Dinky wants to go playing with her new friend, but it falls heavily on her mother. Derpy has always been her first and foremost playmate, but now that's changing.
Dinky wants to go playing with her new friend, but it falls heavily on her mother. Derpy has always been her first and foremost playmate, but now that's changing.
SO MOTHFUCKING CUTE
Aww what a nice story, simple and effective. Nicely done!
It gets distracting having the dialogue in italics, on the other hand it is overshadowed by such a sweet story.
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My apologies, I thought it would make it easier to read than the other stories. Do you have a better way of making dialogue stand out?
1746307 Why should it need to stand out? Just have it be normal.
1749220 I don't know. I think it's actually better readable if the dialogue stands out a bit. Anyway, thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.
1749687 Well the way it is now it looks just awful. It would be far better to read if it were in fact normal.