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That seems like a rather vulgar choice of wording for a chapter that otherwise flowed quite well.
MORE!?
Every time I reach the end of a chapter, I get sad... but you've been writing this crazy fast, so I'm not sad nearly as often anymore. This story is spectacular!
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I think there's a very good reason for his choice of wording there; the story isn't over. I think the vulgarity gave good imagery as... I guess I think it's a type of foreshadowing of what the next chapter might bring. (Hint: )
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That's possible, I suppose.
Dude
Nice
Wow! This is some really strong and powerful stuff. While the play format did throw me off at first, I think it allows better expression than standard third person. I picked this up expecting clop and to be honest, kinda wanting it. But this has really made me think, and such a reaction from readers does not come easy.
I've seen this story on the listings ever since it was first posted and always avoided it because the Dark and Sex tags never seem to mix well to me.
Today I finally gave it a chance in a fit of boredom and holy hell I have been missing out, this is one of the best reads I've had in a while. Well done man, I wish I could do even half as good as this.
i call bullshit on the romance...
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I find that the word fuck in exposition provides a certain sincerity to literature.
Hey! Don't slap sick people!