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If you lose everything and the world didn't give a crap about you, would you end it all? What would you see on the other side if their even was one? Would the things that you did even count? Why don't you find out.

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Riften Guard

Riften Guard #1 · Nov 24th, 2012 · · ·

I like how no one commented

Lucas

Lucas #2 · Nov 24th, 2012 · · ·

It is well... confusing. I sometimes see it from a human perspective, then change to a pony's. Misspelling was not uncommon, even though; It was easy to ignore. Especially considering the interest you gain from just reading a few lines. Still though I can't tell what is speaking, Wings one moment, Hands the next.

Altogether though, very interesting concept.

GoldonSparow

GoldonSparow #3 · Nov 27th, 2012 · · ·

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Sorry about the misspelling my grammar is crap.. And anyways he has wings, but they get sawed off cause they cant be saved. And sorry about changing things around a few times my brain was gone in thirty minutes. Also thanks.

GoldonSparow