read this chapter. It's way too good not to read.
Chasing illusions into the forest is a bad idea, Mac.
When in doubt, get lost in the forest!
What a triumphant return!!!
Oh my god, Hippocampy is some sort of siren. I'm calling it right now.
The foreshadowing in this story is brilliant!
Also, am I the only one to pick up that Hippocampy gets all touchy feely with Mac only after Rarity mentions settling down with a mare and starting a family?
The perspective and use of specific wording shows Big Mac's confusion, but also gives the reader a sense of unknowing. It feels as though (or, to me, at least) that reading this, we're as lost as Big Mac.