Slavery, racism, oppression Equestria was founded on these principles. The tyrant of the sun refuses to do nothing whilst the males of her ponies are beaten. I wont stand for this change is coming be it peacefully, or forcefully
Just like Whorelestia.to have him whipped for standing up to BlueDick. Equestria here is exactly like the middle-ages when nobles had all the power and got away with whatever they wanted. Basically Whorelestia, BlueDick and Luna are above the law. If BlueDick had raped Florenza absolutely nothing would have been done since technically you couldn't charge him with anything cause the law doesn't apply to him.
im curious if we might get a slight explanation as to why lach is so tough, blood loss alone would have killed a human let alone the crazy amount of pain. the heart would simply stop. i think i like this version of your "scent" universe much more.
3024443 You will, there is a trial experiment I want to try. You see humans like any animal can die from blood loss. The injuries he received would have killed him easily if he was still on earth. With equestria the human now has magic that unlike most unicorns is mostly used to keep him alive. the horrific injuries he received were slowly healing with each swing preventing the human from dying.
His magic runs differently from normal ponies so the black rose the whip that prevents normal unicorns from healing themselves is useless against his. Each time an artery or vain was struck it healed in seconds only allowing small bursts of blood out before the process repeated this is how he did not bleed out.
3024372 I agree with you on that. Lachan should Falcon Punch Celestia right in her bitch ass face! Blueblood deserves to be castrated so that he doesnt bear any bastard children.
ok but why would celestia risk her only apparent means of reproducing to sorta rebuild the alicorn race? seems kinda foolish that she would risk that to satisfy a regular unicorn like blueblood; who i assume is really not all that magically gifted or physically trained, just royalty so no one fights back.
3024519 I just wanted to ask that when you went in to description about the visible bones you could see through the wounds we are talking about the spine and ribs or just the spine
Is Lachlan so tough and was able to shoot lightning because nightmares power wasn't completely destroyed like they thought but instead separated from Luna and it seeped its way to his previous raped body that held a little of nightmare moon blood from her forcing her virginity and magic on him?
3024707 ...How could you not have? It's one of the best games of... 2010 or 2011... I don't really know when it came out but, YOU MUST PLAY IT!! (and Infamous 2, I think 2 is better than the first)
good chapter. also i think a good twist would be if Luna's child was Nightmare Moon reincarnated(with or without memory is up to you) but if not it is still a really good story. keep up the good work
3024656>>3024659here here my good friendsits planing time i says that thou haveth the right to stelthfully kill the coward bluebloodgreat chapteri would love to read MOAR!!!please
3024567 Gordon Freeman, Spartans Is, IIs and IIIs, Jack Bauer, Dusty, Mother, Panther, Voodoo, Stump, Rabbit, Sandman, Truck, Grinch, Price, Soap, Artyom, Dog, Barney Calhoun, Connor Kenway, Jason Bourne, Bryan Mills, Aaron Cross, Bob Lee Swagger, Hoot (BHD), Thor, Hal moore, etc.
3024776 Let me guess, he was talking about how it reminded them of Infamous even though they haven't played/heard of it? I had the complete edition, including all the DLC's and both games. (INfamous 1 & 2)
umm maybe well no its not going to be affective build a time machine or borrow the doctors and go back in time and get the red army or at least their weapons. a bit more reliable and accurate in my opinion
Blueblood walked down the hall with his pompous head high in the air as he walked to his room after a wondeful dinner with his aunties. He smirked as his mind drifted back to the ugly peasant who had dared try and keep him from what he wanted. He let out a chuckle as he recalled the pained screams the scum let out as he was lashed for his insolence. Personally, he thought wasn't enough, one-hundred would have sufficed, although even he had limits when it came to his aunties. He thought back to the two worthless mares the stallion had tried to shield, and let out a low hiss as his lost chance. But no matter, he had men looking for them, and he had also given out orders to kill that worthless colt should they find him. He would get those mares, and oh how he would break them. He would rut them until they would hang off his elbows, and then sat them off with the rest of the common filth. Blueblood stopped his inner monologue as he reached his room. He confidently walked into the room, ignoring the two guards that stood by his door. His room reeked of his standing over the trash, a large king sized bed sat at the end of his room with his oh so beautiful portrait hanging above the bed. He smirked before disrobing into a soft bath-robe and laid down into his bed, letting the blankets and pillows adjust to him as he let out a contented sigh as he sagged into his bed. It was truly taxing to be this amazing, and rule the trash that dared come to him. Blueblood sighed as he succumbed to sleep, dreams of desperate mares and a screaming colt filled his min as he slept on with a smile, unaware of the happenings happening inside his room at that very room.
3025258 Oh, ok. I'll bring them just in case. You never know, we may need a god to fight a god.(also, Sonic taught me how to use them) Speaking of gods, I think I can get a hold of Kratos. Can he help?
ill summon the dark brotherhood "sweet mother sweet mother send your child unto me for my sins unworthy must be baptized in blood and fear" alrighty there we go they will be a back up plan by the way has anybody seen the guys from payday the heist I think im going to need them to
3024621 Because the whip aptly named the black rose is a disgusting weapon that is designed to make the chance of death or passing out nearly impossible so that the victim can live with the agonising pain.
the resistance is growing...hehehe AHAHA HAHAH!
so...will he slip bluebloods own head on the pillow next to him as a warning??
oh....he got rainbow dash on his side....shit's getting serious~
Damn...
I don't usually read grimdark HiE's... but when I do... I get freaked the fuck out at the "punishment" the human gets O.O
Hell, even that doesn't do it justice.
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Ugh, I really hate the injustice of it all... I really do.
Just like Whorelestia.to have him whipped for standing up to BlueDick. Equestria here is exactly like the middle-ages when nobles had all the power and got away with whatever they wanted. Basically Whorelestia, BlueDick and Luna are above the law. If BlueDick had raped Florenza absolutely nothing would have been done since technically you couldn't charge him with anything cause the law doesn't apply to him.
I can't wait for the payback!
I can honestly say that Celestia is more evil than Nightmare Moon.
screw the Celstia diying first Blue balls I am coing after you with a FLAING FUCKEN CHAINSAW IN ASURA BEAST MODE BITCH!!!
Dayum son
Down With the Whore Sun Tyrant Celestia!
And Blueblood can go fuck himself with a electric motor drill...
Reminds me of Chidori xD
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im curious if we might get a slight explanation as to why lach is so tough, blood loss alone would have killed a human let alone the crazy amount of pain. the heart would simply stop. i think i like this version of your "scent" universe much more.
Does Lachlan posses the 'Will of D"? I sure hope he does!
oh dear god, I just devoured this chapter and I want moar!!! I can't wait to see the fallout of this I'm so exited!!
3024443 You will, there is a trial experiment I want to try. You see humans like any animal can die from blood loss. The injuries he received would have killed him easily if he was still on earth. With equestria the human now has magic that unlike most unicorns is mostly used to keep him alive. the horrific injuries he received were slowly healing with each swing preventing the human from dying.
His magic runs differently from normal ponies so the black rose the whip that prevents normal unicorns from healing themselves is useless against his. Each time an artery or vain was struck it healed in seconds only allowing small bursts of blood out before the process repeated this is how he did not bleed out.
3024372
I agree with you on that. Lachan should Falcon Punch Celestia right in her bitch ass face! Blueblood deserves to be castrated so that he doesnt bear any bastard children.
3024298
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3024388 I was thinking more on the lines of Cole Mcgrath from Infamous.
3024519
ok but why would celestia risk her only apparent means of reproducing to sorta rebuild the alicorn race? seems kinda foolish that she would risk that to satisfy a regular unicorn like blueblood; who i assume is really not all that magically gifted or physically trained, just royalty so no one fights back.
FUCKING BLUEBLOOD BETTER BE THE FIRST TO GO I SWEAR TO GOD. HE. MUST. DIE. DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME!?
Welp, better start sharping the blade of the Guillotine. Viva la Revolucion!
3024519
I just wanted to ask that when you went in to description about the visible bones you could see through the wounds we are talking about the spine and ribs or just the spine
3024571 Haven't played it Though I would like to
3024656 I support this
Is Lachlan so tough and was able to shoot lightning because nightmares power wasn't completely destroyed like they thought but instead separated from Luna and it seeped its way to his previous raped body that held a little of nightmare moon blood from her forcing her virginity and magic on him?
3024707 ...How could you not have? It's one of the best games of... 2010 or 2011... I don't really know when it came out but, YOU MUST PLAY IT!! (and Infamous 2, I think 2 is better than the first)
3024656 So let it be written, so let it be done.
good chapter. also i think a good twist would be if Luna's child was Nightmare Moon reincarnated(with or without memory is up to you) but if not it is still a really good story. keep up the good work
3024567 I call Chuck Norris.
3024776 I will have to borrow it off a friend or something, can't afford nice things I'm sure it's a great game, sounds pretty awesome
Blueblood must die a inglorious death, full of humiliation and shame.
3024793
that's good but we need foldable weapons that they can hide in case they might run out of visible weapons also we need mini portable cannons
3024656>>3024659here here my good friendsits planing time i says that thou haveth the right to stelthfully kill the coward bluebloodgreat chapteri would love to read MOAR!!!please
I looked and behold a pale horse and the name that sat on it, was death. And hell followed with it.
3024567 Gordon Freeman, Spartans Is, IIs and IIIs, Jack Bauer, Dusty, Mother, Panther, Voodoo, Stump, Rabbit, Sandman, Truck, Grinch, Price, Soap, Artyom, Dog, Barney Calhoun, Connor Kenway, Jason Bourne, Bryan Mills, Aaron Cross, Bob Lee Swagger, Hoot (BHD), Thor, Hal moore, etc.
3024948 I think I can get us the Chaos Emeralds. Will they help?
I want a revenge scene where Lach uses the same whip on Blue Balls and that bitch that did that to him
DOWN WITH THE TYRANT SUN!
3024776 Let me guess, he was talking about how it reminded them of Infamous even though they haven't played/heard of it?
I had the complete edition, including all the DLC's and both games. (INfamous 1 & 2)
3025081
umm maybe well no its not going to be affective build a time machine or borrow the doctors and go back in time and get the red army or at least their weapons. a bit more reliable and accurate in my opinion
Blueblood walked down the hall with his pompous head high in the air as he walked to his room after a wondeful dinner with his aunties.
He smirked as his mind drifted back to the ugly peasant who had dared try and keep him from what he wanted. He let out a chuckle as he recalled the pained screams the scum let out as he was lashed for his insolence. Personally, he thought wasn't enough, one-hundred would have sufficed, although even he had limits when it came to his aunties.
He thought back to the two worthless mares the stallion had tried to shield, and let out a low hiss as his lost chance. But no matter, he had men looking for them, and he had also given out orders to kill that worthless colt should they find him. He would get those mares, and oh how he would break them. He would rut them until they would hang off his elbows, and then sat them off with the rest of the common filth.
Blueblood stopped his inner monologue as he reached his room. He confidently walked into the room, ignoring the two guards that stood by his door. His room reeked of his standing over the trash, a large king sized bed sat at the end of his room with his oh so beautiful portrait hanging above the bed. He smirked before disrobing into a soft bath-robe and laid down into his bed, letting the blankets and pillows adjust to him as he let out a contented sigh as he sagged into his bed. It was truly taxing to be this amazing, and rule the trash that dared come to him.
Blueblood sighed as he succumbed to sleep, dreams of desperate mares and a screaming colt filled his min as he slept on with a smile, unaware of the happenings happening inside his room at that very room.
I hope Twilight helps him more.
Celestia is a bitch.
Luna is ungrateful.
Also Gilda where are you?!?!
3025258 Oh, ok. I'll bring them just in case. You never know, we may need a god to fight a god.(also, Sonic taught me how to use them) Speaking of gods, I think I can get a hold of Kratos. Can he help?
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RISE UP AND FIGHT COMRADES.
FOR THIS DAY WE SHALL CAST DOWN THE FASCIST RULER CELESTIA .
FOR LACHLAN FOR THE MOTHERLAND.
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3025466
you know what get kratos, deimos, and dante from dantes inferno to we will take down the celestial supremecy
3025527
you mean for equal stallion rights right
ill summon the dark brotherhood "sweet mother sweet mother send your child unto me for my sins unworthy must be baptized in blood and fear" alrighty there we go they will be a back up plan by the way has anybody seen the guys from payday the heist I think im going to need them to
3024621 Because the whip aptly named the black rose is a disgusting weapon that is designed to make the chance of death or passing out nearly impossible so that the victim can live with the agonising pain.
3025823
uhh why does thou have a fowl on there head
3025783
You should get Alex Mercer and Cole McGrath.
3026103
oh hell yes your on something now colleague message to all who wants to help the poor soul join the revolution
KILL THE 4 BITCHES. LUNA CELESTIA BLUE BLOOD AND THE WHIPPER.
3024571 I was thinking of the Con Dar or Skrim bone charm from the Sword of Truth books
I say we let Lachlan have a street fight with Blueblood and with Mortal Kombat rules.