I like this story!

Keep it up.

Finnally an update and what an update, this is one well written Fan Fic, very well done.

This is win, no two ways about it.

...You sir, can have all my internets. I do not need them. Keep up with the awesome writing.

Impressive

so he's a 'no sex before marrige' guy, i respect that.

DAMN!!!1

that was incredible!

even so...... i would have plowed Applejack

Waited a week for this to update...Worth it! Very well written story. Looking forward to how he met the others and got to know them, then see how the story ends. Hope this story updates a little more frequently though

165458 most definitely

i wounder whos next, also i think at the end its gunna end in a huge group 'hug' if you know what i mean.

And I ask this : WHY CANT I BE HIM?!??
Great chapter and I can't wait till next update

I never want this story to end.

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I'm willing to bet with the way he thinks about Dash, he has promised himself his virginity only goes to her.

Such a great story I can't wait for the next update

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You goddamn cocktease.

I like it. Love the writing style and the stories pretty good.

I left you a reveiw on the SFG thread on Ponychan. I'd love to have ya come participate dude!

166353 that is a distinct possibility

GOOD! Finally, a guy I can relate with! XD Can't wait for the next chapter!

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this is fantastic, so well written and real. but its lame you did the whole "Secret Promise"

At first I thought maybe you weren't inta girls-

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Also, this chapter hit me
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I see where this is going. A story about a young man who has help six girls in his life during what could be considered their most desperate time of need, but the one that really needs help is the young man himself. This story... why do I see a reflection of myself and the dreams I have within these paragraphs?

Anyway, life trama aside, I found a few errors.

"No, no... it's just... yer face! I've never seen someone look sp surprised!"

not 'sp', but 'so'

"Just because you work on a farm, or don't where makeup, or dress differently doesn't mean you're any smarter or dumber then anyone else.

'where' should be 'wear'

You can see how badly she's been hurt- and you have to help her."

what is that quotation mark doing there?

I believe I also found some in the first ch. as well, but not many.