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The Temp

Derpy Hooves gets a strange affliction that leads to her daughter and best friend taking over her job for a day.

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DreadedCandiru2

DreadedCandiru2 #1 · May 17th, 2012 · · ·

Well, this is cute enough. Still, I wish that her plumage would have grown out again.

Bronzedragon

Bronzedragon #2 · May 17th, 2012 · · ·

Aw come on, this needs at least two more chapters. This is one of the best treatments of Ditzy I've seen.

Besides I think Ditzy in a garden has so many possibilities.

DutchGentleman

DutchGentleman #3 · May 21st, 2012 · · ·

607504 (DreadedCandiru2)

I actually thought of it as a temporary solution, until it all grows back indeed. Glad you liked it!

DutchGentleman

DutchGentleman #4 · May 21st, 2012 · · ·

607881 (Bronzedragon)

Actually, I have a few other ideas for stories in my head, but it will be a while before I put them up here. I mostly work on them while in the train.
I will be happy to announce that at least one of them has copious amounts of Ditzy/Derpy in it, and the other has more of Dinky in it.

That garden idea is a good one too, ever since I started typing this I've been getting ideas for it, thank you!

insanedr4gon

insanedr4gon #5 · May 30th, 2012 · · ·

This is one of the best Dinky stories I've read. You really did her justice by writing this. Your grammar could use a bit of help, and the beginning was a little foggy (pun intended), but this was one of the best stories I've read in a while. I especially love the 'society collapsing' bits, laughed my ass off at those.